Whirlpool Country and other stories
#241
Posted 16 September 2010 - 05:08 AM
Story update plz?
Or status update?
#242
Posted 16 September 2010 - 06:50 PM
Experiments in Empathy Chapter 4 is nearly done, I'll probably be sending it to Denim tonight to beta.
Whirlpool Country, the next chapter is a little over halfway done.
Hindsight, still haven't started.
Fire Shadow next chap is a few paragraphs, about 1k words right now.
#243
Posted 16 September 2010 - 11:22 PM
#244
Posted 11 November 2010 - 03:15 PM
#246
Posted 11 November 2010 - 08:00 PM
#247
Posted 11 November 2010 - 08:08 PM
#248
Posted 12 November 2010 - 12:54 AM
you just need some Kushinspiration!
#249
Posted 12 November 2010 - 01:14 AM
..(^)> PENGUIN!!!!
C(...)D
..m.m
Training with a sannin 2 1/2 years
new pair of gloves 20 ryou
the look on your best friend, and former sensei's face's when you cause a small earth quake. Princeless
Catsis Fan Fiction
#250
Posted 12 November 2010 - 06:46 AM
The family that couldn't be.
[post='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EItApJttbY']An Underrated Song Worth Listening[/post]
#251
Posted 22 January 2011 - 01:17 AM
Therefore my fanfic writing has understandably taken a hit, but I am still writing. Next up is Experiments in Empathy, probably in a few days. I wanna get back into WPC, but I need to re-read the whole thing first to get it fresh in my mind.
Edited by Paradox Jast, 22 January 2011 - 01:24 AM.
#252
Posted 11 February 2011 - 04:29 PM
Edited by Codus N, 11 February 2011 - 04:29 PM.
The family that couldn't be.
[post='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EItApJttbY']An Underrated Song Worth Listening[/post]
#253
Posted 11 February 2011 - 10:50 PM
#254
Posted 14 February 2011 - 08:49 AM
Hanare appeared in Shippuden 191. Or you can also try reading this author's story to get an idea of how their relationship could work:
Love Song
This one's really good but I'd like to see how YOU do it considering you're probably one of the best 3 writers in FF.net
Edited by Codus N, 03 March 2011 - 04:31 PM.
The family that couldn't be.
[post='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EItApJttbY']An Underrated Song Worth Listening[/post]
#255
Posted 11 March 2011 - 07:19 AM
MIB 3's plot leak.
The plot is basically a time-travel story. And what they're having a problem with is how to make it without any plotholes. Time-travel stories are considered the most tricky and most difficult to create without any plotholes, but considering how masterfully you wrote HS:FS, I was wondering what YOU would do if you were the scriptwriter. Granted, HS:FS is time-traveling to the future, but I'd like to hear your expert opinion on this.
Edited by Codus N, 11 March 2011 - 07:25 AM.
The family that couldn't be.
[post='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EItApJttbY']An Underrated Song Worth Listening[/post]
#256
Posted 11 March 2011 - 09:30 PM
Generally speaking with any large project, it should be outlined in its entirety before any other work is done, period. Outlining can be a nuisance, yeah, but it can prevent a lot of headaches in the long run.
Admittedly, going forward in time is easier, because nothing is particularly set in stone. Going back in time is always a bit harder, because when you go back in time you have to take into consideration how things happened in the present. Anything that you do will essentially make the present end up how it did.
They could have a lot of problems, but they made a pure Deus Ex Machina in the very first movie - the Memory Flasher. As long as they use that, they can eliminate any 'remembrance' issues. It will likely be the 'results' of whatever their plot revolves around that can bite them in the ass if they aren't careful.
As for what I would do... without knowing the plot other than they travel back in time, it would be hard to say. If it was Will that was having an issue, though, I would have hashed through the outline with him ASAP so they could actually, you know, make the movie. There may have been more going on than they were aware of, and -technically- while Will is acting lead and may like scriptwriting, he was -not- hired on to do that, as far as I can tell. Unfortunately his status came into play, I think... I don't believe Sony would be willing to replace him in his role, as the property pretty much revolves around his character. So it may have been a case of good intentions going bad? I'm not an insider, so I haven't a clue.
The easiest way to avoid plot holes is to try and keep the new movie as far away from established canon as possible. Reference the future, perhaps, but don't try to forcefully bring about anything that happened the way it did in the first two movies.
Edit: I will take a second to mention that the next chapter of Experiments is almost done... and it's the longest chapter I've ever written of any of my stories... and I'm still typing away.
Edited by Paradox Jast, 11 March 2011 - 09:37 PM.
#257
Posted 04 April 2011 - 03:47 PM
Oh yeah, about Jiraiya, you stated in your account that you're going to let him live but I don't think that's a good idea since Jiraiya's death was the major turning point for Naruto's growth of ideals. So I say no to Jiraiya living *gets shot*.
Edited by Codus N, 04 April 2011 - 03:50 PM.
The family that couldn't be.
[post='http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EItApJttbY']An Underrated Song Worth Listening[/post]
#258
Posted 04 April 2011 - 09:08 PM
#259
Posted 04 April 2011 - 11:38 PM
SERIOUSLY can't wait for your next chap in WPC! That and Lost in the Rain are my current favorite NaruSaku Fanfics! Seriously, great job dude. Loving your work!
^Adam Couple. KPOP couple <3 google them! They're like an anime couple I swear to God. Watch their show. PM me for link :]
#260
Posted 05 April 2011 - 08:46 PM
Edited by iwant2bnaruto, 05 April 2011 - 08:47 PM.
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