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[*- ZerΩ -*]

*naruto's birthday bash*
[author note summary:since october 10th is literally naruto's birthday i'm doing a birthday omake lol]
*team 7, 8, 10, and team gai all go to naruto's apartment to celebrate his birthday*
sakura: hey, naruto?
naruto: hi sakura-chan! this party's just started but, having fun so far?
sakura: yeah...where do we put the gifts?
naruto: all the gifts are on the table...sure you'll fit up there?
sakura: -laughs and bonks him on the head-
ino: what'd you get naruto?
sakura: a present -puts the present down-
*knock knock knock*
naruto: -opens door- sasuke-teme?...what are you doing here?
all:GO HOME SASUKE!
sasuke: hn. -walks on in- i braught these -holds up a six pack of sake
sakura: hi sasuke-kun!
sasuke: -hands her the sake- put these in the fridge
sakura: -puts the sake in the fridge-
naruto: sasuke if your going to stay you can't be rude to anyone
sasuke: then i can't be myself?
sakura: hey sasuke-kun did you bring naruto a present?
sasuke: the drinks are his present
naruto: well, thank you sasuke that was nice
sasuke: well,...there was one catch
*hokage office*
tsunade: -opens cellar- hey...who stole my six pack of sake?
*back to naruto's party*
naruto: YOU GOT THOSE FROM TSUNADE'S OFFICE!?
sasuke: yeah. -walks away-
kiba: i know! lets let naruto open his presents!
naruto: apparently i already got sasuke's stolen gift.
*sai's gift*
naruto: waw...-shows everyone a picture painted of team 7- its me, sai, yamato, and sakura! i'll put this on my wall thanks sai
*ino's gift*
naruto: -sweatdrop- -holds up a naruto plush-
ino: i found that...apparently your very popular
naruto: thank you ino.
*choji's gift*
naruto: -gasp- THREE CUPONDS FOR FREE RAMEN AT ICHIRAKU'S! THANK YOU CHOJI!
choji: because sometimes we just want to eat, and not worry about paying the food dealers'
ino: -sweatdrop- they're not dealers they're buissness workers'
*shikamaru's gift*
naruto: oh cool! a shogi board
shikamaru: now we can play shogi at your house to!.
*kiba's gift*
naruto: a chess board! awsome
*shino's gift*
naruto: a checker board...are you all trying to say i'm boring?
shino/kiba/shikamaru: no
*rock lee's gift*
naruto: no...way!
lee: the complete set of my series! rock lee's spring time of youth! -strikes a pose-
naruto: whats the canon paring! i just gotta know!! is it LS, or NS
sasuke/hinata/sakura:-sweatdrop-
lee: hmmm -thinks-...NS of course
naruto: YYYEEESSS!
*tenten's gift*
naruto: waw! a kunai sharpener thanks
tenten: we hardly talk, or get to see eachother so, i wasn't sure what to get you.
*hinata's gift*
naruto: -pulls out a 2015 calendar- thanks hinata
hinata: i know it's only october but, it's never to early, or to late to prepare for a new year.
sakura: open mine
*sakura's gift*
naruto: -opens gift and sees a red scarf- waw. thanks sakura-chan
*sakura, and naruto hug*
naruto: i should return the sake back to tsunade. since sasuke took it from her office
kiba: wait...i have a funner idea...lets drink it!
naruto: -sweatdrop-
*midnight*
sasuke: -leaves-
naruto: this party was awsome!
sakura: yeah
kiba: hey sasuke left his wallet...hey guys! who wants to go on a late night shopping run?
*they all go to ichiraku, sang happy birthday to naruto, and had fun around konoha*
naruto: WAW hey! look at the moon
*they all admire the red moon*
sakura: it's like we're all in infinate tsukoyomi
choji: hey guys?...i know a bakery we can eat cake at!
*they all go eat cake in honor of naruto's birthday the next day they say happy birthday to naruto, he thanks them for comming, and they all go home*
*at sasuke's he notices a note on the counter, and a wallet*
sasuke: i feel hung over -reads the note-
"thanks for the wild, and crazy birthday-naruto
thanks for the new outfit-sakura
aukemaru thanks you for the box of bacon bites!-kiba
thanks for the all night food! at ichirakus, the bakery, and the other restaraunts-choji
thanks for all those bowls of curry!-lee
we were able to buy another pack of sake, and sneak it back in tsunade's cellar-tenten
thanks for the new boots i might use them on you someday-ino
thanks for the new art set-sai
you left your wallet on the counter at naruto's party!-shikamaru"
sasuke: -sweatdrop- -finds the wallet empty but, has a note inside.
"see? stealing only backfires on you in the end
from naruto"
*that night naruto, and sakura go eat at ichiraku*
sakura: your birthday party was fun
naruto: i know i had fun to.
*sakura, and naruto kiss*

Always a treat to read your omake!

im gonna miss them, when the series ends :/

 

Brilliant as usual. I liked the humour in this omake 

 

sakura: yeah...where do we put the gifts?

naruto: all the gifts are on the table...sure you'll fit up there?

 

^^ This part was very cute   

Hehehehehe, i will use this pickup line at my birthday in November! 

cheers!

[ns.Believe.It]

Hehehehehe, i will use this pickup line at my birthday in November! 

cheers!

Ohhh..You have someone special then? Go for this line, It'll work like a charm 

[*- ZerΩ -*]

Ohhh..You have someone special then? Go for this line, It'll work like a charm 

 

Seems like someone has already tried it 

 

You can count on it 

Edited by *- ZerΩ -*, 10 October 2014 - 03:24 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*comparasion*
[author note summary: naruto, and sakura discuss team 7's paralells', and try to figure out their own future...its like their counterparts told their story FOR them...whats next?]
*naruto, and sakura are on the hokage monuement talking*
naruto: hey?...have you ever noticed this whole story seems to have been told through our alternate parallels'? i mean there are so many what could have beens answered in the series!
sakura: yeah...lets start with you: there's your father who became hokage at a young age
naruto: pervy sage who passed up being hokage due to not saving orochimaru, nagato who became a villan, obito who had the dream of becomming a hokage, and died then later became a villan
sakura: he was really weird...then theres gaara who had a life similar to yours, and became kazekage at fifteen!.
naruto: OH WAIT! nagato's not my parallel that was yahiko...i think i figured something out, for later though.
sakura: my turn!. my parallels' were rin who died by kakashi...just like i almost did by sasuke many times...though we'll get to his parallels' later.
naruto: then theres konan who became an akatsuki member, and then theres my mom kushina and granny tsunade! though she, and pervy sage became wonderers'...can you imagine being a way from the person you love the most for a looong time?
sakura: i hope i'm never away from you for any amount of time
naruto: -blushes- i hope we're always together
sakura: me to
*naruto, and sakura hug*
naruto: sasuke's turn
sakura: okay, there's kakashi who started out kinda bitter but, became an ANBU, then a sensei,
naruto: then there's orochimaru who became obsessed with power, and death, and became a villan, then nagato...talk about when uzumaki go bad!. he was the villan during the pain invasion arc,
sakura: then there's sai...he's a more calmer-like version of sasuke who actually tries to be human with emotions'.he's the one who helped me realise that my heart pined for YOU. i may love my friends', village, my parents', but, i'm only in love with one person!
naruto: sasuke?
sakura: -laughs- no, some one whoes had a crush on me for years, and i know has been in love with mee all his teenhood.
naruto: bushy brows?
sakura: YOU! YOU KNUCKLE HEAD -bonks naruto on the head-
naruto: -blushes- aw, i love you too
sakura: -blushes- lets face it our hearts are connected...by the power of love.
naruto: hey, how about team taka?
sakura: -shudders- well, all i know is if you take my twelve year old "sasuke fangirl" personality put it with your last name, and turn it female you'll have karin uzumaki. thats all i'm saying about team taka
naruto: -bursts out laughing-
sakura: actually...even though the ones we've mentioned may be our "alternates", parallels', or similarities they're not us, and we're not them. who knows how WE would be in any of their situations'
naruto: well, we were in a few of some of their situations'...but, true. diffrent personalities', diffrent ending. but, there's still one question...who IS end game naruhina, or us...the ever lovable narusaku?
sakura: and how can we know the mangaka wont mess up, and ignore all our build up?
naruto: ever looked at the fanarts, read the fanfics'? we have THE most romantic paring in the whole series.
sakura: naruto? i secretly had a small crush on you back during our academy days'...ever since  seeing you become stronger the faster my heart beated around you!
naruto: -blinks- sakura-chan?...i hope your not hinata in disquise...i thought you had a crush on sasuke?
sakura: i'm not, did i stutter once during saying that?, and i only thought i did...i was trying to be like ino...my whole life i wanted to be like her...i thought SHE had the good life, she had it all...i was forehead girl, and she was always, and still is pretty.
naruto: but, your beautiful inside, and out sakura-chan!, and your forehead's so charming it makes me want to kiss it.
sakura: -blushes-
naruto: -kisses her forehead-
sakura: wait...if all the villans are "finished"...and sasuke's good again...whoes gonna be the movie villan?
*in the distance watching the two*
kaguya: guess all is slowly comming together...first crushes one secret, one not come together in the end as a heart of a whole lot...heaven, and earth...love grows from within the heart in the end nothing can tear them apart. light or dark, end, or start.NARUSAKU is a work of art...checkmate game...complete! isn't life sweet?-eyes glow- now to go on with my next plan...to the hyuuga clan -zips off-
*back to naruto, and sakura*
naruto: oh well, lets just enjoy the present
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 15 March 2015 - 10:33 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Nice, you have summed it up well. Parallels galore 

[starlitestarbrite]

*the konoha talent show*
[author note summary: the konoha talent show. all the sensei, shizune, and lady tsunade have put together a talent show. there'll be many song parodies, funny skits.]
*in the autotorium many villagers shown up, and sat on the benches while shizune spoke*
shizune: greetings all! for the first time, it is the 2014 talent show! here's lady tsunade to explain!
*lady tsunade goes to the podium*
tsunade: keep in mind this is NOT a contest...last time we did that two certain knuckleheads had a "DragonBall Z " battle and braught down the statium!
*naruto, and konohamaru sweatdrop*
tsunade: now here's our first act performing a parody of team rocket's motto...team taka!
*many laugh but very few clapped as sasuke, karin, and suigetsu get on stage*
karin:to destroy the village within fire nation
sasuke: to trash the meaning of truth, and love
karin: to devide the villages of the nation. karin!
sasuke:sasuke!
karin: ninja by day avengers by night
sasuke: surrender now or prepare to fight
suigetsu: i'm suigetsu and thaaats right!
all: -laugh, some clap as they walk off-
naruto: that was actually kinda cool
tsunade: waw...here's naruto singing the parody of...-sweatdrops- oh god
shizune: -reads it- oh my darling clamentine
tsunade: why do i get a feeling something bad's going to happen?
*many clap, and cheer as he takes the stage*
naruto: this is dedicated to sakura-chan!...if you read the recent chapters'...well, 693 you'll see why. :
oh my darling, oh my darling, oh my darrrling sakura-chan
thanks to sasuke your in a genjutsu will i ever see you again?
now fans say your unconscious i just hope it's not forever
oh my darling sakura-chan
oh my darling, oh my darling, oh my darrrling sakura-chan
we found sasuke, and regret it i hope he goes again
then we'll get together, and forever
my darling sakura-chan
sakura: -eyes water- aw.
naruto:oh my darling, oh my darling, oh my darrrling sakura-chan
when you wake up i hope i tell you
that i love you i hope i still can
and i hope narusaku's endgame my darling sakura-chan!
*all cheer.*
*naruto, and sakura hug*
tsunade: -waits-...well, guess i was wrong. glad everything is still in tact!. now, our next performers' are: rock lee, tenten, hinata, ino, choji, shikamaru, naruto, and konohamaru...singing a parody of moonlight bay
*they all go up there*
naruto: we're calling ourselves the konoha memory choir!...you'll hear why*
*the stage has a backdrop if a cementary, and a starry sky*
: rock lee, tenten, hinata, ino, choji, shikamaru, naruto, and konohamaru:-sing-
in the cementaryyy of konohaaa
we're all thiiinnnkiiing of those we lost
they're in our heaaarts
and never faaar
and we know their spiriiit
will still live ooon
so, never give uuup
on your goaaals
because our little village, is the home of the souls
naruto: hooome ooof theee sooouls!
*they recieve a standing ovation, and cheers from EVERYONE!*
tsunade: -wipes eyes- that was so sweet!. here's sasuke, and sakura with sakura singing a parody of pochohontas's colors of the wind!
*some cheer saying "yay sakura!", "good luck sakura-chan!", "you rule sakura-san!" making it clear they're not cheering for sasuke*
sasuke: do i have to sing?
sakura: no, i'm singing...your representing yourself, and all the haters!
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
sakura: -music plays-:
You think I'm an annoying airhead
And you've been so many places
I guess it must be so
But still I cannot see
If the annoying one is me
How can there be so much that you don't know?
You don't know ...

You think you own whatever manga you read on
heaven, and Earth is just a dead thing you can claim
But what about every reader, viewer, and artist
Has a life, has a spirit, has a name

You think the only people who are true fans
Are the people who ship and think like you
But if you walk the footsteps of a character
You'll learn things you never knew you never knew

Have you ever wondered how fanfiction gets created
Or asked what inspired the fanartists who drew?
can you truley say you don't ship narusaku?
Can you see where true love never ends?
Can see true love never ends?

see the slow changing of the heavens
because of the firey passion from the earth
just allow this village to amaze you
And for once, never wonder what they're worth

the senseis', and hokage are my like second parents
The younger shinobi are my friends
And all the rookies are like my siblings
we are a family that will never end

How much has naruto grown?
If you ignore the main characters it's unknown
And you'll miss out on the best of narusaku
For whether we are at the start, or at the end
We need to stop all the hate, and the judging
We need to enjoy what we have before it ends
You can say i'm annoying and still
All that's all you'll get until
You can open your eyes, and hearts' fooor theee eeend!
*she gets a standing ovation, and EVERYONE cheers*
sasuke: -jolts from falling asleep during her song- i'm awake!
tsunade: i'm more like a "granny"...thats why naruto calls me "granny tsunade"
*laughter*
tsunade: well, this village is a very family-like place. here's ino, and sakura doing a parody of hercules song "i wont say i'm in love"
ino: wanna make it clear who we're singing about?
sakura: NO! cause...i wont admitt it
*laughter music starts*
sakura:
If there's a prize for rotten judgement
I guess I've already won that
he don't deserve my affection
That's ancient history, been there, done that!
ino:Who'd' ya think you're kiddin'
He's the Earth and your the heaven
Try to keep it hidden
Honey, we can see right through you
Girl, ya can't conceal it
We know how ya feel and
Who you're thinking of
sakura: No chance, no way
I won't say it, no, no
ino:You swoon, you sigh
why deny it, uh-oh
sakura:It's too cliche
I won't say I'm in love
I thought my heart had learned its lesson
I thought the secret wouldn't start out
My head is screaming get a grip, girl
Unless you're dying to cry your heart out
Oh
ino:You keep on denying
Who you are and how you're feeling
but,we're not buying
we saw ya blush while confessing
Face it like a grown-up
When ya gonna own up
That ya got, got, got it bad
sakura:Whoa: No chance, no way
I won't say it, no, no
ino:Give up, give in
Check the grin you're in love
sakura: i'll lie, HI SASUKE! i'm so not in love
ino: you admitt you lie, don't hide your in love!
sakura: look at my eyes, do they lie? i wont say i'm in love
ino: oh yes, she is! she's over her crush
oh no, i think she's confusing us
sakura: INO! YOUR MESSING UP THE SONG!
ino: WELL, JUST SAY YOUR IN LOVE!
sakura: this song must end now, cause i'm not in love
ino: okay, thats fine...sai wanna join the fun?
sakura: -whines- innnooo
*sai joins them*
ino: -sings- she wont, she don't say she's in love
sai: -sings- thats cool, lets be nice it must be a crush
ino: oh no...i knooow she's fallen in love
sakura: THATS IT YOU TWO OFF THE STAGE!
*some laugh as ino, and sai exit*
sakura:-sings- oooh i can say it right now
with naruto i'm in love
*everyone cheers and she gets a standing ovation, and blushes*
ino: SEE? I TOLD YOU!
sai: -blinks-
suigetsu: heeey...sasuke you owe me 25 ryo!
karin: you two bet she was in love with naruto?
*flashback*
sasuke: how much you wanna bet sakura still DOES have that annoying crush on me?
suigetsu: 10 ryo,
sasuke: fine, and i bet you 25 ryo sakura fell in love with naruto, and actually has always secretly started falling for naruto that whenever she fears, or worries about naruto, and if i'm near by she uses me as a distraction
karin: if you two don't shut up i'm tossing you two through the roof!
*end*
karin: THATS WHAT YOU TWO WERE DOING!?...gosh you two are so, weird sometimes.
*lee runs up, and kicks sasuke through the roof*
sasuke: looks like i'm flying off agaaaiiinnn!
*ping*
lee: THAT IS FOR STOMPING ON THE HEART OF THE MOST PRETTIEST FLOWER IN KONOHA!...sakura-san does not deserve sasuke in her life!
tsunade: see? -points at roof- i knew that would happen.
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 20 October 2014 - 03:12 AM.

[narusaku256]

Felt so good to read the omake after a long long time! Great one as always :)

Edited by narusaku256, 19 October 2014 - 08:48 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Team Taka's song. . .     

Plenty of NaruSaku, making fun of Sasuke, a little bit of SaiIno -- all ingredients to make me enjoy this omake 

[*- ZerΩ -*]

That was so beautiful! *claps claps claps*

I dont know why.. but the ino sakura singing.. i imagined johnny depp singing like in the sweety todd xD

NVM...

starlite, really i cant describe you how much i respect you.

You have an amazing talent in writing and even song writing.

Have you ever thought of taking that talent and use it for a job?

[starlitestarbrite]

nope.thanks for the comments, likes, and reading :)

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 20 October 2014 - 08:23 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*channel hop*
[author note summary: i wanned to see what would happen if some characters' from disney channel u.s meet their disney channel india counterpart[sidenote: i watch them on youtube...if only they had english subtitles LOL. this is a "writers block omake" if i run out of naruto ideas i'll post the first cool idea that comes to mind]]
*jessie from hey jessie meets jassie from oye jassie*
jessie: where in the sweet potato am i? -looks around- well, this looks like the same place.
*jassie walks in the room*
jassie: WOAH!...WHO PUT A "MAGIC MIRROR" IN THE LIVING ROOM!?
jessie: um...we don't look that much alike. i'm jessie. i guess i got sucked into the TV or something!
jassie:hey there...heeey your from disney channel overseas in the u.s...your in disney channel india
jessie: sweet nibblets i hopped overseas!
*The Suite Life of zack, and cody-maddie and london meet The Suite Life of Karan & Kabir-Vinita (Vinnie) Mishra, and Rani Oberoi*
maddie: okay...i think we just got sucked into the tv!
london: that's the last time i stay at your hut house
maddie: well...HEEEY! i didn't have to invite you you know! besides i like your place so much better, and your hotel room
london: my daddy owns the hotel duh.
maddie: i know...duh. wait...where are we anyway?
vinnie: -at the candy counter-
maddie: waw...
london: oh good candy counter girl! -walks up-
maddie: -rolls eyes- london!
london: i'd like a candybar
vinnie: -smiles- whats the magic word?
london: -thinks- oh great another maddie-
maddie: i'm maddie fitzpatrick, and this is london tipton.
vinnie:-to london- now, see? you can learn from her -to maddie- hello, welcome to the Raj Mahal Hotel, i'm Vinita Mishra
london: -gasps- we're at the taj mahal? OH MY GOSH! -squeal-
vinnie: no, the-
london: wait...who owns the hotel?
rani: -walks in- you'll never guess where i was! shopping in tokyo! see? -holds up 3 full bags of stuff-...i need a snack
vinnie: london? that's rani. her father owns THIS hotel. welcome to disney channel india
london: oh yeah?...wanna have a shopping contest?
rani: -walks up to the counter- HI VINNIE!...can i have a candy bar
maddie: -laughs- she's like you london
vinnie: why do you get a free candy bar?
rani: my father owns the hotel duh! -reaches over the counder but vinnie closes the desk- HEEEY!
maddie: -points to london and giggles-
london: i so do not do that!
rani: fine...i'll just bake some cookies and you can't have any...so there!
Karan:-walks up to the counter- hi vinnie
london: this is familiar
vinnie: no.
karan: what?...you don't know what i was going to say yet!
*kabir comes up*
vinnie: okay, what?
karan: if i buy a candy bar can i get a date with you for free?
vinnie: i knew you were going to ask that...the answer's still no
maddie: i think we're in the indian versian of zack, and cody
kabir:i'm kabir, thats karan
*karan, and kabir pays for the candy bar they baught*
*teddy from good luck charlie meets dolly from best of luck nikki*
teddy: okay,...-turns on camera- hello, charlie...so, yes, it IS possible to get sucked into a tv...enspecially if it's close to halloween...well- *turns off her camera as dolly walks in*
dolly: oh my gosh! your from good luck charlie from disney u.s!
teddy: i must be in disney india! this is best of luck nikki?
dolly: yes!
teddy: okay, i'm loving these foreighn adaptions of other shows!...hey we can both do video diaries for our sisters'
*later they're both doing video diaries*
teddy: hey charlie
dolly: hey nikki
teddy: as i was saying apparently you CAN get sucked into a TV during october
*dolly stares at teddy*
teddy: who knows maybe in your time...when your my age computers'll replace TVs', and...ok why are you staring?
dolly: that was the weirdest thing i've ever heard. -turns back to the screen- hey nikki. though things happen that we may not understand it just shows that in the future sharing cultures, and making peace with others IS possible!.
teddy: that's good advice
dolly: thank you.do you give your sister advice?
teddy: well,...life lessons i guess.i just tell her what goes on in my daily life.
dolly: well, i guess i can try that, well, sunny got in trouble again, he was told to wash the neighbor's car...well, that's not all that got washed.
teddy: -laughs- sounds like gabe, and mrs. daphane
dolly: i guess the life lesson is: don't have him wash your car...unless you want to be sprayed with the water hose, and your yard flooded...how was that?
teddy: perfect.
dolly: well, best of luck nikki!
teddy: and good luck charlie!
*the end*
*naruto, and sakura come out*
naruto: heeey we weren't in this one!
sakura: well, i guess it's writers block day.
*naruto and sakura hug and kiss*

[starlitestarbrite]

*epic ending*
[author note summary: i had this idea for a while. it takes place while naruto, kakashi, sakura, sasuke are all sealing kaguya. this is one of many ending ideas i had/have]
*naruto's in sage mode, after they seal kaguya a bright light surrounds naruto, and sasuke*
kakashi: we sealed her but...what's going on?
sakura: NARUTO! SASUKE-KUN!
naruto: -goes towards them- kakashi-sensei, sakura-chan, there's something sasuke, and i need to take care of. you two go back, and awaken the others.-goes back inside the orb-
hagoromo: what's that?
kakashi: i don't know, sasuke, and naruto are in there. we sealed kaguya but-
hagoromo: it's started...-closes eyes- the prophecy is finnally taking place. -opens eyes-
sakura:/kakashi: WHAT!
hagoromo: -explains the reincarnation thing-...now the last battle is between them.only one will survive
sakura: -eyes water-
kakashi: we need to awaken the others from the I.T
hagoromo: i can do that. come on
sakura: i need to help them!
*in the orb*
sasuke: why did you trap us in here?
naruto: what are you up to sasuke?, you claim you want to be hokage yet you still act like a jerk, what are you really up to?
sasuke: fine, guess we'll have to sort this out here, and now. my plan was to erase the past, kill the five kage, and kill you...guess your first.
naruto: WHAT! YOU JERK! I CAN'T BELIEVE ALL THIS TIME WE SAVED YOUR SORRY BUTT, AND YOUR STILL OUT FOR REVENGE!? GOSH YOUR NOT EVEN A JERK ANYMORE...YOUR NOT EVEN THE SASUKE I KNOW! -eyes water-
sasuke: that sasuke's dead hn. -smirks- just like our bonds'...i hate admitting your the only best friend i ever had.
naruto: grrr -punches sasuke-
sasuke: chidori!
naruto: shadow clone jutsu!
*sasuke chidoris many shadow clones while the real naruto rasengans him in the butt*
sasuke: HEY! -punches naruto-
naruto: guess this is it?...this is how you thank your "only friend" SASUKE?, -tears fall- guess we're fighting to the death after all.
sasuke: guess so, -pulls out sward- say goodbye naruto
naruto: -from behinde sasuke- "goodbye clone naruto"
*sasuke slices the clone, then sweatdrops*
sasuke: WILL YOU STAY STILL NARUTO!?
*back to sakura, and kakashi they awaken everyone*
hinata: how is naruto-kun?
sakura: -tries to hold back tears- he told us to come wake you all up, and he, and sasuke-kun were taking care of something -thinks- naruto, if you die i will go to the spirit realms myself and drag you back!...wait...wasn't i in love with sasuke?...when did i start falling for naruto?-
*flashback*
naruto: i'll bring him back to you sakura-chan...promise of a lifetime
*end*
*sakura runs back and asks hagoromo something*
sakura: i need to go back to the imension they're in!
hagoromo: i'll go back,and see how things are going
sakura: can i come to?
hagoromo: no, you need to stay here, i sense naruto-
karin: WHERE IS MY SASUKE-KUN!? -runs over to sakura, and hagoromo- is he okay?
hagoromo: -to sakura- anyway, you need to stay here, and help everyone here.
karin: HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOUUU!. why can't we all go?
sakura: -hangs head- i'm guessing it's due to our low energy.
*hagoromo leaves*
karin: what happened!?
sakura: naruto, and sasuke...are fighting to the death -cries- only one will survive -walks off-
karin: oh no...-eyes water- sasuke-kun.
suigetsu: -comes up- has anyone told you for an uzumaki your kind of an airhead?
karin: YOUR ANNOYING! -punches suigetsu-
*back to sasuke, and naruto both pretty bruised, and scratched up*
naruto: why sasuke? -wipes tears- why does revenge matter to you so much? can't you see what it's done!?
sasuke: yes...and i WILL destroy konoha!
naruto: YOU JUST SAID YOU WANTED TO BE HOKAGE YOU JERK! WHERE DO YOU THINK THE HO KAGE LIVES!?
sasuke: i'll just start my own village...duh!, and restore my clan...then the hokage wont destroy us this time because she'll be destroyed! -laughs-
naruto: -sweatdrop-...sasuke...your just like orochimaru! -cries-
sasuke: NO I'M NOT! I'LL NEVER BE LIKE HIM! BECAUSE OF HIM MY CLAN IS GONE, BECAUSE OF HIM...ALL BECAUSE OF-
naruto: DON'T YOU HEAR YOURSELF! YOUR ALL OVER THE PLACE YOU HAVE SAID IT WAS YOUR BROTHER, THEN KONOHA, NOW FOR ONCE YOU GOT THE ANSWER RIGHT! i know the series has been confusing since the war arc but, THIS IS AN OUTRAGE! you ARE revenge...you are...your own hatered -eyes glow red-
sasuke: -sharingan glows to- well,your like sakura...annoying!
naruto: -growls- I WILL KILL YOU SASUKE...YOU MADE THE WORST ENEMY YOU HAVE EVER MET!
sasuke: no...i think the WORST villan-
*naruto charges a rasengan at sasuke*
sasuke: you iditot! will you cut it out.
*hagoromo let sakura, and kakashi go back to the dimension with him*
minato: WHY DID YOU GIVE SASUKE POWERUPS!?
hagoromo: i don't know i guess i was trying to help restore his chakra! since there was already a medic ninja helping naruto -points to sakura-
sakura: -blushes-...i just hope naruto's okay.
*a huge explosion of light was seen from a chidori, and rasengan blast*
sakura: NARUTO! -her, and the others run over-whered they go!?
kakashi: they must have gone to the valley of the end
*in the astral plane*
sasuke: well, great you got us BOTH killed
narutro: what part of "next time we fight we both die" did you NOT get?
*a figure appears*
kushina: hello, naruto,...hey your mikoto's kid...she, and i had hoped you, and naruto would become friends
sasuke: hn. looks like it worked...then we killed eachother
kushina: -eyes water- YOU DID WHAT!?
naruto: the detail i forgot to mention is: i'm a jinchuuriki so, i'll regain consciousness
sasuke: why didn't you die WHEN THE KYUUBI WAS EXTRACTED FROM YOU!?
naruto: fun fact: you may want to make sure not to insult someone infront of their mother -points behinde sasuke-
kushina: GRRR SAAASUUUKEEE -puches him-
sasuke: man your worse than sakura!
kushina: aw you found a girl like me after all?
naruto: sure did!
*kushina hugs her son then bonks him on the head*
kushina: AGAIN I TOLD YOU NOT TO BE RECKLESS! seriously your like your father!
sasuke: -watches the "reunion"-
naruto: OH YEAH! i have to regrow his arm!
kushina: what?
*naruto explains everything*
kushina: GRRR MINNNAAATOOO!!!
minato: i think i know where naruto is!
*sakura, and minato go to the astral plane*
kushina: -whacks minato- WHAT WERE YOU THINKING NOT HELPING OUR SON DURING THE WAR!
minato: but, i was helping
*naruto regrows his dads arms*
sakura: -bonks naruto on the head- STOP GIVING ME PANIC ATTACKS! -hugs naruto-
naruto: -hugs her back-
sasuke: -stands up- so, we can all go back right?
naruto: -gasps- oh no! sakura-chan you didn't die to did you?
sakura: YOUR NOT DEAD NARUTO!, and nor am i...we still have to get together, and you gotta become hokage -blush-
naruto: -blush- how are everyone else?
sakura: they are alright.
naruto: -eyes water- i'm glad
minato: looks like he found a girl like you after all kushi-chan
*kushina, and minato kiss,*
minato: well, naruto, sakura we'll send you two back now
naruto: WHAT! no, we all three go back!
*obito walks up*
obito: don't worry...i'll take care of sasuke...apparently i'm the new kage of the uchiha clan in my realm
sasuke: NOOO!!!
*sakura, naruto, and minato, and kushina laugh*
naruto: -frowns- wait!... obito, i promised sakura-chan i'd bring sasuke back to her...as a way to show how much i love her
sakura: oh naruto -eyes water-
sasuke: but, i don't love, nor like sakura
*jiraiya walks up*
jiraiya: -laughs- keep this up, and your gonna get stuck with the "weird girl" naruto
naruto: HI PERVY SAGE!
jiraiya: -sweatdrop- even in the afterlife he calls me that
*all except sasuke laugh*
sasuke: hn.
sakura: sasuke-kun...we have ALL tried to save you, and our village has been very welcoming to you...because of naruto...now, you apologize to naruto, and to me for being an idiot to us since DAY ONE OF THE ACADEMY DAYS!
sasuke: no.
naruto: GRRR APOLOGIZE TO SAKURA-CHAN FOR TRYING TO KILL HER ON SEVERAL OCCASSIONS, AND FOR BEING NOTHING BUT RUDE TO HER ALL THE TIME!
sasuke: fine. i'm sorry sakura...there happy now
sakura: unforgiven!
sasuke: then why did i have to?
naruto: because we'll never see you again...-eyes water- the least you could do is say something nice to us
kushina: -walks up and bonks sasuke on the head- YOU APOLOGIZE TO NARUTO OR YOU'LL BE LIVING UNDERGROUND WITHOUT YOUR EYEBALLS! -bonks sasuke on the head-
sasuke: okay...i'm sorry naruto, for betraying you, and the village
obito: those who betray the village are worse than scum
sasuke: YOUR ONE TO TALK!
naruto: i forgive you sasuke...-wipes eyes-
kushina: now hug
sasuke: WHAT!?...no!
naruto: aww -hugs sasuke-
sasuke: -sweatdrop- let go.
naruto: -lets go- good luck with your new clan sasuke
*naruto hugs his parents, and jiraiya, and minato took naruto, and sakura back after they all sang happy birthday to naruto*
*naruto, kakashi, and sakura return to konoha*
karin: -runs over to sakura, sees naruto, and senses his warm energy- hi naruto.
naruto: hey karin...i'm sorry we couldn't bring sasuke with us -hangs head-
*ino. hinata, and even karin, tsunade and others hugged naruto, and wished him happy birthday*
naruto: this is the best birthday ever!
sakura: naruto...i love you so much!
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 26 June 2015 - 08:13 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Even though I am Indian, I have no idea what show this is.. Still.. that NS ending always deserves a like 

 

EDIT: This was for the 'hey jessie' one by the way. 

 

2nd EDIT: The NaruSaku omake was awesome as usual. I swear..I love the way you write Sasuke     

Edited by ns.Believe.It, 21 October 2014 - 04:51 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*dimension surfing*
[author note summary: another channel hop omake! this time narusaku get sucked into the world of Kim Possible, Teen Titans]
*dimension 1:teen titans*
naruto: i think we're in another animation
sakura: teen titans...lets go
*they go into the tower*
robin: hey, welcome to the titan tower
sakura: i think we got sucked into this dimension, and this time it's not due to a villan. i'm sakura, and this is naruto
naruto: we're from well, the anime of the same name.
*the titans introduced themselves*
starfire: so, is your series still going on?
sakura: well, it's ending in two weeks.
beast boy: hey! i know! we should do crossovers!
naruto: didn't your show end after five seasons?
sakura: then have a spin off with chibi versions of yourselves
naruto: hey...rocklee has a spin off like that...its not dubbed though. i don't know why.
sakura: well, spring time of youth was done by another editor
naruto: the way viz messes up sometimes they OWE our fans a spin off!, maybe a narusaku spin off!
sakura: if anyones doing our spin off it's s.p!
naruto: I KNOW!!!:why don't the narusaku fanbase come together, and form their own fanmade spin off!!!
sakura: they do...they're called FANFICTION, and fanart, and doujinshi
raven: -comes from her room-
beast boy: HI RAVEN!!!
raven: hello...i was meditating and could hear you all, aaall the way in my room....aren't you two ninja?
naruto/sakura: yes!
raven: well,...you two aren't dressed like ninja
naruto: -sweatdrop-
sakura: we're from an anime.
raven: -lifts her hood down-
naruto: why do you wear a cloak?
raven: why are YOU wearing halloween colors?...in every episode, and chapter?
sakura: well, in the pre-timeskip he wore ALL orange, and a hint of blue
naruto: yeah, i guess it's just a coincedence.
starfire: let us do something fun!
beast boy: hey naruto?, wanna have a ramen eating contest, then a video game contest?
naruto: YEAH!
*they run off and have their contests*
naruto/beastboy: I WIN!
naruto: NOOO!
beast boy: A TIE!
*after video games*
naruto: i win!!!
beast boy: NOOO! YOU BEAT MY HIGH SCORE!
naruto: sparring match?
robin: if you two are going to fight do it outside
sakura: or better, not at all! seriously naruto do you have to try to win at everything?
naruto: yeah -grins and laughs-
*the scene shifts now they're in a new anime-like cartoon*
naruto: AW MAN!
*naruto, and sakura go into bueno nacho*
voice: i'm telling you K.P it really happened!
kim: ron...there is no way an alien came, and sucked out your brain and made you fall asleep
ron: then how do you explain falling asleep during the greatest marathon on tv ever!?
kim: getting sleepy, and falling asleep due to exhaustion
ron: -whines- your no fun
*sakura and naruto walk over after the introduction*
ron: heeey we should do a crossover!
sakura: whats with everyone wanting to do a crossover with us?
kim: i guess, to make the popularity status even more popular...a great boost for writers block but, don't work for everyone
naruto: hey? think we'll have any mission on this trip sakura-chan?
sakura: i don't know
ron: you never knooow today might be your lucky, or unlucky day
*beep beep beep*
kim: -gets out pager- hi wade, whats the sitch?
wade: hi kim...there's been a break in at the costume store!...apparently someone stole all the costumes, and knocked down the shelves, and wracks!
kim: oh my gosh!, someone stole halloween!
wade: you wont believe who it was!... -dr drakken, and shego pop on the screen*
kim: drakken?
wade: no! shego!
ron/kim: THE SIDEKICK!
wade: and they're in tokyo!
kim: well, ron!, we're going to tokyo! you two want to join us? they'll be shocked to see ninja with us!
ron: yeah, and you can show them what a TRUE ninja can do!
sakura: sure!
naruto: i'll get us ALL there!
*they all poof to drakken's tokyo hideout*
kim: hey, thanks for the quick lift!
naruto: it's the least i can do after you asked us to join you!
drakken: wel, if it isn't kim possible, and three sidekicks now!
sakura: SIDE KICK!...-sweatdrop- guess i am
naruto: i'm naruto, and-
shego: well, well, well,hey! i know you your that annoying kid from naruto
naruto: no, thats sasuke whoes annoying. seriously
shego: eh, the annoying evil sidekick...every toon has one, and every good hero needs a good villan as a rival
naruto: see! now SHE gets it, and this isn't even a japanese anime
kim: back to buissness why did you steal the costumes from the store?
shego: i'm making A.I robots in disquise of cosplay, and having them take over the world
drakken: i gave her the idea...she said i did
shego: no, i said i've been watching how you do things and fail for so long that i wanted to prove i can come up with a better plot than you.
kim: well, this plan would have succeeded but, we found out! so, you fail to
*kim, and shego fight*
sakura, and ron: -takes the costumes back to the store-
drakken: -laughs- that idea failed to!
naruto: you know for mad scientists your really dumb
drakken: and you could do better?
naruto: yeah...i'm a jinchuuriki, sage, and a ninja...i could destroy a whole village but, i choose not to.
shego: grrr YOU RUINED MY PLAN POSSIBLE!
kim: nothing new there.
naruto: speaking of evil scientists' we actually had an evil scientist as a villan.
drakken: well, there's a reason i can't be 100% evil-
naruto: did anyone tell you you kinda look like freakazoid?
drakken: heeey!
*ron, and sakura come back*
sakura: your idea just got canceled!
shego: aren't you just a sidekick to?
sakura: SHANANROOO I'M NOT A SIDEKICK! -punches shego
ron: waw, how come we don't have THAT kind of action?
kim: we kissed during our prom thats as far as things'll ever go in disney.i mean when naruto shipuuden was on our disney XD network so many edits made it get canceled!,
naruto: so, as kid shows spice up it's like teen shows dumb down...AAAH! AMERICA'S TURNING UPSIDE DOWN! -stands on his head-
ron: -laughs-
kim: will one of you make sure the robots aren't activated?
*naruto uses shadow clones to smash all the machines, and bots*
drakken: heeey! now, how'll we rule the world?
*later back at the nacho place*
*kim on her pager*
store owner: thank you for returning the costumns back to the store, and fixing our shelves, and racks'
sakura: your welcome!
kim: so, not the drama. always happy to help!
naruto: waw...after today, i'm going to make sure i never call sakura a sidekick!...she's my equal we're heaven, and earth.
ron: yeah, after seeing how sidekicks could be worse than the main villan i bet co-protaganists can be stronger than the main hero!
naruto: yeah may-wait, HEY!
*naruto, and sakura shift back to naruto's apartment*
naruto: that was interesting
sakura: yeah, and fun
naruto: i wish you and i can work together like kim, and ron do...we'd make a great team
sakura: we do make an amazing team...and we have faught together before...but, yeah. i see what you mean
*naruto, and sakura hug, and kiss*
THE END


 

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 21 October 2014 - 02:14 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Well, you seem to be full on writer mode today 

 

Nice omake and this part...

 

naruto: i wish you and i can work together like kim, and ron do...we'd make a great team
sakura: we do make an amazing team...and we have faught together before...but, yeah. i see what you mean

 

...is so very true. I have always wanted to see Naruto and Sakura fight side by side. I hope we get such a scene in the movie.

Edited by ns.Believe.It, 21 October 2014 - 02:15 PM.

[narusaku256]

Starlitestarbrite writer unleashed XD There's no stopping her now XD Brilllliiannt omake girl! XD

[starlitestarbrite]

*naruto, and sakura vs. an NS fan*
[author note summary: an NS fan has advice for naruto, and sakura...]
*naruto, and sakura, and an NS fan are all at the bench*
NS fan : naruto, you deserve sooo much better., sakura's confession to sasuke was so wrong
sakura: i was desparate!
naruto: how do you know it wasn't...you know...CLOSURE? NH had closure back in an earlier chapter when hinata said after the war she would move on.
NS fan: BUT, SAKURA CONFESSED AGAIN!
sakura: I DID NOT!
NS fan : lets review shall we?
*flashback to 693*
sakura: -to sasuke- the truth is i've always known in my heart there was nothing i could have done for you, i love you, no matter what's happened i still care about you more than i can bear
*end*
sakura: i said "i love you" as in "well, i may not like you but i love you as a friend"
NS fan : you could have said THAT!, or you could have said something to naruto...LIKE HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
naruto: well, it wasn't the time for that!
NS fan : OR, if you wanted to sound selfless you could have said-
*flashback*
sakura: -to sasuke- i've always known in my heart there was nothing i could have done for you, but, naruto, myself, and kakashi sensei, and many others have tried so hard to save you from this path!, even though you don't care about us we still care about you, and if there is still room in your heart please consider comming back so, we can be a team again...that's all we ask of you sasuke-kun
*end*
naruto/sakura: WAW!
naruto: sounds like a fan rewrite is in order! that was actually really true, and sweet! sounds like NSfans' should redo scanlations more NS-like
sakura: i know! happy manga birthday naruto
*naruto, and sakura hug*
naruto: i hope we are endgame
sakura: so do i
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 22 October 2014 - 03:51 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

You story is better once again, Something like those words would have been so much better. I would be lying if I say I was totally okay with what Sakura actually said in 693. It not only made her character look bad but it was also cruel on Naruto.  

[starlitestarbrite]

*latern day festival...wait...it's the festival of light!?*
[author note summary: naruto, and sakura go to what they THINK is the lantern festival[sidenote:i like looking up holidays from around the world.]
*naruto and sakura are having a pic nic*
sakura: like the pumpkin cookies i made? -holds up a sugar cookie with a pumpkin on it-
naruto: yes, they're good sakura-chan. are we going to shocktober halloween festival next week in konoha?
sakura: OF COURSE!.
*meanwhile in konoha*
*kiba, and lee are at the manga store*
kiba: hey lee?...look -shows lee a picture of naruto, and hinata with a pretty out doors background-
lee: yes, it is from the movie i think.
kiba: look closer!
lee: well, naruto looks unhappy
*ino comes up*
ino: what are you two looking at?
kiba: this -shows her the magazine picture- if NS is endgame then why is hinata there?
lee: even though he does look sad. the manga has been very unyouthful to the main character...i believe naruto deserves a happy ending,
ino: um...guys?
kiba: i know! hopefully it's teasing the NH shippers
ino: guys?
lee: but, it is so close to the end...should they be tying things up? not being cruel to naruto, sakura-san, or their fans!
ino: GUYS!!!
kiba/lee: yes?
ino: did you two look at the cover? -holds up magazine this is shoujo jump...their doing a parody of shounen jump for their halloween edition see?...everyones getting ready for SHOCKtober fest next week
kiba: now THAT made since
lee: AH, YES! ENERGY WILL RUN HIGH THAT NIGHT.
*back to sakura, and naruto*
*naruto, and sakura notice some villagers singing around candles*
sakura: is today a holiday?
naruto: must be...it looks like there's also a festival of light going on as well.
sakura: -gasp- this isn't the lantern festival! -checks calendar-... that was in februrary this year, and it'll be in march next year but, i think we just found the holiday that'll replace christmas someday -sweatdrop-
naruto: then what'll we have in december!
sakura: yuletide?, winter solictice?.
naruto: but, if christmas don't come...HOW'LL I STILL GET KFC CHICKEN!?
sakura: guess we can move it up to thanksgiving...turkey, dressing, and KFC!
naruto: mmm...i bet they have fireworks!...this holiday must have alittle of everything!
sakura: hey, i'll meet you back at our pic nik spot -winks--runs off-
naruto: wait!...-sighs-
voice: would you like a free gift to give your girlfriend?
naruto: -turns around- hi
girl: hi...how about this necklace -holds it up- show her she's the charm in your life!
*back at the picnik spot*
sakura: -hands naruto a box- this holiday is called diwali i believe...happy holiday, may as well get into the spirit while we're at their festival
naruto: -shakes the box- wonder what it is?
sakura: -laughs- open it, and see!
naruto: wait! why are we doing this now, and not waiting untill december?
sakura: our series is ending, and i want to celebrate with you! since this IS a spiritual festive holiday like christmas was once thought to be why not just celebrate this one instead?
naruto: yeah...commercialism, and materialism ruined what was once a fun, great holiday...oh well, at least now we can give eachother gifts that come from the heart! not from the mind of having to make a list...wheres the surprise in that?
sakura: WILL YOU OPEN YOUR PRESENT!
naruto: eh, sorry sakura-chan. -opens the box there is a new black jacket like in the movie, and under THAT is a small box of cupcake cookies.]
naruto: YAY! I LOVE THEM...BUT I LOVE YOU MORE SAKURA-CHAN!
*naruto hugs sakura she hugs back and blushes*
naruto: i got you something to -puts a necklace around sakura's neck- just like the scarf you got me for my birthday...now we both will be with eachother's hearts
voices: AWWW
sakura: -eyes water- thats so, sweet naruto. i love you naruto -blushes-
naruto: wait...you know what i realized? we don't know any of their holiday songs!
sakura: lets just take this holiday one step at a time, and enjoy a new "present" every year it comes.
girl: heeey...you two are new to diwali traditions?
naruto: yeah -sweatdrop-
girl: -gives them sparklers- the fireworks are starting -winks-
sakura/naruto: FIREWORKS! -run over to sit in the crowd-
*as the fireworks light up the sky everyone lights their sparklers*
sakura: i could get used to this holiday.
naruto: what do you think the meaning of it is though?
sakura: -looks around, then back at naruto- i'm guessing love
*naruto, and sakura kiss under the fireworks*
[side note: i'm subscribed to some holiday calendars on yahoo mail lol. it said the 23d of oct was diwali in india so i thought :" i'll try to do a holiday omake as a way of wishing narusaku256, and ns.believe.it a happy holidays...if they celebrate it lol. plus i just had to make fun of the lastest NaruHina movie tease lol]

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 16 April 2016 - 06:05 PM.

[Iwantbuns]

Awesome as usual! :3