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#261 Recompense

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Posted 27 February 2008 - 05:36 AM

GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!

RECOMPENSE WRITE!!!!

The van door slammed shut. The four men stood out in the crisply frigid Winter air. a fifth came around to join them, after killing the engine’s rumble. The five stood in silent argument, fingers were pointed, directions and orders given. And as one, the five turned to face the Five Story building in front of them.

Meanwhile, on the roof of the five-story building…

“Amateurs. Five directly in front. Possible reinforcements. Even if this is just an investigation, I recommend we pull back to HQ for now.”

The red-eyed Cybernetically enhanced soldier, Uchiha Sasuke, Combat Number 28, Shifted his rifle in his hands, there was no scope. There was no need for a scope on any weapon he ever handled.

“Taking the shot.”

-On the street-

The first three fell without even realizing it. The back of their heads simply evaporated into a red mist. Chunks of bone and brain sprayed onto the shirt of the fourth man, who dove for the shelter of a car. His legs had been blown off before he could reach. a third bullet found its mark in his spine. The Fifth man drew an automatic from his trench coat. He managed to unleash a spray in the general direction of his assailant. Unfortunately, against a soldier as precise as Uchiha Sasuke, ‘general direction’ is about as useful as a roll of electric tape is for stopping a meteorite.

However, what Sasuke hadn’t known was the Sixth man. Sitting in the van. as the Monitors in front of him fuzzed out one by one, his smile grew wider and wider.

“We found them. The Kyuubi’s here.”

-On The Roof-

"Hn. All enemy Contacts eliminated. Reccomend full retreat to main base."

"Negative, Number 28. The Fox isn't fit for travel at this time, maintain watch."

"Affirmative. 28 Out."



Blah. More on Naruto next time. Just felt like getting Sasuke in thar.

EDIT IS RIGHT HERE!! ---> I guess Poor Derock and Wilson got confused as to which side Sasuke is on. He's helping Naruto... . . . for now...

OH! Three guesses as to whose in the next drabble!

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Or....

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Edited by Recompense, 28 February 2008 - 12:09 AM.

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Posted 27 February 2008 - 05:52 AM

The hell? Sasuke's gonna assassinate Naruto?

Dude... MOAR!!!! rawr.gif wow.png

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Posted 27 February 2008 - 07:16 AM

Lol, Recomp, combine all the drabbles into one LONG AS fic. Kill all your readers with teh angst level, and overrun them with ur skill. XDDDDD

Though I'm quite confused here, Sasuke...erm...having the guts to kill Naruto? FINALLY?! OM GOSH! tongue.gif
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Posted 29 February 2008 - 04:57 AM

Okay, due to popular demand from the Live Chat gang, I've decided to post a drabble...

Now then, without further wait...

Denim88's drabble #1

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Naruto got up from the ground, and immediately detected the smell of smoke and death in his nostrils. He slowly got up, and felt his stomach burn with pain. He looked down onto his bare chest, and noticed the seal on his stomach glowing...

"Wha...what happened?" he asked himself. He rubbed his head, and tried to think.

'Baa-chan...fighting Akatsuki...Ero-sennin...killed by Pein...wait, that's it! I was fighting Pein!!!!'

He got up slowly, and immediately collapsed, "Gah, crap, why do I hurt so badly?" He decided to let himself get his strength back before he would go and move about. He looked around, and his jaw went slack as he stared at what was once the mighty forest surrounding Konoha's Main Gate. The trees were gone...the grass was all just ash now. The smell of burning flesh hung in the air...and one thought came to his mind.

'I did this...I did all of this...' He took in a shuddering breath, and forced himself to stand. He wobbled a bit, but looked around. His pants were ripped to shreds around his ankles and calves, and his hitai-ite was missing. He felt his bare feet walk across the ashen ground, and he felt a sudden chill run down his spine.

"Where is everyone?" he wondered. He looked towards the Hidden Leaf Village, and gasped. There stood what was once the great and mighty walls surrounding Konohagakure. Now...it was nothing more than a pile of rubble and smoke.

'Oh no...no, please tell me this is just a horrible dream...' Naruto felt his heart beat quickening.

He slowly walked amongst the smoky terrain, and coughed a bit as he let the sulfuric fumes fill his lungs, "Dang it...where is everyone???"

Naruto stopped when he suddenly heard something. He listened intently...

...breathing...shallow, quick, breaths.

He followed the sound, and stopped when he reached a fallen tree. He looked behind the massive tree, and as he looked upon the source of the noise, he felt his heart stop for a brief second.

"No..."

Naruto fell on his knees, and looked down on the last person he wanted to see in this predicament.

"No...please...no..."

Naruto looked at the pink, messy hair that was caked in blood and dirt. He saw the green eyes, still vibrant as ever, look at him. Slowly, a smile formed on her face, and she let a tear fall from her eyes, "...'aruto..."

"Shh, don't talk, Sakura-chan..." he forced down a shuddering breath, "...I'm going to get help."

He was about to get up when he felt her grab his arm, albeit very weakly. He looked to see her shaking her head. She moved an arm from her abdomen, and Naruto felt hot, bitter tears form almost immediately as he saw the wet, bloody stain covering much of Sakura's chest and mid-section.

"Sakura-chan...I'm sor-"

She shook her head, "It's okay...I never would blame you...for...hurting me...when it...wasn't your fault..."

Naruto slowly, tenderly picked up the girl that he had always loved and cradled her, "Sakura-chan...don't leave me...please...I couldn't stand living with-"

The pink-haired girl put a hand on his lips, "Don't worry...I'll never leave you..." she placed a hand over the left part of his chest, right over his heart, "...this is where I'll be..."

Naruto was crying now, " Why did I have to do this? Why?"

Sakura closed her eyes for a second, and listened to the beating of Naruto's powerful heart...the same heart that she had fallen for and had promised to care for...

"Naruto...don't blame yourself..." she said quietly, even weaker than before. Naruto felt her lifeforce starting to slip, "I want you to grow up...happy, and without...pain..." she smiled as she saw him try to smile. She wrapped an arm around him, "Naruto...can I tell you something?"

Naruto nodded quietly, not trusting his voice, "Of course..."

She let a few tears fall, "These past few months have been hard on both of us...but they were some of the best times of my life..." she looked up to him, and gripped his arms tightly, "...you want to know why?"

He nodded, and then she coughed up some blood. He bit his bottom lip, knowing she was slipping away from him now.

"The reason why...these past few months have been so wonderful...was because...I finally got to spend time with you again after those two and a half years of waiting...and I found out something...as well..."

Naruto was trembling, "What did you find out...Sakura-chan?"

Sakura gave him a sad smile, "I found...out that...I...I..."

"What?"

"...that...I love..." she coughed a bit more, "...you..."

Naruto shook his head, "Sakura-chan, no! Stay with me, please!"

"Naruto...shhh...." she said, touching his arm gently, "Can you do something for me?"

Naruto nodded, and she continued, "Kiss me...and hold me like this..."

Naruto cried a bit more, "Sakura-chan..."

She slowly cupped his cheek with a hand, and he leaned down. Naruto and her slowly touched lips, and Naruto felt a warm glow flow through him. It was everything he had imagined...but why did it have to come to this?

As Sakura felt the darkness creeping into her vision, she felt a sense of joy spread through her, 'Naruto...in the end...I guess you and I both found the one we were looking for...I only wish that you and I could have admitted the way I felt for you sooner...' With a final breath, Sakura Haruno closed her eyes one last time, still smiling slightly as she did so.

Naruto's tears spilled down his cheeks as Sakura went limp in his arms. He sobbed, and gripped Sakura's hands tightly, hoping that maybe it was just a nightmare, or that Sakura would come back to him and bop him on the head for holding her the way he was.

"Sakura-chan..." he sobbed, and felt his throat tighten as the tears began falling. He felt a tightening in his chest, and he gripped the pink fabric of the kunoichi's shirt, "SAKURA-CHAN!!!!!!!!"

The empty void was all that answered his cry, and he drooped in despair. Was everyone dead? Why?

"WHY?!!" Narut screamed to the silence. Again no reply.

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Konohagakure was almost completely destroyed in the aftershock of Naruto releasing the fifth tail of the Kyuubi. The rest of the damage followed afterwards as he fought Pein with a blind rage. Naruto had all but given himself over to the Kyuubi as it promised the swift and painful death of Pein, which ended up happening in the end. However, a lot of of people died as a result. Naruto only remembered blips of it...he never recalled hurting Sakura though.

"Hey, Fox..." Naruto called out into the mindscape that was the sealed cage within the sewers of the seal that held the Kyuubi inside him. Silence...

"Hey, Fox!!!! Answer me!!!!" Naruto roared to the darkness, and a low growl was heard.

"What is it, now, Naruto?" the fox asked. Naruto still didn't like the fact that the fox used his name now. He shook his head, and tightened his fists.

"Who all died because of you?" Naruto questioned, and the sneer from behind the bars of the cage did nothing to calm him down.

"Heheheh...I don't think that matters...there's hardly any bodies left to bury." the fox laughed louder, and Naruto walked right up to the cage.

"Listen, you cursed fox, and listen well! I lost the most precious person in my entire life, and now I'm not even sure if there's anyone around that I can help! Now, answer me! Is there anyone left that's alive from our fight with Pein?!" he slammed his fists against the bars, and the sound of their impact echoed throughout the chamber.

"You already know the answer..." the nine-tailed Bijuu spoke, a wicked grin on his face. Before Naruto could say anything further, everything went black.

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Naruto stood on a small hill outside of the wreckage of Konohagakure's ruins. A small marker was on the hill, and some fresh dirt was holding it in place. Naruto stood there, smiling sadly, "Sakura-chan...I really don't know what's left for me now. You're gone...Baa-chan's gone...Shizune...Ero-sennin...Kakashi-sensei...Yamato, Sai...and all of our friends..." Naruto sighed, "I really just want to give up...but I can't. You wanted me to be happy...and without pain..."

Naruto laughed, a bitter, sad laugh, "I don't think that's possible...but for you...I'll try. I'll never love another like I did you, Sakura-chan...I may never love again...but I promise you...I'll live on until my death finally takes me...goodbye...Sakura-chan."

Naruto got up from the makeshift grave, surrounded by about a dozen others of shinobi he knew and didn't know, but buried anyway. He was all that was left. He didn't want to stay and wait for those returning from missions to find their home completely destroyed. He slowly got up, and faced towards the setting sun. He nodded, and with a said smile, went off towards the horizon. The familiar pink hue in the sunset brought up the face of a beautiful girl he had loved for almost his entire life. He wiped away one last tear, and continued his trek towards nowhere in particular.

He was alone...but the memories he carried of days past would live with him for the rest of his life.




Well...that was angsty...don't think I'll do another one like this...but I just thought I'd get that out of me...

Edited by Denim88, 29 February 2008 - 04:58 AM.


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#265 Recompense

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 07:01 AM

Denim. You did me proud.

Well done.

Oh!
And i offer a cookie to anyone who can spot where i got the technical names in this drabble from.



“Fire on the third floor. I repeat, Fire on the third floor.”

Naruto was being led along by the hand, another damn doctor. This one was taller than the last, and his hands were the size of a gorilla.

“What the hell is going on?”

The doctor barely looked back.

“They found us. We’re getting the hell out. Simple, donchta think?”

Suddenly, a static intercom sprang to life throughout the building. Naruto jumped, startled at the voice that came from all around.

“All Normal pilots, report to your units. All infantry and personnel, report to your MT units. Uzumaki Naruto and all members of the Kyuubi project, report at the garage.“

Naruto understood roughly half of that. The Kyuubi and infantry parts? yes. But what the HELL was an MT? what was a pilot?

“C’mon, we got a ways to go.”

“Oi! Leggo!”

Naruto struggled, and in that moment, he realized his new found strength. The doctor’s grip was tight. Extremely tight. Tight enough that he stayed latched on as Naruto dislocated the poor man’s arm.

“Naruto! C’mon! We need to go!”

Naruto looked up, he knew that voice. That was the voice he worshipped, the voice he loved. It chimed out in the midst of the hellish confusion of automatic gunfire like a bell. And then it was back to reality.

“Naruto! C’mon! We need to get out of here!”

Once more, he was being led by the hand. But this time it was by a beautiful woman he was deeply attracted to, so it wasn’t ALL bad.

She came up to an elevator. He’d seen one of these in Headqu… The Hokage’s tower. Definitely the Hokage’s tower. She slammed her hand against the ‘down’ button.

The doors closed. She surveyed him coldly.

“Do you remember who I am?”

He was more than mildly surprised, why the hell wouldn’t he remember his Sakura-chan? They WERE marri-

They were Married.

they…

He….

What if being a ninja Really DIDN’T happen?

“Oi! Naruto! Naruto!”

The world went black.


Yeah. The mindf*** is coming next Drabble.

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EDIT: *Ahem* After re-reading this thing again... i apologize for it's brevity and rushedness. I'm just trying to move the plot along. If i wrote out the REAL drabble without some explanation... You'd all hate me.

Hate me FOREVER.

Edited by Recompense, 29 February 2008 - 07:03 AM.

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 07:12 AM

Uh oh, do I sense another potential angst writer? tongue.gif

Gd drabbles you two. Of course, the NS parts are cool enough to overcome the angst. narusakuct7.gif
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Posted 29 February 2008 - 05:18 PM

QUOTE (Recompense @ Feb 29 2008, 02:08 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Denim. You did me proud.

Well done.

Oh!
And i offer a cookie to anyone who can spot where i got the technical names in this drabble from.



“Fire on the third floor. I repeat, Fire on the third floor.”

Naruto was being led along by the hand, another damn doctor. This one was taller than the last, and his hands were the size of a gorilla.

“What the hell is going on?”

The doctor barely looked back.

“They found us. We’re getting the hell out. Simple, donchta think?”

Suddenly, a static intercom sprang to life throughout the building. Naruto jumped, startled at the voice that came from all around.

“All Normal pilots, report to your units. All infantry and personnel, report to your MT units. Uzumaki Naruto and all members of the Kyuubi project, report at the garage.“

Naruto understood roughly half of that. The Kyuubi and infantry parts? yes. But what the HELL was an MT? what was a pilot?

“C’mon, we got a ways to go.”

“Oi! Leggo!”

Naruto struggled, and in that moment, he realized his new found strength. The doctor’s grip was tight. Extremely tight. Tight enough that he stayed latched on as Naruto dislocated the poor man’s arm.

“Naruto! C’mon! We need to go!”

Naruto looked up, he knew that voice. That was the voice he worshipped, the voice he loved. It chimed out in the midst of the hellish confusion of automatic gunfire like a bell. And then it was back to reality.

“Naruto! C’mon! We need to get out of here!”

Once more, he was being led by the hand. But this time it was by a beautiful woman he was deeply attracted to, so it wasn’t ALL bad.

She came up to an elevator. He’d seen one of these in Headqu… The Hokage’s tower. Definitely the Hokage’s tower. She slammed her hand against the ‘down’ button.

The doors closed. She surveyed him coldly.

“Do you remember who I am?”

He was more than mildly surprised, why the hell wouldn’t he remember his Sakura-chan? They WERE marri-

They were Married.

they…

He….

What if being a ninja Really DIDN’T happen?

“Oi! Naruto! Naruto!”

The world went black.


Yeah. The mindf*** is coming next Drabble.

Aren't views on Reality FUN!? wow.png

EDIT: *Ahem* After re-reading this thing again... i apologize for it's brevity and rushedness. I'm just trying to move the plot along. If i wrote out the REAL drabble without some explanation... You'd all hate me.

Hate me FOREVER.


...Oh man, my head hurts...Compy, just what are you compiling together this time? LOL, well, I guess I'll have to wait and see...

Gimme a break, 'kay?

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Posted 01 March 2008 - 01:25 AM

recompe thats scary your in my head like that. I play Mutants and Masterminds and am active on the forums there. One of my ideas that im currently working on for character conversions is an Iron Age style elite team using the rookie 9 and team guy as black ops style teenagers with special powers. thats just crazy =@_@=
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Posted 01 March 2008 - 05:21 AM

hmm excelent job, recomp

now MT, sounds like Armored Core, is that where ya getting your designations and such from?
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Posted 02 March 2008 - 06:52 AM

Goddamnit Jim.

Nice Guess.

*gives Cookie of POWA!!*


Beep.

Beep.

Beep.

Beep.

His eyes fluttered open, slowly bringing his mind into awareness of the peculiar situation. He was in a cramped Box. Directly in front of him was what at fist seemed to be a window, gazing out across a vast sea of sand. But upon close inspection, there were lines, and when he examined extremely closely, there was a sense of falsehood. This was a screen, not a window.

“Naruto, glad to see you’re finally awake.”

That was Sakura-chan’s voice. Ok. He was in a metal box with a big Screen. He was wearing some kind of rubber suit… we’ll deal with that later… and he was TOTALLY not gonna freak out. Nope. Just gonna respond nice and smooth.

“WHAT THE kitten IS GOING ON HERE!!??”

Ok. Not so cool. That worked to.

“Well, Your father DID say that your memories might come back if we shoved you right back into the fold.”

Her explanation was lost on him. All he heard was ‘Father’. He had a father? A FATHER!?

“Where is he?”

it was not spoken as a question. It was demanded of her.

Unseen by the Blond, but on the other side of a very large piece of land, A certain Pink-Haired Engineer smirked.

“Why Don’t you turn around? He is right behind you, you know.”

He smiled. Right behind him? Easy. all he had to do was…. move… the screen.

. . .

. . .

ok. not getting anywhere. Move! Move! Turn! TURN AROUND!

for ten minutes he sat there, silently screaming. Until suddenly, it happened. His mind opened. it was shocking. and painful, but his mind simply… became one. He could suddenly feel it. This otherness.

-At the Command Center-

“Record Time, Mrs. Uzumaki. Ten Minutes to 30% Synchronization. That’s approximately 200% the Average Synchronization of the Heavy Variety of Normal.”

Sakura barely glanced at the nameless aid.

“I am well aware of My Husband’s excellence in all matters concerning his Next. What I am concerned about is the fact he’s discovered the Boosters.”

-Meanwhile, Back with Naruto and his eight-Story Tall flying mech of Doom-

“HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLYYYY SHIIIIIIIIT!!!!”

The Next was flying through the air. Over a thousand feet and counting. and that’s when Naruto started turning once again.

“OH SWEET MOTHER OF ALL THAT IS GOOD! HOW DO I STOP!!??”

His machine was not just plummeting. His engines were pointing down. He was moving faster than his terminal velocity. Which is scientifically impossible on MANY levels.

“SAKURA-CHAN!! HELP!!”

and that’s when she clicked the receiver back on.

“Figure it out yourself. You’re a big boy.”

-Two Days later-

“So, how’s his progress with the Next?”

The brown haired-man stood at the tallest tower of the Mobile HQ. He looked out across a vast desert, where he could spy the Experimental weapon, piloted by an Experimental Pilot.

“Well, he’s progressed Far quicker than any of us thought. If we’re lucky, he might be ready for the tournament.”

He glanced over at the once-Blonde woman. Wrinkles spread throughout her face like spiderwebs, she was old. She shouldn’t be watching men die for profit. She should be at home, Babbling on to her grand-kids about what the old days were like. But her Grand-kids were dead, weren’t they? And she’d never been one to face her past.
“Tsunade, You know I’m worried about him. We don’t know what happened out there.”

The woman frowned, Hiding her mouth behind her interlaced fingers. She surveyed the Massive Orange Behemoth as is glided across the desert-scape. Performing menial Tasks that even the simplest Next Pilot knew how to perform. That THE Uzumaki had fallen this far…

“He was our Ace in the hole. The only Succesful Experimental Pilot AND experimental machine.”

The Brown-Haired Man nodded. His son had volunteered at a Young age. His Next had incorporated a completely revolutionary FRS, AMS, and ACS. Those three things that separated the Next from the Normal, And Uzumaki piloted a machine that broke all previous boundaries.

“I am aware of the Situation, Tsu. Will he be ready for the tournament?”

The woman sighed.

“Yes. We have three weeks. He will be ready, Mikiyasu.”


*Ahem* For the Record, Next= New Age Mech, far superior to Normals in every way.

Normals= Regular old mechs.

MTs= Anything not a mech. Planes, Tanks, Very small rocks...

AMS= Piloting system that seperates Next and Normal pilots. Only people with an in-born psychic Trait can be a pilot for a Next.

ACS= The Super Advanced Piloting system. In this story, there are no handles, or buttons. The Pilot becomes one with the machine.

FRS= Fractional Regulation system. Pretty much refines the ACS. Let's the pilot be more precise in their movements.

So pretty much, Naruto can Really fuse with his Next. and his Next also has unique abilities i may or may not tell you about. Ja ne!
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#271 Recompense

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 07:44 AM

Hmmmf. Seeing as the Mech Drabbles are prolly confusing. And completely unrelated to what i originally planned out... and since they're becoming a crossover... They're dead nao. Buh-bye. Like a failed abortion of a monster not meant for this world, they shall crawl into a corner and die a slow and miserable death.

*ahem* moving on...

I'm trying something new. It's called Darkening the story without Character Death.

Interesting, ne?

and this is the only Titled Drabble evar.

Broken Promises

“YOU kitten!!”

The spiraling energy tore through the Tree. Shards of wood flew in all directions. The Black haired Shinobi jumped backwards, landing lightly on the another tree’s branch. Another orange blur, behind him.

“kitten!”

He ducked, throwing a Shuriken into Naruto’s face from point-blank. A poof of smoke. Sasuke jumped to another branch, looking back in time to see three Rasengan’s converge on the previous branch.

He didn’t see the Naruto behind him.

Boom.

Sasuke smashed through four other Branches before sliding into a wide pasture. he rolled into a standing position a second before Naruto smashed into the ground.

Customarily, His opponent would pause, not wanting to be caught in any traps Sasuke might have laid on the ground. Naruto had no qualms. He sprang at Sasuke through the debris. It was a Taijutsu match now.

Naruto lashed out with random, sporadic movements. Each one contained the almighty force of nature behind it. He was uncontrollable, a wild untamable beast, bent on murdering his foe.

On the Contrary, Sasuke moved with a fluid grace, every movement was planned and predicted. Every option and angle considered and valued. he did not block, he would simly flow around Naruto’s blows.

And that’s when it happened.

A kunai shot from the Ground, Forcing Sasuke to dodge a fraction to the right. but that’s where the second Kunai fired, right into Sasuke’s foot. The Uchiha stumbled, The Kunai tearing through bone and flesh as he tried to jump away.

Poof. Another Naruto sprang into existence. It leapt onto Sasuke’s back, holding Down his arms.

“No! Naruto!”

PopPop.

Two arms dislocated, one foot stabbed.

Sasuke lay there, his face in the ground.

they rolled him over, disregarding the pain in his arms. And there Sasuke lay, staring up at six Different Naruto’s.

“So, now I guess you’re going to kill me?”

What a fool, acting dignified before his death. If he knew what was coming, he'd be kicking with his good foot and screaming for help.

Five of the Naruto’s poofed away.

The fifth simply smiled. It was Not Naruto’s smile. It was the smile of a predator. A monster that has finally caught a long awaited prey.

“Oh, no. I’m going to do much worse.”

The Trator's screams echoed throughout the forest for hours.


Three days later a man with no arms, no eyes, and no tongue, and a third of his body covered in horrific burns and scars. stumbled into the nearby village of Shonasu. There he was Treated for An injured foot.

And two hundred miles away, in The village of Konoha, Rokudaim Uzumaki Naruto smiled into the Sunset as his pink-haired, pregnant wife leaned against him. her head in the nook of his shoulder.

“Hey, Naruto?”

He was warm. She was warm.

“Mmm?”

She turned to face him, her chin on his shoulder.

“Do you think we’ll ever find him?”

For a fraction of a milli-second, his face took on a grimace.

“Of course, sweety. I’ll find him someday. It’s a promise of a lifetime, remember?


Meh. Really, what 27 year old who's been in the wars WOULDN'T want some vengenace?

Edited by Recompense, 02 March 2008 - 07:48 AM.

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Posted 06 March 2008 - 05:29 AM

My first drabble ever

Never to Retreat:


It was cold, very cold. the western winds were blowing hard, typicalcal for the season here. The Fire Nations Northern Border with the Rock country was the witness of the Battle of the Pegasus Ridge. 1000 Ninja's from both sides stood against eachother in the shadows of the dark, warm night a week before the Summer festival in Konoha.

It all started silently, after two days of awaiting for movement, the hasty Rock Army Commander ordered a frontal attack on the Fortified Konohan Positions in the ridge. It was one bloody battle, a ninja died after another, then came a clash. The Iwa-kage came brignging an hail of rocks. When all hope was gone, then came a short flash. All the konohan forces heard a swift noise of flying kunai's. Then a flash all three last waves of the Iwa nin die in an instant, forcing the Iwa to retreat having lost 2/3 of their core forces. It was a key victory in the Third Great Shinobi War.

Now the sheer cold was not enbought to make the seasoned ninja's to shiver. What was that the sheer feeling in the sole core of their soul made them shiver. As one great commander said. "There are no Atheists in foxholes" The shinobi were silently praying. Another battle was to come, the feeling of possibly dying near the abandoned spirits of the previosly slaughtered nin was fearful, will the spirits be helpful or spiteful.

Uzumaki Naruto did not know, the new Rokudaime of the Leaf Village was now in a provisional command center with his top commanders, he knew that the battle will be cruicial in breaching the Iwa defences. After refusing to give out or prosecute the last Akatsuki member, Zetsu, they staged a border disorder to have a Casus Belli(Reason for war) againts konoha, their first offensive pushed the Konohan forces 50 miles back. When Shikamaru and his Third Tactical force with a swift manouver mutilated two of their tactical forces, giving the Main Core of the Konohan Forces to go back to positions Ante Bellum(Before war). But it cost them their Top tactician, Shikamaru died when he took a barrage of 40 kunai for his beloved who faught with him,Shikamaru Ino was never the same after that.

Naruto was trying to give his exhausted forces his spirit. He went out from the tent and stood up and the first row of soldiers. He looked towards te other side of the forest, across an empty field. He did not know what forces he had infront og him. All he knew that every single Iwa nin was mobilzed and was coming towards this choke point. And he had only 72 hours to mutilate the forces to persuade the Iwa to sign the Decleration of Unconditional Surrender.

It was a tense point. Moonlight shone upon the field. Then he heard a swift shush. He looked, his top spy, Inuzuka-Hyuuga Hinata was there. Crouching, in a full ANBU Armor and a cat mask."Hokage-Sama, A hole in their positions supported only with a single platoon of Iwa Chunins was detected on their left flank 2 miles from here." He said without hesitationn emotionlessly, she didn't shutter anymore as she used to. She stoped when she confessed her loved to Naruto, but he was already in love. His love was now in the Hokage tower withhis child. Uzumaki-Haruno Sakura looked towards the Last battleground deep in thought.

"Immidietly move a full platoon and a company of out Jounins from our reserves to their left flank. Hit them ASAP" He said "Tell them to fire a Fireball in the air when they engage the enemy." The Jounin noded and Shushined toawrds the Reserve Encampment.

Nori Akira, a Chunin that was pulled out of te Suna Border, the member of K Company of the 1st Tactical Force. He felt cold, he looked at his commander, Sarutobi Konohamaru. The commader knew the Hokage since Academy Days. He had faith in the Hokage rivaled only by the Legendary Rookie 12. The commander got a messanger bird. Then before Akira could notice a fire ball lit the sky. Konohamaru Screamed.

"ATTACK!!!!" And suddenly a rawr could be heard. A vicious festival of bloody red dragoons shaped dragoons hit the Iwa positons. A wall of fireballs hit the tree's of Iwa.

"DO NOT RETREAT!!! Our people count on us, DO NOT TAKE YOUR BACK ON THEM!!!!" Scream a zealous Chunin. The Battle of Kanagawa Forest Started.


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Posted 06 March 2008 - 03:47 PM

Writer's block is a pain. I'd have such a hard time believing that I'm stalling on a bunch of 100-word drabbles if I hadn't gone through before. Heh.

Anyway, this was going to be one of the 100 worders but it just wouldn't fit. So you get a longer drabble in bits and pieces instead. If As I get the rest out I'll put it up. Dialogue and reactions in some places don't feel right so it's not finished yet. God, I'm rusty.

Oh, and while this isn't Lemon-scented there IS a definite hint of lime. There's your warning... like it'd stop most of you anyway. wink.gif

Arr....there be citrus!

Last Night

Embarrassed, they sat at his kitchen table drinking coffee because it was easier than talking. Small sips of coffee and the nervous rattle of cups clanking against the wood occasionally broke the uneasy silence. Screwing up his courage, the boy decided to address the issue between them.

"so...um..." Apparently he didn't gather as much courage as he thought.

The girl didn't respond to that halfhearted opening and focused on getting comfortable. She adjusted the blanket she wore, the pale skin showing as she did so teasing him with what lay underneath. It didn't take long for his mind to supply the images of what exactly he did with that either.

His questing hands glided feverishly across her skin, worshipping every inch of her with his very touch. She accepted his adoration the best way she knew how by kissing him passionately, hands tangled in his hair and not letting go.

Hurriedly drinking his bitter coffee to hide the blush he knew was on his face, he tried again. "I, uh, about last night..."

"Not now," she hissed, "I'm not ready to talk about it." He didn't take offense at the snarling tone, he knew she still had a hangover to deal with. His had disappeared while watching the coffee brew in the kitchen - he always recovered from these things better than anyone he knew, for obvious reasons. She set her cup down and infused her hands with chakra. Placing her fingers to her temple, she sent out soothing pulses intending on banishing her headache; being a medic-nin had its perks, after all. While she worked on making herself lucid he stared at his coffee.

When she finally released her death-grip on his head he wasted little time in letting his mouth follow the trail his hands had blazed. Gently he covered her body in little butterfly kisses, drawing gasps and moans of pleasure. When he reached her center, the taste of her was like nothing he had ever experienced. The finest foods were as stale bread beside the ambrosia set before him.

He snorted softly to himself. It looked like those books affected him more than he thought. He still may not know what exactly "ambrosia" is, but he knew it was the perfect description.


More to come... I hope.

Edited by Jwolf0, 24 March 2008 - 03:54 AM.

QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


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Posted 06 March 2008 - 03:54 PM

I love it. Can't wait for the next part.

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 04:02 AM

Gah... I guess it was the server move. Suddenly my apostrophes and quotation marks in the last drabble turned into Trademarks and other cool symbols I don't know the proper names for.

Not a continuation on the last bit yet. Instead I get to finish another prompt... only a month or so in between, but that's like 3 decades in Internet Years.

Coffee. Sometimes flavor is overrated.


How someone drank coffee said a lot about them, Ino decided. Kiba gulped double espressos like crazy and Shino drank decaf. Sakura’s tastes varied like her moods, a café mocha one day, black coffee the next.

And Naruto?

Right on cue he joined them. Picking up Sakura’s cup, he sipped noisily.

She bopped Naruto upside the head. “Baka, get your own!” “But Sakura-chan’s tastes better!”

It didn’t matter how sweet or strong, Naruto would have Sakura’s coffee before ordering. And she’d always hit him lightly before calmly returning to her drink.

Ino smirked. Coffee said a LOT about those two.

QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


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Posted 24 March 2008 - 06:20 AM

QUOTE (Jwolf0 @ Mar 24 2008, 05:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Gah... I guess it was the server move. Suddenly my apostrophes and quotation marks in the last drabble turned into Trademarks and other cool symbols I don't know the proper names for.

Not a continuation on the last bit yet. Instead I get to finish another prompt... only a month or so in between, but that's like 3 decades in Internet Years.

Coffee. Sometimes flavor is overrated.


How someone drank coffee said a lot about them, Ino decided. Kiba gulped double espressos like crazy and Shino drank decaf. Sakura’s tastes varied like her moods, a café mocha one day, black coffee the next.

And Naruto?

Right on cue he joined them. Picking up Sakura’s cup, he sipped noisily.

She bopped Naruto upside the head. “Baka, get your own!” “But Sakura-chan’s tastes better!”

It didn’t matter how sweet or strong, Naruto would have Sakura’s coffee before ordering. And she’d always hit him lightly before calmly returning to her drink.

Ino smirked. Coffee said a LOT about those two.


hahahahaha!!! I love this fluff!!! XDDDD

Says a lot indeed. :thumbs:
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Posted 09 April 2008 - 06:52 PM

Thanks Wilson, I'm glad you liked it! XD

This felt rushed. Kinda ironic, that, since this is the first thing I've written in a couple of weeks.

Office. Well, what ELSE would you use it for?



“Shizune, you broke my office door.”

“It was locked, Hokage-sama.”

“That was for a reason, you know.”

“The yelling and crashing sounded like an attack. It’s our job to protect you, Hokage-sama.”

“Nee-chan, call me Naruto.” “Hokage-sama, I can’t do that!”

“That’s an order. Well, obviously we’re fine. You wouldn’t have to worry if-“

“Hokage…” Naruto tapped his hat. “Naruto-kun,” Shizune sighed, “we are not soundproofing your office. Maybe you should stop, um, making loud noises HERE?”

Naruto glanced mischievously at the woman hiding behind the desk, face matching her pink hair.

“Nee-chan, I can’t help that Sakura-chan’s a screamer.”

QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


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Posted 09 April 2008 - 06:59 PM

ROFL that was awesome! XDD!!

Wow that just made my sick day better. Thanks a lot Jwolf and keep it up! biggrin.gif

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Posted 10 April 2008 - 04:31 AM

QUOTE (Jwolf0 @ Apr 9 2008, 02:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks Wilson, I'm glad you liked it! XD

This felt rushed. Kinda ironic, that, since this is the first thing I've written in a couple of weeks.

Office. Well, what ELSE would you use it for?



“Shizune, you broke my office door.”

“It was locked, Hokage-sama.”

“That was for a reason, you know.”

“The yelling and crashing sounded like an attack. It’s our job to protect you, Hokage-sama.”

“Nee-chan, call me Naruto.” “Hokage-sama, I can’t do that!”

“That’s an order. Well, obviously we’re fine. You wouldn’t have to worry if-“

“Hokage…” Naruto tapped his hat. “Naruto-kun,” Shizune sighed, “we are not soundproofing your office. Maybe you should stop, um, making loud noises HERE?”

Naruto glanced mischievously at the woman hiding behind the desk, face matching her pink hair.

“Nee-chan, I can’t help that Sakura-chan’s a screamer.”


Lol and right after that Naruto suffers a good smack on the back of the head from Sakura lol good drabble keep it up!
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Posted 10 April 2008 - 04:42 AM

could be too long for a drabble, but here it is anyway.


The First Kiss

Their first kiss was an interesting one. It was not planned, it was not expected, it was not perfect.

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Heavy breathing, sucking air deep into starved lunges when the opportunity arises.

--

She was walking home late that night, working overtime at the hospital was a drag, but she loved it non-the-less. Her normally bright, soft pink hair, hung limply down her neck, reaching her shoulders before cascading an inch or two down her back. Her normally ever-alert emerald eyes drooped with fatigue gained from the long day’s work. Her senses skewed, slightly due to fatigue, she didn’t sense the presence, nearing hers, right away.

His feet dragged on, his long day of training had taxed even his near legendary reserves of stamina. The blond hair on his head, matted down with sweat, and his deep blue eyes sagged at the corners as sleep beckoned to him. Longing for it’s blissful embrace, he continued on home, thinking only of his soft, warm bed. His thoughts focused on rest, he failed to notice her, until it was almost too late.

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Pools of jade and sapphire, passionately swirling around each other, falling deeper into each other.

--

A sudden mass of orange and black flashed from around a corner. A tiger? She thinks. Her mind suddenly alert and working overtime, she sets herself, preparing to defend herself.

A streak of red and pink jumped out at him from behind a nearby wall. Before he could react, he felt the impact. His head was reeling as his body was sent flying to the ground several meters away.

A sigh of relief escapes her trembling lips, having defeated the beast. She begins to walk over, to look at her feline attacker, thinking it strange for such an animal to have gotten into the village. The limp body before her, she realized, was too small to be a tiger.

As his world stopped spinning, and came to a sense of normalcy, he noticed that his head was no longer resting on the cold, hard ground. Instead he felt as if someone had placed a soft, warm pillow for his throbbing head to rest on.

She pulled the boy’s head into her lap, the gentle moonlight providing soft illumination of the whiskered cheeks she had known for so long. She whispers soft pleas for forgiveness to the ball of golden hair, beginning to rouse in her lap.

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Two hands, tangled in tufts of hair. One entwined in gold, the other in roseate. Guiding each other, telling them, learning them, pulling them closer.

--

His cerulean eyes slowly fluttered open, his head still spinning slowly, from the impact just moments ago. Hearing a soft sound, a voice that sounded like the sweetness of heaven, tinted with a hint of pain, in his ear. “I’m sorry Naruto, I didn’t know it was you. Please forgive me,” the girl cried softly, her eyes shut as a small glimmering tear rolled down her soft cheek.

She felt the tiny ball of liquid slide down her face, but suddenly there was something else. Something warm, comforting, tender. She opened her pools of jade to see a rugged, tanned hand reaching up from below, to capture her tear. “Don’t cry Sakura-chan,” was all he said, he neither accused her, nor feared her.

Looking down into his deep, forgiving ocean blue orbs, feeling a strange warmth in her chest, she subconsciously runs her fingers through his unruly hair. She feels a soft, familiar warmth wrap around her other hand, his holding hers to his chest.

Feeling her soft fingers along his scalp, he breathes in her scent, a growing feeling of safety that he had longed for all his life. Her hand lazily traces down his cheek, brushing over the whisker marks there, sending a tingle up his spine, causing a small purr in the back of his throat.

What was that? She wondered. Did he just purr? She tested this, by running her fingers across his cheeks once more, feeling her heart lift a little as the sound of pleasure came again, seeing his eyes half close, as he nuzzles his face against her gentle hand.

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Tongues wrestling for dominance, searching unexplored depths, wrapping around one another.

--

Slowly they stand up together, each blushing at what had just transpired. Blue and green eyes, avoiding each other, the minds behind them trying to calm their respective hearts. “S-Sakura-chan, would like you like me to walk you home?” the normally, almost overly, confidant boy asked, stuttering as if he were a small child again.

“I’d like that Naruto,” came the response from the girl before him. Somewhat startled by her answer, he looked to her face, as if searching for a hint of falseness. Meeting her eyes, as her gaze turned to him, he found no deceit, but instead the same flustered feeling that rampaged through his stomach.

--

His teeth capture her bottom lip, biting gently, his hand kneading the back of her neck tenderly. She softly moans his name as her breath escapes her lunges.

--

They start to walk, side by side, down the road leading to her apartment, the stars twinkling mysteriously above them. A chilled wind blew across the deserted street, sending her slender body into a fit of shivers. Before she can speak, before she can act, before she can think, she feels a warmth wrap around her torso followed with a familiar musky scent.

Seeing her shiver as the night breeze swept past, the boy took off his jacket, acting without thinking, and draped it around her slender frame. This sudden act elicited a shocked look from his companion. “Won’t you be cold?” asked bewildered jewels of the purest jade. His only response is a soft, reassuring, loving smile, that warmed her more then the jacket she now wore.

--

Soft fingers gently play over soft black lines, lines that looked whiskers on his cheek, sending new sensations through his body, as his lips mashed together with hers, moaning her name deep into her mouth.

--

As they stood in front of her apartment door, they stared at each other for a moment’s time, before blushing and simultaneously averting their gaze. “Well, good night, Sakura-chan,” he bid her slowly turning to being the walk to his own apartment. A soft, gentle hand grasped his shoulder, before he had traveled 2 steps. A slight tug, spun him around, his eyes meeting hers.

Before boy or girl could react, the momentum from his stride, combined with the shift in weight from his unexpected turn, sent his lips to meet hers. A moment passed, a moment of awkwardness, a moment of embarrassment, a moment of shock. The moment quickly passed, as a spark of electricity shot between the flesh of their lips. Slowly, gently, they asked each other for permission, not with words, but with his mouth on hers, and her mouth on his.

--

Pulling apart, gasping for air, their eyes searched the other’s, searching for any hint of doubt in the feelings that had washed over them. “S-Sakura-chan, I’m sorry. I didn’t mea…” was all the blond could manage, before the roseate’s lips captured his once again.

“Don’t be sorry Naruto,” was all she said, pressing her body against his, resting her head on his chest. His arms wrap around her smaller frame, as a content smile washes over his face. He gently lays his head on her, breathing in the sweet smell of her roseate locks. Going over every detail of their first kiss, burning it into his memory.

--

Their first kiss was an interesting one. It was not planned, it was not expected, it was not perfect, but it was everything they had hoped a first kiss would be like.


QUOTE (jim1982 @ Apr 9 2008, 09:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol and right after that Naruto suffers a good smack on the back of the head from Sakura lol good drabble keep it up!

after that comment from him, i wouldn't be surprised if she gave him a good hit to the "ego"




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