Jump to content

Close
Photo

Drabble thread V3.0


  • This topic is locked This topic is locked
286 replies to this topic

#201 CrashLanded

CrashLanded

    One Cat To Rule Them All And In The Darkness Bind Them.

  • Chakra Tree Climber
  • PipPip
  • 285 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The land of the Monsoon and the Tiger and the Elephant.

Posted 01 December 2007 - 02:59 AM

QUOTE (Recompense @ Dec 1 2007, 08:01 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
biggrin.gif

i have decided that after way too many complaints about the dark nature of my drabbles, i have decided to present to yhou why i don not write fluff, luff, or anything with two f's in it.

thank you and good day


“An exercise in futility, she’ll never return your love. The slut is too interested in the Uchiha’s blood”

Naruto sat there, opposite his sensei, lazily sprawled out in his lazy recliner.

“Sensei, you know I respect you. But if you ever insult Sakura-chan again, I’ll kill you.”

Takeshi nodded his head, and raised his glass in a sign of assent

“Seriously, my dear, dearly misguided student, if you honestly think She’s just going to barge in here, land a big sloppy one all over your face, and then confess her love for you, you’re an idiot beyond all hope.”

Naruto looked glumly at his sensei. His sensei was rarely this pessimistic about Naruto’s lovelife.

“But then again…”

Suddenly, the door to the ANBU room slammed open, and his pink-haired love stomped across the room.

Before Naruto could even shout out a greeting, she was on him, shoving her lips against his, her tongue greedily exploring his mouth, her sweet, sweet tongue gave him an experience beyond taste, or feeling. It was so wonderful, Naruto began to feel light-headed, his vision swimming so much, he couldn’t tell if there were two angels before him, or just one.

Sakura pulled her head back slowly, nibbling on his lower lip as she did, driving Naruto’s overwhelmed mind even further to the edge. He followed her head with his own, trying desperately to feel her again, if just for a moment.

“Naruto… I love you.”

They kissed once again, their bodies melding together into one being made of pleasure, bliss, and a healthy dose of lust. They rolled off of the chair, Naruto landing solidly on his back, he didn’t even notice, he was too busy with his Sakura-chan.

Takeshi watched amusedly, relaxing in his recliner and smiling pleasantly to himself. He felt quite pleased with the fact that Sakura had finally made out with Naruto, the boy had been acting weird lately, and Takeshi couldn’t be held responsible for his actions if Naruto came whining for advice yet again.

“…I’ve been wrong before.”


look upon mine suckage and DESPAIR!!


After so much of drama, Recomp pulls out a fluffy one out of his hat, and its pretty nice for someone who says his fluff sucks. wow.png
My friend, you just underestimate yourself. Rise above the self loathing, my friend and be united in the fluffiness of NaruSaku (add a live duck if its not fluffy enough). 111193.gif XD
QUOTE (The Dream Cat @ "A Dream Of A Thousand Cats")
"Many, many seasons ago, cats truly ruled the world.
We were larger then, and the whole world was created for our pleasure. We roamed as we would, taking what we wanted.
In those times, humans were tiny creatures, no larger than we are now.
And humans would groom us and feed us and pet us.
"

#202 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 01 December 2007 - 04:21 AM

Now, THAT one I like.

#203 whoamii

whoamii

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 335 posts

Posted 01 December 2007 - 05:20 AM

Haha, it's alright to be angsty...i get my emo moments...errr....kinda.. XD
Variety is good. =]

#204 Recompense

Recompense

    Shameful Member of the YEAR!!

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 360 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The place between silly and dead

Posted 01 December 2007 - 05:34 AM

err.gif

GOOD!?

are we reading the same drabble!?

A monkey with a keyboard could type better fluff than that!
I'm just sitting here. Wondering what it'd be like To be with you.

#205 Rick (Bonta-kun)

Rick (Bonta-kun)

    FUMOFFU!

  • Summoning Master
  • PipPipPip
  • 1,374 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Melbourne, Australia

Posted 01 December 2007 - 06:16 AM

Recomp, that fluff drabble was awesome, i loved it. biggrin.gif


#206 CrashLanded

CrashLanded

    One Cat To Rule Them All And In The Darkness Bind Them.

  • Chakra Tree Climber
  • PipPip
  • 285 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The land of the Monsoon and the Tiger and the Elephant.

Posted 01 December 2007 - 06:43 AM

QUOTE (rickp2006 @ Dec 1 2007, 11:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Recomp, that fluff drabble was awesome, i loved it. biggrin.gif


See? No one says your fluff is bad. Everyone likes it, so what are you crying about? Next time try a cotton candy version without Takeshi (he's getting really annoying)
QUOTE (The Dream Cat @ "A Dream Of A Thousand Cats")
"Many, many seasons ago, cats truly ruled the world.
We were larger then, and the whole world was created for our pleasure. We roamed as we would, taking what we wanted.
In those times, humans were tiny creatures, no larger than we are now.
And humans would groom us and feed us and pet us.
"

#207 whoamii

whoamii

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 335 posts

Posted 01 December 2007 - 11:23 PM

QUOTE (Recompense @ Dec 1 2007, 05:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
err.gif

GOOD!?

are we reading the same drabble!?

A monkey with a keyboard could type better fluff than that!

Lol, I doubt that. If they can spell one day, all I'd see is:

"Bananas. Bananas. Bananas. Bananas." for five pages or so.

#208 Sakura~Kitsune

Sakura~Kitsune

  • Summoning Master
  • PipPipPip
  • 1,486 posts
  • Gender:Female
  • Location:The Forgotten Borough formerly known as Staten Island!
  • Interests:Reading, Writing, Roleplaying, Magical Girls, Anime/Manga, Video Games, Music, Friends/Family, and Food!

Posted 02 December 2007 - 01:12 AM

Nice drabble, Compy-kun~ laugh.gif I enjoyed it. Seriously though, no one is saying that your fluff is bad so what are you gong on about? And yesh... we're all reading the same drabble.

Last night I thought I wouldn't have time to do anything else besides getting ready for my High School Audition. Turns out when my hand started to scream bloody murder... I took a reaaalllyyy long break and dragged myself over to my computer. Jeez, I AM getting too lazy~ This one is longer than usual, but I outstretched it mainly because I was bored last night~ XD

Cleaning Bets and Portraits.

How she hated when her shishou was right...

In her younger years, Sakura would never think of believing the blonde hokage about betting against Naruto. The rosette would most likely shrug the thought away of losing against the boy in anything at that. Dear Kami... how she was so very wrong about that.

What started out as an early morning spar between two teammates changed into a bet between two friends. Sakura was taken back at what she witnessed early that morning when her mission to wake up Naruto began. Of course she would have to venture her way through his jungle of a bedroom... but she didn't expect it to be like this. Dodging dirty clothes, avoiding week-old ramen cups, and trying her best NOT to stumble upon any scattered kunai.

The bet was a simple one. If Sakura lost their spar, she would have to clean up his apartment with him. But if Naruto lost, he would have to clean up without any help from Sakura the next day. It was to be an easy win and that's exactly what they both thought... Sakura especially. She knew that Naruto could easily beat her with his Kage Bushins, but even she had some tricks under her sleeves.

Victory though... went to the knucklehead...

And this is why she now stands among discarded clothing. Not surprising, Naruto disappeared from the bedroom mumbling about getting the two something to eat. Bah, as if... he actually walked out when their cleaning got somewhere. It wasn't that the hours of work was getting her tired, but Naruto had yet to return... and his house was utterly quiet.

Oh yes, he had deserted her.

What was the point to keep continuing? Just to find personal stuff in which belonged to Naruto? Sakura wasn't the type to go looking through people's belongings, it's been tempting for years... but never would she think of reopening old secrets which her good friends stored away from others. She needed to choose, just walk out of the mess or reintroduce herself to the broom and dustpan...

Ugh, cleaning it is.

Dust... so much dust danced around her legs as the broom's teeth skated across the floor. If she could say so herself, the bedroom was looking very decent. All she needed to do was escort the now small pile of clothes into the washing machine and the ramen cups into the wastebasket. Though as most people know, every good thing which comes their way... a problem would try to outshine. And this "little" problem would leave even Kakashi shivering in fear.

Under his bed. Sakura and that broom companion of hers would have to venture under Uzumaki Naruto's own bed. Who knew exactly what goes underneath that thing... If she could remember, most things that roll under there, never return... But, it was time to be brave. She wasn't Tsunade's apprentice for nothing and no single bed could scare her!

Gah. Disgusting. If she wasn't blinded at that moment, Sakura was certain she would leave to find that Naruto and show exactly how she feels about all of this. The place hasn't been clean for ages as many could tell but come on, this much dust could get a single person sick. It was burning her eyes, anymore of this stuff and Sakura was sure she would gag... she needed to get from under here and put herself back together. Naruto had deserted her and needed a FIRM talking to... Oh yes, he would pay.

Sakura was free... well, if you called it free. Only problem was that she brought a worn out box with her. Fingers brushed across the handwriting which seemed to be written with chickenscratch. She couldn't read it one bit and only pointed out one word stating "Naru". Dare she open it? Anything could pop out and scare the living daylights out of her. Meh, she'd take the chance... knowing Naruto, it was probably his old pranks.

She was brave... She was brave... She was--- Hell no, she wasn't brave. Naruto was a tricky one back then but seesh, even now his childish pranks were still well known. Just. Open. It.

This time though, not a single speck of dust blew her way when the box opened. What could be in the damned thing she asked. What? Her heart was seriously throbbing against her chest, why did she feel like a part of a Bomb Squad right now..?

...Papers... Emerald eyes scanned through the box discovering pictures. Not photographs but hand-drawn pictures. Did Naruto draw these? She didn't know, but if he did... his "artistic ability" was horrible. If Sai saw this, God help him. A stack of papers positioned themselves in her hands, flipping through them it seemed the style changed. The main figure on each piece of paper would recieve more texture, more emotion and much more color. Especially the last page... if that girl did not look like Sakura herself, the combat medic didn't know who it was.

"Maybe then..." Making one last check, she scanned the rest of the pages once again. All thoughts of cleaning were disregarded as the papers scattered across the room. Her fingers had slipped, due to the realization which overcame her.

...Sakura was the star of every picture...

Had Naruto drawn all of these during his spare time...? Did he want to prove something...? To others? To himself or just her...? Her figure fell flat to the floor, it was just too much. Sakura had no idea if she should cry, smile or even both. It felt as if a dizzy spell overcame her.

"SAKURA-CHYAAN~!"

She was greeted with a huge bowl of ramen which now positioned itself by her knees. Naruto was smiling towards her with a flushed face. He was running, wasn't he? So he had left to go get food for the two of them. A smile overcame her as he placed the chopsticks in her hand... but soon...

Sakura had whacked him in the head knocking the poor boy to the ground.

"Where the hell were you?! Leaving me to clean this disaster area! Do you even want to know exactly what I had to do?! ARGH! I should've listened to Shishou when she said NOT to bet against you!" Furiated. Her feet pounded against the floor. Her arms flailed in the air. Her heel had scratched against the box and the rant had ended. Sakura had remembered... the latest picture had now fallen between the two.

"S-Sakura-chan?!" she jumped at his startled tone. He had snatched the picture away from her and his face completely flushed. Did he not want her to see? Well, it was too late for that. "So~ You drew these, huh Naruto? Well all I've got to say that you've probably outshined Sai~!". Crawling from his frightening state, the thorn stuck in his throat disappeared when he gulped one last time.

"You really think so...?" Aw, she had to say that he looked cute when he was nervous.

"Think so? If you keep practicing... Hell, who knows what you could draw!" Picking up the bowl of ramen before it became cold, Sakura snapped her chopsticks and began to eat. "...So, does that mean I can draw you some more, Sakura-chan?". His thoughts on food had disappeared shortly after, similar to the cleaning thoughts which belonged to Sakura. Before she knew it, he was running back over to her with a sketchpad and pencil.

"Sure. You can draw me. You can even say that I'll be your model" with a noodle now hanging from the tugs of her lip, Sakura suddenly noticed that Naruto was already drawing away. Sakura gawked at said boy before lashing out on him with a right hook sending him across the room.

"BAKA!! Not when I'm eating!!! I'll look like a freakin' FOOL!"

tumblr_n9ki6ltPXZ1qai1u2o1_500.gif
 

No matter how dark it is, you’re not alone you know?

The moonlight is shining on us

 


#209 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 02 December 2007 - 01:42 AM

I like that one.

Can I put these drabbles on my FF.net account?

#210 Jwolf0

Jwolf0

    Gotta catch 'em all!

  • Special Jounin
  • PipPipPip
  • 882 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Georgia
  • Interests:Seasonal sports fan. Adept at pulling defeat from the jaws of victory. Sadly allows RL to interfere with gaming and anime stuffs.

Posted 02 December 2007 - 08:12 AM

Kitsu-chan, I enjoyed that one! I could see Naruto taking extra care to draw the noodle hanging from Sakura's lips too. XD

Recomp, that would be an awfully skilled monkey then. I liked your drabble... Takeshi should be wrong more often!

Warning: Sasuke may be slightly OOC. But it's for a good cause.

Impulse. Pot, kettle. Kettle, pot.


“You had it all set up. Dinner and a moonlit walk to the top of the Hokage Monument, then the proposal and ring while Gamakichi scattered sakura petals all around?”

“Yeah.”

“But then you were your normal impulsive self and asked Sakura to marry you while eating ramen just hours before your plan.”

“Well, she accepted….”

“…After she punched you for being an ‘unromantic, tactless idiot. ‘ Hn. Dobe.”

“Screw you, bastard. At least Sakura-chan and I have been together for years. Again, how long did you know that Hikari girl before she moved in, maybe two weeks?”

“…Shut up.”

~~~~
Apparently I've become fond of dialect lately.

QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


Be the Ultimate Ninja! Or Reaper! Or Zombie Killer... or something. Play Billy Vs. SNAKEMAN!

#211 Recompense

Recompense

    Shameful Member of the YEAR!!

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 360 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The place between silly and dead

Posted 04 December 2007 - 06:57 AM

I find that i always envision my scenes in the rain. must come from being raised in washington.

Or the fact ppl keep dying.

either way.


He stood in the rain.

It crashed around him, a thousand tiny drips of steel, pounding into the pavement. In his right hand hung the roses. He had picked them out from the park. He didn’t have the money to buy some. He wanted to show her his affection. To show her he cared. The door had been slammed in his face. How was he to know that she still lived with her parents?

He looked up, facing the sky with an unchanging face. His emotion must not be shown. Emotion is weak. Well, that’s what his sensei had taught him. The rain kept falling. The roses had given up, and now sagged towards the ground in a gesture of defeat. He closed his eyes, relishing the feel of the rain on his face. It reminded him that he was still alive. Still alive.

Well, maybe tomorrow her parents wouldn’t be there.

He would try again tomorrow

And the day after that.

He would pick new flowers, he would climb mountains, he would train…

All for her.


meh, the ending sucked. Mah brain just decided i was on my own for that part.

unsure.gif
I'm just sitting here. Wondering what it'd be like To be with you.

#212 Jwolf0

Jwolf0

    Gotta catch 'em all!

  • Special Jounin
  • PipPipPip
  • 882 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Georgia
  • Interests:Seasonal sports fan. Adept at pulling defeat from the jaws of victory. Sadly allows RL to interfere with gaming and anime stuffs.

Posted 04 December 2007 - 11:00 AM

Don't think it's Washington, I was born and spent quite some time there as well. (I do miss it.)

The people dying... eh, maybe that's it.
QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


Be the Ultimate Ninja! Or Reaper! Or Zombie Killer... or something. Play Billy Vs. SNAKEMAN!

#213 Jwolf0

Jwolf0

    Gotta catch 'em all!

  • Special Jounin
  • PipPipPip
  • 882 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Georgia
  • Interests:Seasonal sports fan. Adept at pulling defeat from the jaws of victory. Sadly allows RL to interfere with gaming and anime stuffs.

Posted 09 December 2007 - 07:54 PM

Apologies for the double post, but it's been a few days. For some reason I just sat on this one.

Que Sera Sera. Whatever will be, will be.


Mirei cried in her mother’s lap. “It’s not fair! Why doesn’t Taro like me?”

Sakura sighed, remembering when she was Mirei’s age. “Sasuke-kuuun! Wanna train together?” “Sakura-chan, I’ll train with you!” “Go away, Naruto!”

Holding her daughter, she hummed a tune. Its gentle melody calmed Mirei. “That’s pretty,” she said. “What’s it called?”

“’Que Sera Sera.’ It’s something your Grandmother sang to me sometimes.”

“What does that mean?”

Eventually Sakura found her happiness reflected not in angry onyx eyes, but loving cerulean ones.

“It means don’t worry about Taro or anyone else, dear. You’ll discover your true love in time.”

~~~
Feels kinda 'eh' to me. Maybe it's because not much happens? I dunno.

QUOTE ("Down Goes Brown")
(For the younger readers, "HMV" and "Sam The Record Man" were record stores.)

(For the younger readers, a "record store" was a building that you had to go to when you wanted to buy music.)

(For the younger readers, "buying music" was the way we acquired it, since we couldn't just… you know what, let's just get back to the Bowen song. Stupid kids, you ruin everything.)


Be the Ultimate Ninja! Or Reaper! Or Zombie Killer... or something. Play Billy Vs. SNAKEMAN!

#214 SakuNaruLover

SakuNaruLover

    Don't fear the darkness

  • S-Class Missing Nin
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 2,702 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The Hague
  • Interests:Hobbies: Gaming, reading manga, watching anime, playing games, reading fanfics, writing fanfics and my own stories, talking with my friends.<br /><br />Manga: <br />-naruto <br />-bleach<br />-clannad<br />-fullmetal alchemist<br /><br />Anime: <br />-naruto<br />-naruto shippuden<br />-bleach <br />-shakugan no shana<br />-shakugan no shana second<br />-clannad<br />-kanon<br />-air<br />-zero no tsukaima<br />-fullmetal alchemist<br />-code geass<br />-code geass r2<br />-gundam wing<br />-gundam 00<br />-melancholy of suzumiya haruhi<br />-hayate no gotoku

Posted 09 December 2007 - 09:06 PM

happy.gif Nice drabbles everyone!
Maybe I'll go write a few soon as well
I am neither good nor evil, I am awake yet I dream

#215 Recompense

Recompense

    Shameful Member of the YEAR!!

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 360 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The place between silly and dead

Posted 12 December 2007 - 08:12 PM

alright

Takeshi will die.

at least, thats the plan

however, he's back to kill everyone else, first.

sorry to dissappoint, but i want the character to die ON-screen, seeing as he's given me so much trouble.


She cooked the meal, beef sizzled on the pan as she mixed it around. She needed to, otherwise it would stick and form crunchy bits that were unpleasant for everybody. She swiped an errant strand of her long blond hair out of the way sub-consciously, it had developed to become a habit. She kept the hair, all that remained of her days as a ninja. She turned from the stove, and drew out a large knife. It was a cooking knife, ill-suited for anything but short chops. Her hands worked with the diligence of a stay at home mother, yet they moved with the agility and short perfection that spoke of ninja-training.

“Yamanaka Ino, now Akimichi Ino, correct?”

She spun around, drawing her knife up in a defensive motion. She hadn’t heard the man come in, yet there he sat, his traveling cloak splayed around him like a cape, his hood lowered. He was a familiar man, a man she remembered from before Naruto became Kage, and she married her husband.

“Takeshi. You’re dead.”

Takeshi stood up, his stance relaxed and loose. Ino couldn’t see his blade with him, so he clearly did not have it. Takeshi wore his blade like a badge of honor, it was the one part of himself he hadn’t hid from them all. He wore that same smile from before. That winning smile.

“Ahhh, well, I suppose I’m not actually here then, am i? and clearly, I am not here to exact revenge, because I am obviously dead.”

He was mocking her. He obviously knew more than her, seeing as he was supposed to be dead by his own hands. However, Ino knew one thing he didn’t. Chouji would be back home in a half hour. Tops. All she had to do was delay him, and he didn’t even have a weapon.

“You know what I meant. Traitor.”

Takeshi flinched, hissing as if he had been burned. It was over-dramatic, he mocked her still.

“Oh, Ino-chan, you wound me! Why, I did nothing more than I intended to do in the first place.”

Ino needed to keep him talking. She had to. He was beyond her, especially now. Five years of relaxation, good food and no exercise had added more than a couple layers to her… love handles, as Chouki called them.

“What did you intend, Takeshi?”

he smiled. It was the same smile from before, when he had murdered all those genin and chuunin. When he had stood over Sakura and mocked Naruto. The same insane smile.

“That would be telling, wouldn’t it?”

and he was moving. He was inches away in a single moment. She slashed at his throat, it was a sloppy stab, allowing him to duck under it and grab her bicep from behind. His left hand suddenly caught her wrist, locking her in place. She lashed out with her right hand, but before she could hit, he had kicked her in the ribs. However, with his hold on her arm, he simply popped the entire arm out of its socket.

“Gah! HELP!!”

he twisted her wrist and quickly took the knife from her hand, and in a spinning motion, whirled around, his knife seemed to move in slow motion, as it descended on the back of her neck.

And with a meaty thunk, a spray of blood, and a gurgle for help.

Akimichi Ino was dead.

Takeshi stepped over the body without sparing it a second glance. There was a vast assortment of kitchen knives. And Ino-chan had been kind enough to make a meal for him! She was just the sweetest, wasn’t she?

I'm just sitting here. Wondering what it'd be like To be with you.

#216 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 12 December 2007 - 08:51 PM

Ahhhh, WTF?

You killed Ino?????????

I'll kill you backstabber.

#217 Recompense

Recompense

    Shameful Member of the YEAR!!

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 360 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The place between silly and dead

Posted 14 December 2007 - 06:13 AM

Well. i came up with a name for ChoujiXIno's kid

altho im being kinda mean to the brat.

meh.

evil gives nor asks no mercy



“Ino, baby! I’m hoooome!”

A large, bombastic man burst through the door of his home, happily announcing his presence to his wife. Working as an academy instructor was a tiring, and often unrewarding job. He needed all the support from his wife as he could get. And by support I am of course referring to motivation. And by Motivation I am obviously again referring to yelling. Either way, Chouji and Ino led happy lives, and that’s all that mattered to them. Until now.

“Ah, Chouji-kun. I’m afraid Ino-chan’s a bit busy right now, but I’m sure she’ll see you real soon.”

Chouji knew that voice. It was the voice of a dead man. He had sensed the intruder only after he had entered the room. There was only one man with that voice. One man who could hide his Chakra that completely.

“Takeshi.”

Takeshi indeed sat in the lounge directly to Chouji’s right, relaxing back into a large comfy recliner. His hands rested uncomfortably on the armrests. They were too far apart, as they were meant for a man as large and wide as Chouji. Takeshi made eye contact, and smiled the same smile Ino had seen not hours before.

“Where’s Ino, Takeshi.”

It was stated less of a question, and more like a threat. And as always with a threat, Takeshi replied as cordially and kind as he could. Manners were, after all, very important.

“Oh, she’s in the kitchen. She’s a bit tired though, try not to wake her.”

Chouji was gone before Takeshi could finish talking.

He stumbled into the kitchen to see the sight of his wife on the ground. The back of her neck was chopped open like a split log, the butcher knife lay next to her, its task fulfilled. Chouji’s eyes filled with tears as he looked down on the woman he had finally found happiness with. when suddenly he felt a hot breath on his neck.

“Shhhhhh, you might wake her.”

Chouji spun around, swinging his arm like a man possessed, missing Takeshi by a mile. Takeshi meanwhile performed a back-handspring. In the process of such he smashed his foot into Chouji’s chin, sending the rotund ninja stumbling back into the sink.

Takeshi leaned back against the refridgerator, before suddenly launching himself at the fat ninja once again. Chouji could barely fight against Takeshi’s sudden onslaught, and he could feel his face being tenderized, he could barely feel his arms anymore. Takeshi just kept punching Chouji in the face. It wasn’t an attack to kill, but an attack to crush. Chouji could barely lift his arms anymore. He felt like a boxer that’s taken fifteen too many punches to the temple. Takeshi suddenly punched Chouji on the shoulder, spinning the man around. Takeshi pushed Chouji’s face towards the water-filled sink, his intentions clear.

“Look, Chouji. Ino-chan was kind enough to leave enough water to clean the fat rats in her kitchen!”

Chouji flailed, lashing out at Takeshi as best a demoralized, physically beaten, and concussed man could.

It was over in a minute. Takeshi simply relaxed his grip once he was sure that Chouji had stopped moving. He carefully let go of the man, stepping calmly back like a parent backing from the crib of a child that has finally reached sleep.

He turned around and immediately began singing a jaunty tune as he stepped out of the house. Unaware of the witness he had accidentally left alive.

Ino and Chouji’s six year old child. Chouzu.


need help with a name

just banged on the keyboard till something japanese-y came out.

Also, ideas on the next victim?

we've got 4-5 more to go
I'm just sitting here. Wondering what it'd be like To be with you.

#218 Wilson

Wilson

    My burden...my life.....

  • Jounin
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 1,646 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Auckland, New Zealand
  • Interests:Lol, er, Manga, Anime, games and stuff. <br /><br />Also, writer in fanfiction.net. Go by the name weixuan18.

Posted 14 December 2007 - 06:28 AM

Recomp, have to admit, your angst is getting better. Lol. XD
You try to know everything , yet in the end, you truly understand nothing ....
Wilson's fanfic account : weixuan18

Witness teh awesomness that is Deidara Lover!!! <3

#219 Gnosismaster

Gnosismaster

    Chakra Water Walker

  • Chakra Water Walker
  • PipPip
  • 322 posts
  • Location:Village Hidden in the Sand

Posted 14 December 2007 - 04:05 PM

I'll kill you, you SOB.

#220 CrashLanded

CrashLanded

    One Cat To Rule Them All And In The Darkness Bind Them.

  • Chakra Tree Climber
  • PipPip
  • 285 posts
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:The land of the Monsoon and the Tiger and the Elephant.

Posted 15 December 2007 - 03:14 AM

Recomp... this angst-fest is going too long, just kill the damn Takeshi and be over with. Frankly you don't sound much like a teenager with those killings and stuff. The world has enough angst as it is, so we need fluff... the sugary cottony kind of heavy fluff (remember to keep that homicidal Takeshi out).
QUOTE (The Dream Cat @ "A Dream Of A Thousand Cats")
"Many, many seasons ago, cats truly ruled the world.
We were larger then, and the whole world was created for our pleasure. We roamed as we would, taking what we wanted.
In those times, humans were tiny creatures, no larger than we are now.
And humans would groom us and feed us and pet us.
"




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users