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[ns.Believe.It]

Well, that was certainly very interesting. The ending was fantastic , very creative writing...but...no NS kiss this time? 

[starlitestarbrite]

I put it in lol

[ns.Believe.It]

Excellent . I have become used to that ending 

[*- ZerΩ -*]

excellent work again.
I must point out that you have a very good taste of humor.
I laughed a lot while reading it :-D

[narusaku256]

excellent work again.
I must point out that you have a very good taste of humor.
I laughed a lot while reading it :-D

THIS!

[starlitestarbrite]

*the dark naruto arc*
[author note summary: set after jiraiya dies. what if naruto DID choose to go down the revenge path? he leaves the village, and goes after the akatsuki...but, something snaps...who can save HIM from himself? this time sakura has to choose...because now both of her teammates have gone down the dark path]

episode 1

*in naruto's room naruto's lying in bed*
*flashback to the hospital scene*
jiraiya: you need to forget about sasuke...you have bigger problems than him right now
naruto: but, i can't!
*ends*
*flashback meeting itachi*
itachi: why are you obsessed with finding my brother?
naruto: because...i need to...sure he's important to me but, he's important to someone i hold dear to my heart...i promised her i would bring him back home
itachi: what if you fail? then will you still keep trying knowing you'll just keep chasing a broken promise?
naruto: -eyes water- i wont give up untill i bring him back...that has always been my nindo, and still is!
itachi: we both know he's only after me...but, really now if that were all you, and i wouldn't be talking...face it...he's one of us now
naruto: NO HE WILL NEVER BE ONE OF YOU!
itachi: this is a warning. keep this up, and you'll fall right into our trap...the other akatsuki members are on your trail now -walks off-
*end*
naruto: -cries into his pillow- oh sakura-chan...i REALLY hope i don't once again cause you pain
*next morning naruto's awaken by kakashi knocking on his window*
naruto: hey...kakashi-sensei?
kakashi: naruto. the hokage needs to see you in her office imediantly.
naruto: -whines- but, it's too early
kakashi: she said you'd say that...she said her reply was i quote "get to my office or i'll drag you out here myself".
naruto: -sweatdrop- well, she's in a bad mood
kakashi: you will be too when you learn whats going on.
*outside the hokage office*
naruto: huh? hey its grandpa toad, and gamakichi! whats going on?
gamakichi: -sadly- well, naruto
gamabunta: gamakichi, let the hokage handle this.
naruto: handle what? did something happen?
kakashi: lets go...don't worry about those two
*they go in the hokage's office where tsunade is with sakura, shizune, and sai, and the chief toad*
chief toad: so, this is jiraiya boy's student eh?
tsunade: yes, this is naruto uzumaki probably "the child of prophecy " you talked about?
naruto: are you one of the old man's frogs or what?
tsunade: hey! settle down naruto. this is fukasaku. one of the two great sages of myobokuzan. he has come all this way to speak to you
fukasaku: actually i'm one of the two sage frogs' but, theres no doubt your little jiraiya's student
naruto: LITTLE JIRAIYA!? WHY ARE YOU TALKING LIKE PERVY SAGE IS A KID?
tsunade: i said settle down! this is jiraiya's master. the one that taught him sage jutsu
fukasaku: -laughs- oh that nickname fits him well,i guess ne better start this before you get more unsettled...little jiraiya died in battle
naruto: -feels his heart break,his eyes grow big, and wide, and has a heavy feeling of shock wash over him- w-what? -trembles alittle but tries to fight back tears- what do you mean?
fukusaku: his throat was crushed in battle with one of the pain clones. he left a message...-turns around and theres a code on his back-
naruto: did you send him?
tsunade: -feels her heart break as well, and tries to hold back tears- i did.
naruto: WHY DID YOU LET HIM GO INTO DANGER ALONE? YOU KNOW HOW HE IS -eyes water-
kakashi: stop it naruto . you must understand how she feels.
naruto: -walks to the door-
sakura: naruto wait!
naruto: if he had been made the sixth hokage then tsunade wouldn't have forced him to go...i just know it -opens the door and leaves-
sakura: NARUTO!
tsunade: it's okay, leave him alone for while. sometimes it's better to allow someone to have time to grieve -sniffs-
sakura: but...
kakashi: i'm sorry fukasaku maybe you can speak to naruto another time
fukasaku: i understand. i can tell that boy loved jiraiya
tsunade: -tears stream down cheek-
shizune: lady tsunade?
tsunade: -wipes tears- i'm fine! -opens the desk drawer and pulls out a bottle of sake- now...about this prophecy child thing you spoke of -opens bottle, takes a large gulp- continue
fukasaku: perhaps i should return at another time?
tsunade: now's a better time than never!
shizune: -thinks- oh no...she's doing it again...this is not good-
fukasaku: -laughs- you haven't changed a bit...anyway i was just saying i would like the prophecy child to be like him
tsunade: jiraiya or naruto?
fukasaku: well, now...hmmm...-sweatdrop- maybe i am getting ancient i don't think these things through before explaining them.
*naruto's walking around outside remeniscing about all the times him, and "pervy sage"had*
*sakura, and iruka both catch up with him*
sakura: NARUTO!
iruka: hi naruto, it seems you had alot of missions latley...everyone in the village is talking about you
sakura: i'm so sorry this happened to you naruto.
naruto: thanks for the concern sakura-chan, and iruka-sensei
iruka: you want to go to ichiraku ramen?
naruto: no thanks -walks away-
sakura: iruka-sensei...jiraiya died in battle thats why he's so down
iruka: maybe he needs time to process this...i'm sure it's alot for him to take in.
*naruto's at home eating his ramen noodles*
*flash back*
sasuke: my dream is to kill a certain someone
*flashback 2*
jiraiya: you have to forget about sasuke.
*flashback3*
itachi: why are you obsessed with finding my brother?
naruto: because...i need to...sure he's important to me but, he's important to someone i hold dear to my heart...i promised her i would bring him back home
itachi: what if you fail? then will you still keep trying knowing you'll just keep chasing a broken promise?
naruto: -eyes water- i wont give up untill i bring him back...that has always been my nindo, and still is!
itachi: we both know he's only after me...but, really now if that were all you, and i wouldn't be talking...face it...he's one of us now
naruto: NO HE WILL NEVER BE ONE OF YOU!
itachi: this is a warning. keep this up, and you'll fall right into our trap...the other akatsuki members are on your trail now -walks off-
*end*
naruto: -busts the cup of noodles in his hand, and his eyes glow a deep red then a black color-
naruto: -thinks- i WILL avenge pervy sage, my father, my mother, the third hokage...and i'll kill itachi for you sasuke...then drag you back to the valley of the end, and finishing you off- -shows a angry expression, and walks off to the exit of konoha-

episode 2

iruka: -rushes to the hokage office- naruto's gone!
sakura/tsunade/kakashi/tsunade/sai: WHAT!?
iruka: i was looking for him he was no where! not at ichiraku's, not at any of his "hideouts" not at his house...i think he left the village
tsunade: -tears stream down cheek- dang it those to are so alike! ALWAYS putting themselves in harms way i bet he whent after nagato...and something tells me he'll do something stupid, and run into an akatsuki member looking for sasuke while he's at it
sakura: -eyes water- naruto.
shizune: sai? get a retrieval squad together
sakura: i'm comming to
kakashi: no...this may be more dangerous than before
sakura: NARUTO WAS ALMOST KILLED LAST TIME WHATS MORE DANGEROUS THAN THAT!?, WHATS MORE DANGEROUS THAN GOING FOUR TAILS!? WHATS MORE DANGEROUS -tears stream down cheek- than being a jinchuuriki...-cries-
sai: i'll ask yamato to all we should choose for the team we may have to send an anbu squad -walks out-
kakashi: i know your worried, and scared for naruto, and sasuke.
sakura: always...naruto has always done so much for me, and when he needs someone i never seem to be there, and when i am i can never do anything i don't want to stand by, and watch naruto, OR sasuke suffer anymore!
*the next day: sakura's sitting on the swing in front of the academy*
*flashback*
naruto: hey -sing song voice- sakura-chaaan
sakura: what naruto?
naruto: maybe we can get to know eachother better
sakura: your annoying
*flashback 2*
naruto: i'll bring him back to ya sakura-chan...its a promise of a lifetime!
*end*
sakura: -tears roll down cheek-
*flashback*
sakura: do i look more womanly now? -blushes-
naruto: you look the same -smiles-
jiraiya: you sure don't know how to talk to girls -sweatdrop-
*flashback genin*
konohamaru: is she your...-pinky- girlfriend?
naruto: you can tell she's crazy about me huh -laughs-
*flashback to all the times she's seen him train, and in battle*
*end*
sakura: -cries- -sniffs- NARUTOOO WHERE ARE YOUUU!?
*birds fly away from trees*
sakura: -wipes tears- if only there was a way to save naruto.
lee: -jogs up- hi sakura-san! noone as pretty as you should cry!
sakura: -cries-
*flashback*
naruto: your always being made to cry sakura-chan
*end*
sakura: i just wish i could do something for naruto, i'm afraid he's going down the avenger path like sasuke
lee: do you believe in naruto?
sakura: yes...but, he sure has been pushing himself hard latley...but, unlike sasuke i just know he'll be okay...he always finds away...but...bad things always find a way of happening to him asa well
lee: but, he always gets stronger!
sakura: unless the kyuubi's draining his chakra, and i fear what could happen if he looses controlle...the akatsuki could extract the bijuu, or...he could end up like gaara back in the chuunin exams.
lee:you seem to worry about him more than sasuke -laughs-
sakura: -laughs- i do not...do i?...i never noticed. -closes her eyes and smiles-
*meanwhile hinata's in the training grounds kiba, and shino walk up*
kiba; hey hinata. did you hear about naruto leaving the village? EVERYONE's talking about it!
hinata: -eyes water- n-naruto-kun. i have to find him!...because of him i became a better ninja. i was inspired by his words
kiba: the anbu are out searching for him. they think he might be going after the guy who killed jiraiya, then after sasuke
hinata: -blinks-
kiba: you have no idea who they are do you?
hinata: -hangs head- i was always to shy to talk to naruto-kun.
kiba: jiraiya's one of the ledgendary trio seinin. he was the one that trained naruto on that three year trip, and sasuke's his teammate who left the village.
*at the restaraunt where team asuma go to*
shikamaru: i heard naruto left the village. -sighs- i just hope the anbu find him before the akatsuki...but, i think thats who naruto's after
ino: he sure is stubborn...i hope he'll be okay though.
chouji: yeah, konoha wont be the same without him. unlike sasuke
shikamaru:that might also be who he's going after

episode 3

*at the pain's hide out with pain corpse-yahiko, tobi, and konan*
tobi: there seem to be some delays.
pain: well, there was an unexpected guest.but, i finished jiraiya off now, i can go back to hunting the ninetails
tobi: you do know konoha'll be looking for you right? anyway. i've sent sasuke after the eighth
konan: can we do it?
tobi: YES WE CAAAN!!!
konan/pain: -sweatdrop-
tobi: what?...its funny!
konan: i was asking if we can get those tailed beasts?
tobi: hmmm...i can vouch for sasuke
*meanwhile naruto's walking, and looking for pain's hide out*
kurama: so, you want to work together...mmm i knew you'd come around
naruto: -sighs- i need your chakra so, i can sense where the hide out...is...is that them?
kurama: yes, it looks like the 6 bodies of pain
pain1: well, i think we just won the lottery!
pain-yahiko: -goes to the front- well, he came straight to us!
tobi: showdooown -makes peace sighn-
naruto: [coldly] you killed my sensei...did you think i wouldn't come after you?
pain-yahiko: -laughs- so, your avenging your sensei
konan: -sighs- -thinks- nagato you idiot...he was our sensei to at one point...if he means jiraiya-
naruto: i'm going to destroy all of you
tobi: you'd have to find nagato!
konan: -bonks tobi on the head- WILL YOU SHUT UP!?
tobi: -whines- but, he dooose
naruto: -closes eyes, and red chakra sourrounds him-
kurama-through-naruto: here's your "lottery money" -naruto goes fourtails, and crushes the pain corpse
*imagine THIS: dark naruto has red eyes, and a red chakra sourrounded him with as many tails depending on the amount of energy kurama needs to fight with*
konan: WOAH! i'll get nagato -runs back inside-
kurama-through-naruto: i'll follow you -walks into the hideout-
tobi: FINNALLY! HE WALKED RIGHT IN TO OUR HIDEOUT. lets steal his bijuu now.
kurama-through-naruto: -grabs tobi by the throat- anyone tell you your distracting, and annoying?
tobi: all my life -scratches head, and laughs-
*nagato, and konan walk out*
nagato: tobi, konan...i want to deal with him alone.
tobi: aw man! i wanted to stay, and fight him to, then steal his bijuu all for myself...i deserve the lottery prize!
konan: -drags tobi- come on. we'll go see how itachi's doing
nagato: so, you came willingly? didn't think you would sourrender so easily...but, you are one of jiraiya's students -laughs-
kurama-through-naruto: -grows a fifth tail- HOW DARE YOU INSULT JIRAIYA-SENSEI! AND I NEVER GIVE UP...I WILL AVENGE HIM
nagato: okay...so, are we going to fight, or talk?
kurama-through-naruto:i'm going to fight you, then go after orochimaru.so-
nagato: your from the uzumaki clan to huh? i didn't think there was any of us left...you look more like a namikaze.
kurama-through-naruto:-a sixth tail is grown- -scratches nagato with a tail- then i will avenge my parents as well.
nagato: revenge...doesn't it feel sweet? shadow clone jutsu!
naruto: tripple shadow clone jutsu!
nagato: wind release: gale palm
naruto clones: RASENGAN!
*an explosion is heard across the land*
kurama-through-naruto: [had poofed out of the hideout while the clones, and nagato were fighting] -watches- -evil smirk- one down! -evil laughs-
*konan and obito return to see it*
konan: -eyes water- now, they're both gone.
tobi: aw man why do i miss out on the good stuff?
kurama-through-naruto: lets go...you two are helping me find itachi
*meanwhile yamato, kakashi, sai, and pakkun are searching for naruto*
pakkun: i get a sense the ninetail chakra's close by as well
yamato: oh no...if he has lost controlle of the ninetails it may be too late...there may be more danger than we realise...i hope we don't have to...but, if kurama has taken over naruto we may have to terminate him.
sai: -sadly- naruto's still in there somewhere
yamato: i really hope your right
kakashi: we need to hurry...the akatsuki could be after him even more now!
*at itachi's hangout*
kurama-through-naruto: as a team we can take down orochimaru
tobi/konan: WHAT!
tobi: i thought you were looking for itachi
kurama-through-naruto: i imagine you want revenge on him for asking you to slaughter your clan?
itachi: -blinks- what difference does it make? i thought you only wanted to find sasuke so, you can take him back to your village...hows that working out for you by the way?
konan: naruto here killed the akatsuki leader
tobi: and i missed it all!
itachi: nagato is dead!?
kurama-through-naruto: he killed someone dear to me...i had to avenge that person.
itachi: but...waw your stronger than i thought you were. you've been holding back?
kurama-through-naruto: yes
itachi: why would you ask for my help? we're not allies
kurama-through-naruto: thats a surprise -evil laughs-
tobi: what do we call our team? itachi can be like our sensei?
kurama-through-naruto: how about team kurama?
itachi: great...but, why would-
kurama-through-naruto: lets go.
tobi: WAIT how about team itachi?, team uchiha?
kurama-through-naruto: that mask makes you look like a dart board
tobi: -sweatdrop-
kurama-through-naruto: how about...team vengence!?...we all have someone we want to avenge right? lets go! team vengence it is
tobi: TEAM VENGENCE RULES
konan: STOP THAT!
tobi: well, we do rule!
itachi: well, as guess i have to lead the way to orochimaru...sure you don't want to go after my brother instead?
kurama-through-naruto: WILL YOU JUST LEAD THE WAY ALREADY!
tobi: -giggles- you got yelled at -points to itachi-
itachi: tobi...don't make me tell konan, and naruto your REAL name
tobi: eeek!
konan: -sweatdrops-
*hokage office*
danzo: i want to find, and destroy the ninetails'
tsunade: NO! YOU CAN'T!
danzo: i can...i've been wanting to destroy it since it destroyed the village!...and thats what i'm going to do...i heard from yamato's squad naruto's chakra seems to be getting strnger
tsunade: NARUTO ISN'T THE NINETAILS -eyes water- THEY'RE TWO DIFFERENT BEINGS IF THE NINETAILS IS EXTRACTED FROM NARUTO -tears drop- HE'LL DIE
danzo: if he's taken over by the ninetails he might already be
tsunade: -trembles- IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO NARUTO, AND YOUR BEHINDE IT I WILL KILL YOU!
shizune: lady tsunade.
danzo: this has to be done -walks out-
tsunade: -cries-
*sakura walks in*
sakura: any word from the anbu yet?
shizune: -hangs head-
sakura: -eyes water- were they able to find naruto?
shizune: no...not yet.
*sakura leaves*
*sakura's walking alone outside when konohamaru runs up*
konohamaru: hi sakura-neechan! have any news on naruto-niisan?
sakura: no, -fake smile- but, i'm sure he's alright! we just need to keep telling ourselves that
konohamaru: YEAH! the boss always comes out on top -runs off-
sakura: -thinks- naruto...give me some kind of sighn your okay out there-
*hinata's home she's outside thraining*
hinata: i need to get stronger so, i can go find naruto-kun! -thinks- whereever you are i'll find you-
hanabi: -walks out- hey onee-san. you train alot latley
hinata: i always do
hanabi: not for 24 hours!....your going to have no chakra left if you use it all up
hinata: but, i have to get stronger so, i can find naruto!
hanabi: but, you'll need energy for that -laughs-
hinata: then lets train together!
hanabi: okay! sounds fun.

episode 4

*hokage office*
tsunade: we can't just let danzo do this! get shikamaru...its time to build a naruto retrieval squad!
*later*
shikamaru: danzo said that?
tsunade: yes, i need you to build a retrieval team
shikamaru: any suggestions?
*sakura's listening at the door*
sakura:-thinks- oh no...danzo's plotting to kill the nine tails?...i have to do somethiung- -runs off-
*shikamaru, lee, chouji, kiba, shino, and neji all are leaving to find naruto*
kiba: cool, after we save naruto can we track sasuke down, and kick his butt?
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- -thinks-whats this obsession with sasuke? naruto wants to save him, kiba wants to kick his butt.-
*sakura walks over*
shikamaru: sorry sakura like before we can't take you with us. this is more of a rescue mission
lee: -holds thumb up- everything'll be alright sakura-san!
*flashback*
naruto: -thumb up- i'll bring him back to ya sakura-chan! promise of a lifetime!
*end*
sakura: -cries-
lee: it is an enternal youthful promise!
gai: -walks over- well, i am comming to.
lee: YAAAY GAI-SENSEI IS JOINING US!
neji: -sweatdrop- oh great
lee: we will bring naruto back!
*they all leave as sakura remembers they all got injured last time finding sasuke.it may be worse this time of course it wasn't that big of a squad, and now the have gai, and rock lee going with them*
*meanwhile "team vengence" made it to orochimaru's hide out*
kurama-through-naruto: what is it with orochimaru, and bridges? everytime we meet him its always by, or under a bridge
itachi: i have no idea. you can ask him.
tobi: do we all have to fight him to?
kurama-through-naruto: yes. your on my team now
tobi: oh yeah, what if we turn against you last minuete?
kurama-through-naruto: then you miss out on getting revenge...avenging the person dear to you...wasn't there anyone you wanted to protect?
itachi: -overhears and hangs head- he does have a point...we could use him for our own weapon!
kurama-through-naruto: i think you got that backwards
tobi: -bursts out laughing- burrrn! that is how you make an insult backfire!
itachi: -sweatdrop- you do know he meant he could use ALL of us not just me
tobi: -stops- -sweatdrop- heeey
itachi: that...is how you do that.
konan: WILL YOU TWO STOP ARGUING! i'm tired of hearing you two toss insults back, and forth all day! geez why i joined the akatsuki i'll never know -sighs-
voice: because YOU wanted to join with nagato...am i right?
*konan/tobi/itachi/naruto turn to see orochimaru*
tobi: hey, look who we have! -points to naruto- he already killed off nagato, and the pain bodies
kurama-through-naruto: that sounds REALLY weird.
konan: well, tobi is a weirdo so...yeah
tobi: heeey -whines- i am not-
orochimaru: so, you killed the leader huh?...guess i'm the leader now.
kurama-through-naruto: BECAUSE OF YOU JIRAIYA-SENSEI IS DEAD, BECAUSE OF YOU SASUKE WANTS NOTHING BUT REVENGE, BECAUSE OF YOU...I WILL KILL YOU
konan: -remembers something- I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR FREAKING BUTT! THIS WAS ALL YOUR FAULT! -eyes water- YAHIKO DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE, AND NAGATO DIDN'T HAVE TO JOIN THIS ORGANIZATION
itachi: MY CLAN IS GONE BECAUSE OF YOU!
tobi:YEAH! and other reasons
kurama-through-naruto: how does it feel to be betrayed orochimaru?...-eyes glow- how.does.it.feel?
orochimaru: eh, i'm used to it by now. people betray eachother everyday...by the way...sasuke, and i are alike in alot of ways...
kurama-through-naruto: HE'S NOT LIKE YOU!!!
itachi: orochimaru...i thought you said i was like you
tobi: you said that to me as well.
kurama-through-naruto: -whacks orochimaru with one of now 6 tails- YOU BETRAYED YOUR OWN TEAM TO!
orochimaru: forget sasuke...he's become like me now...sad how power can corrupt a person...but it feels great.enspecially draining the life of of those you seek revenge on
itachi: -blinks- is that what the curse mark is for?...are you slowly killing my brother?
orochimaru: mmmhmmm -evil laughter- and you to.
kurama-through-naruto: GRRRRR -growls and goes into dark sage mode-
konan/itachi/tobi: WAW!
orochimaru: guess now, would be a good time to steal your bijuu -laughs-
kurama-through-naruto: what is your obsession with the uchiha clan?
orochimaru: their sharingan holds lots of power!...and the bijuu even more...imagine how powerfull i'll be iff i had all nine bijuu, and became the ten tail!
kurama-through-naruto: grrr...then i'll avenge the jinchuuriki who have died because of you also!
itachi: YOU ONLY WANTED OUR SHARINGAN!?
*naruto is sourrounded by red flame*
kurama-through-naruto: -demonic voice- i'll show you what a REAL demon can do!

episode 5

*at orochimaru's hideout*
kurama-through-naruto: rasengan! -runs a rasangan through orochimaru's cxhest-
orochimaru: over here!, no up here!, bet you can't find the real me!
kurama-through-naruto:*alot of shadow clones* some: uzumaki marage, some: rasangan!
tobi: waw...his power level must be over 9000!
konan: -sweatdrop-
*snakes surround the clones then MORE naruto show up, and even the clones make clones!*
orochimaru: waw...this kid's pwerful!
kurama-through-naruto: a thousand years of death! -pokes orochimaru in thebutt, and he runs right into itachi's chidori*
itachi: strange...we make a good team
kurama-through-naruto: yeah...now, are youthinking what i'm thinking?
itachi: lets do it! chidori!
kurama-through-naruto: rasengan
*they both slam their attack into orochimaru at the sametime*
itachi: how did you know what the chidori could do?
kurama-through-naruto: well, duh itachi!
itachi: oh yeah...sasuke -sweatdrop-
*orochimaru drops dead*
tobi: two down!!!
*meanwhile at the bench in konoha*
ino: are you sure we should do this?
sakura: yes! you, me, ino, tenten team girl power!
hinata: yeah...lets go save naruto-kun
tenten: wait...first we should break up in two. ino since your a tracking ninja you can sense where the trail might be
ino: i'll look for sasuke-kun!
tenten: -sighs- fine...you'll lead "team sasuke", since hinata's got her byakugan she'll lead team naruto...sakura whoes partner do you want to be?
sakura: -sweatdrop-
tenten: i'm good with weapons so, i'll be assisting the one she's not on.
ino: come on sakura. guess we can try to get our friendship back to where it used to be...before sasuke.
hinata: -smiles-
sakura: we should hurry!
*ino, and ten ten [team sasuke], sakura, hinata team naruto lol i sank SS*
*the naruto survival squad*
shikamaru: we should go to suna first
kiba: -whines- you just want to visit temari.
shikamaru: and whooo is temari related to?
gai: the kazekage...that is a youthful idea shikamaru! we can ask gaara if he could assist us to rescue naruto!
shikamaru: well...i was going to say we could ask kankuro to join us...but, your idea works to gai-sensei
lee: YAAAY! HIS YOUTHFULNESS HELPED SAVE THE DAY AGAIN!
*they all sweatdrop*
gai: -holds up a thumbs up and does the nice guy pose- youth always saves the day!
neji: imagine having to put up with THIS everyday
*meanwhile in the hokage office*
messanger: lady hokage! tenten, sakura, ino, and hinata left the villagre as a group!
tsunade: grrr THATS IT! NOONE IS ALLOWED TO LEAVE THE VILLAGE UNTILL THEY ALL COME BACK!
shizune: but, what if we need to send anbu, or ninja elsewhere?
tsunade: -puts head on desk, and lets out a muffled annoyed groan in frusteration-
shizune: perhaps we need a fill-in hokage for a while. i think you need to rest
tsunade: no...if i drink sake i'll be fine
shizune: then i'll be your replacement for a few days...you need to go home, and rest your stressing yourself out.
tsunade: but, i need to be here when news comes about naruto!
*back to "team vengence"*
kurama-through-naruto: now, that he's gone...time to find sasuke!
*team taka*
sasuke: -rubs neck- the curse mark...oh no -runs off-
karin: wait where are you going sasuke-kun!
suigetsu: i'm coming to!
*they run after him, following him*

episode 6

*"team vengence got done dumping orochimaru's body in the ocean*
itachi: sasuke's free from the curse mark...i'm sure it'll be easier for you to save him now
kurama-through-naruto: i'm not so into saving him anymore! -a seventh tail grows- -evil laughter-
konan: oh no...it's consuming him?
*team taka arrives*
sasuke: itachi?...did you-
itachi: no, its a long story
tobi: and it gets even longer from mine, and konan's viewpoint
kurama-through-naruto: sasuke!!! we meet again! and guess what? i'm kicking YOUR butt next!
sasuke: you did this?...hn. i'm still not coming back with you
karin: -gasps- the ninetails...i thought it was a myth
suigetsu: -laughs-
kurama-through-naruto: -looks towards karin- your an uzumaki to?
karin: yeah i thought uzumaki girls' were only jinchuuriki...but, i'm not one so...wasn't there a namikaze that was a jinchuuriki?
kurama-through-naruto: -goes six tails/calms down alittle- ah, yes there was.
tobi: -thinks- minato-sensei was a namikaze, and jinchuuriki...oooh nooow i get it!- heeey your the fourth hokage's son naruto?
karin: waw...i've got alot of researching to do -scratches head-
kurama-through-naruto: yes. thats why i must avenge those i care about...throughout all my life i was seen as a demon -grows a seventh tail again- and now...i found my truth path!...guess we are only good for revenge after all
konan: naruto, i think you should calm down before you loose controlle
kurama-through-naruto: -drags sasuke by the hair-
sasuke: ow stop it you dobe
kurama-through-naruto: your next to die!
*they go to the valley of the end*
karin: grrr HE BETTER NOT HURT MY SASUKE-KUN!
konan: since when was he yours?
itachi: okay is EVERYONE obsessed with my brother?
tobi/konan/suigetsu: no.
karin: we need to find him! lets go
tobi: yay! i'm apart of the action!
*the anbu yamato, sai, danzo,and kakashi*
yamato: -notices giant chakra tails- there are seven tails...
danzo: lets...get him
*retreival squad*
gaara: oh no...he's loosing controlle we have to hurry!
*the girlpower squad*
*the four meet up, and see large tail chakra*
hinata: byakugan!...-gasps- its naruto-kun
sakura: -eyes water- no...it can't be...--ears stream down cheeks- NARUTO! -runs
tenten: WAIT! SAKURA!
ino: wait for us!
hinata: wait! i need to lead the way!
*every squads' runn towards the valley of the end...where the chakkra is coming from*
* valley of the end*
sasuke: what...in...the...world?
kurama-through-naruto: your going to wish you never betrayed us sasuke-teme!

episode 7

*valley of the end*
karin: SASUKE-KUN!
*team taka along with konan, tobi, and itachi show up*
*then the anbu got there*
yamato: woodstyle.cage! *naruto's "caged" in a cage*
kurama-through-naruto: -eighth tail breaks the wood naruto passes out, and the fox takes over- i'm not naruto...did you all get your wish? -evil laughter-
danzo: your dead you evil fox! -is held back by kakashi, and sai- let go!
yamato: -uses a binding jutsu-
*the retrieval team show up*
gaara: naruto! snap out of it!
danzo: ITS TOO LATE NOW LET GO IT NEEDS TO BE TERMINATED!
*the girlpower team show up*
sakura: NARUTO!
ino: hi sasuke-kun!
hinata: naruto-kun!
neji: what are you all doing here?
tenten: saving naruto, and...i see sasuke's here to
sasuke: I'M NOT GOING BACK TO KONOHA! -poofs away-
*itachi,tobi, konan, suigetsu, and karin leave to*
ino: sasuke! -eyes water-
sakura: NARUTO! STOP!
kurama-through-naruto: naruto's gone! i'm in controlle now
*in naruto's subconscious*
naruto: KURAMA! LET ME OUT OF THIS CAGE RIGHT NOW YOU TRAITER!
*minato, and kushina appear*
minato: i see you unsealed kurama, and now he sealed you instead
naruto: i just wanted to use his power! that big idiot was feeding off my energy all this time!
kushina: -bonks naruto on the head- WHAT WERE YOU THINKING LETTING HIM OUT WHEN YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO CONTROLLE HIM?
*outside*
danzo: he must die!
yamato: sai?
sai: -stabs danzo- now i am released from a curse mark as well.
danzo: fine...let you all die -dies-
ino: oh for heaven sake! mind transfer jutsu!
*ino enters naruto's subconscious*
ino: -sees naruto, and his parents'- naruto!
naruto: ino?
ino: i used the mind transfer jutsu so, i don't have long the anbu, a retreival squad, and tenten, hinata, sakura, and i are out there wanting you to come back.
kushina: see? people do love you
minato: is this your girlfriend?
naruto: sakura-chan's out there?
ino: yeah...she put together the allgirl squad to come save you i have to go.*outside*
ino: -comes back to- he's in kurama's seal cage within his subconscious
sakura: -runs up there-
ino: wait!
hinata: i'm coming to!
*ten ten holds hinata back*
hinata: no i have to save him! -eyes water- NARUTO!
yamato: not again SAKURA! COME BACK!
sakura: NARUTO! PLEASE STOP! I KNOW YOUR STILL IN THERE!
kurama-through-naruto: -eight tails- man your annoying, and whiney
sakura: -eyes grow wide-
yamato: sakura comeback thats not naruto
*naruto's subconsciouds*
naruto: KURAMA IF YOU HURT SAKURA-CHAN...I HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE!
minato: i'm afraid we aren't able to get you out
kushina: but, the one girl your meant to be with might.
*they dissappear*
naruto: -eyes water* SAKURA-CHAAAN! -keeps rattling the seal cage trying to getout-
*outside*
sakura: kurama...please let naruto out!
kurama-through-naruto: no, i like it out here.i got tired of being seled away
sakura: -chakra sourrounds her and she punches kurama to the ground-
distant voice: ow not so hard sakura-chan i can still feel that.
sakura: naruto?
kurama-through-naruto: no, ignore that...just my stomach growling
sakura: stomachs don't talk.
*distant voice: i'm sealed inside kurama!
sakura: naruto's sealed inside kurama!
kurama-through-naruto: there's nothing you can do about it...i controlle his body from now on...soon once my ninth tail comes he'll be completley sealed, and my physical form will take place
*right now naruto's body is sourrounded in red chakra in the shape of an 8 tailed fox*
sakura: -eyes water- no, i can't live without naruto nor do i want to! nor will i.
kurama-through-naruto: kind words...too bad they're false since you oh so love sasuke
sakura: no, i don't i love naruto!
hinata: s-sh-she does? -smiles- i'm glad the girl he loves loves him back.
lee: sakura-san.
distant voice: i love you to sakura-chan! i always have, and always will.
sakura: -tears fall-
ino: WAIT A SECOND! i know what'll work! sakura do your mind transfer jutsu! -thinks- noones a match for inner sakura-
*sakura does her mind controlle jutsu*
sakura: NARUTO YOU IDIOT!
naruto: sakura-chan!
sakura: -opens the seal, and bonks him on the head DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED EVERYONE WAS ABOUT YOU!? LEAVING THE VILLAGE LIKE THAT!
*outside*
kurama-through-naruto: -holds head- ow my head! stop screaming in my heaaad!
*inside*
naruto: i'm sorry sakura-chan...i was just so broken over pervy sage -tears stream down cheek
*outside*
kurama-through-naruto: now theres talking in my head!
*fu walks up*
fu: hey?
*all face her*
fu: i thought i sensed a jinchuuriki here
*she's that green haired girl*
fu: kurama! hey!?
kurama-through-naruto: oh no not another voice
fu: over here -walks over to him- there are ninja everywhere, anbu, shinobi, kunoichi, and well, i see a kage whoes a jinchuuriki, i'm a jinchuuriki so, you have a choice
*sakura comes back*
fu: you can go back in your seal...or we can ALL MAKE you go back...don't think i wont tell them all how.
kurama-through-naruto: -laughs- really?
fu: yes...really.
kurama-through-naruto: -chakra goes back 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0 naruto faints-
sakura: NARUTO! -runs over to him, ino, and hinata help her heal him*
fu: bet he wont be afraid of ghosts now...not all of us are evil -winks-
*fu dissappears in a white light*
*everyone's jaw drops and they look surprised*
naruto's subconscious*
naruto: YOU STUPID FOX -kicks kurama all the way back to the seal cage-
*outside*
*naruto wakes up*
hinata: he's waking up
sakura: NARUTO! -hugs naruto-
naruto: -hugs her- hey...what are you guys doing here?
all: SAVING YOU YOU KNUCKLEHEAD!
naruto: -sweatdrop- i'm sorry for worrying everyone.
*later at the hokage office*
tsunade: -goes up and hugs naruto- IF YOU EVER PULL A STUNT LIKE THAT AGAIN I'M LOCKING YOU UP!
naruto: -scratches head- it wont happen again granny tsunade
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 09 October 2014 - 06:51 AM.

[Iwantbuns]

Lol. I liked it, it was dramatic.

[ns.Believe.It]

Too good. Please take my like 

[*- ZerΩ -*]

[starlitestarbrite]

*the wake-up call*
[author note summary-my version of 694]

*after sasuke, and naruto go to the VOTE kakashi wakes sakura up*
hagoromo: theres nothing we can do now
sakura:-open eyes- where are naruto, and sasuke-kun?
kakashi: they're at the valley of the end
sakura: we have to get over there!
*flash back*
sakura: next time we'll fight sasuke together its a promise
*end*
sakura: OH CRAP I FORGOT ABOUT MY PROMISE -gets up-
kakashi: there's nothing we can do WAIT!
*sakura runs to the valley of the end. what she sees is sasuke, and naruto with holes in their chest. sasuke from naruto's rasengan, and naruto from sasuke's chidori
sakura: i'm too late
*flashback*
naruto: the next time we fight sasuke...we'll both die
*end*
*flashback to the bench scene*
sasuke: hey sakura-chan
*flashback*
naruto: sakura-chan!

*end*
sakura: wait a minuete...-thinks-
*flashback*
"sasuke": almost kisses sakura but his stomach had other plans from drinking raw milk -runs off-
*flashback*
naruto: hey sakura-chan -stomach growls- not again -runs off*

*end*
sakura: NARUTO! -runs over to try to heal him- -eyes water-
*flashback*
naruto: to be hokage! that is my dream
*end*
sakura: oh no...the hearts slowing down he's lost too much blood . release...not a genjutsu -does CPR once again- dang it naruto all this over a promise
*pakkun, hagoromo, and kakashi show up*
hagoromo: it all happened quickly...i knew we would be to late
*flashback*
minato: are you naruto's girlfriend?
naruto: more or less
*sakura bonks him on the head*
minato: she remindes me of kushina take care of my son
*end*
sakura: hagoromo can you do edo tensei
*naruto's wound starts healing slowly*
*flashback*
sakura: did you save me sasuke?
sasuke: it was naruto
sakura: -sweatdrop-
sasuke: that guy risked his life to save you. up untill now you haven't really seen him, you haven't seen his strength either
*end*
sakura: -tears roll down cheeks- WAKE UP...I'M SORRY ABOUT BEING SUCH USELESS AIRHEAD BACK IN THE GENIN DAYS...just don't...die -cries-
*flashback*
naruto: don't worry i'll bring him back...promise of a lifetime!
*end*
*flashback*
kakashi: ...and sakura, you were only focusing on sasuke who was far a way while naruto was closer, and you didn't lift a finger to help him
*flashback*
iruka: heaven symbolizes the mind[sakura], the earth symbolises strength[naruto] you need both to maintain balance.
*end*
kakashi: -walks over to sasuke- guess he's gone as well...the ultimate sacrifice
hagoromo: i guess we can't stop the cycle of hate after all.
sakura: -once again does the heart massage-
*flashback*
sai: your gentle with naruto aren't you?
*flashback*
sai: i don't know what promise he made to you. but, even i can tell...he really loves you. he's been shouldering that promise for along time.
*end*
kakashi: sakura? are you going to give sasuke the heart massage to?
sakura: no...it was his time...but, its not naruto's! -pours chakra into the heart-come on please...wake up
kakashi: we have to go back, and free the bijuu
sakura: i'm not leaving you two go ahead
kakashi: i can see you truley love naruto. you don't get like this around sasuke.
sakura: -uses mystical palm to heal up the hole, and the heart slowly starts beating again-i think the bijju in him is healing him slowly!. but, why was he so obsessed with finding sasuke?
kakashi: my guess is...he was afraid you would hate him if he didn't.
sakura: i could never hate naruto! now for sasuke i hate what he has become...but, i really wanted us all to be a team, to be friends again...i can't believe that all this time it was naruto i was falling for
naruto: -regains consciousness as she said that-
*flashback*
naruto: what's going on? did something happen?
sakura: nothing happened i just switched from sasuke to you
*skip*
naruto: i hate when people lie to themselves
*flashback*
naruto: what's going on did something happen?
fukasaku: little jiraiya died in battle
*end*
sakura: why didn't i make the connection!. i should have let sai, or the raikage kill sasuke when they had the chance...-closes- eyes- naruto your more than just a best friend...
naruto: -opens eyes-
sakura: we're soulmates yin, yang, heaven earth...narusaku
weak voice: sakura-chan?
sakura: -opens eyes- what was that?
kakashi: he woke up
sakura: -looks down- naruto your awake -she hugs him-i love you naruto...i always have, and it took untill now to realize it i don't deserve someone like you in my life.
*they both stand up*
naruto: -sees sasuke- -walks over-so long old friend...and rival -walks over to sakura-
sakura: i broke my promise...i said i would help you, and i didn't
naruto: -sadly- noone could save him sakura-chan. it's noones fault but his own -eyes water-and...i love you to soulmate
sakura: -blushes- you heard all that?
naruto: yes.
kakashi: and they live happily ever after
*naruto and sakura kiss*

THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 22 January 2016 - 04:22 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Reminds me a lot of that OVA. Very nice, its amazing that you remember all those little details ( flashbacks ). Lets hope Kishimoto, in the next chapters,  takes his story in this direction cause this was very well written from a NS point of view. 

[*- ZerΩ -*]

Another masterpiece 

[starlitestarbrite]

*reaction*
[author note summary: team 7's reaction to their manga ending]
*sasuke. naruto, kakashi, and naruto enter the studio, and sit down*
naruto: what do you all think the directer wants to talk to us about?
sasuke: maybe our final battle spoiler "we both die"
naruto/sakura:SHUT UP SASUKE-TEME!
*directer comes out*
director: okay, i have some bad news, and some good news, and news about the good news
kakashi: waw thats alot of news
director: so i need to tell the bad news because the good news-
all:GET ON WITH IT!
director: okay, the bad news is: the manga is ending on november 10th. so, there are only 5 chapters' left. so, 699, or 700'll be the last chapter
all: WHAAAT!
naruto: BUT HOW CAN I BE HOKAGE NOOOW!?, OR END UP WITH SAKURA-CHAN~? -eyes water-
sakura: yeah, i was supossed to get my own arc, and i want to see naruto become hokage,and i actually do want to get together
naruto: -tears roll- i never got to tell sakura-chan i loved her
sakura: -eyes water-
sasuke: why would you after the stunt in 693? hn
director: all that can be solved in the upcoming chapters! ooor the good news is theres a movie comming in december! hopefully the start of a new era! so, yes the manga may end but the show will go on!
naruto: yeah. theres always studio perriot, funamation, and other studios'
kakashi: dragonball,and dragonball z continued after the series was over with dragonball gt.
sakura: and lets not forget there are still fanfictions', fanart, doujinshi
all: THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
director: -sweatdrop- now, there are some who are saying narusaku'll be the core of the story-
sakura: WE GET ANOTHER MOVIE TOGETHER?
naruto: THERES STILL HOPE!?
sakura/naruto: LEAVE IT TO US WE'LL UNITE HEAVEN, AND EARTH!
director: BUT there are also some who say naruto'll end up with either hinata, or another girl
naruto: WHAT! hinata's sweet but my mother said to find a girl like her, and tada -points to sakura-
sakura: hinata? the best choice if it wasn't me would be ino naruto likes tsunderes
sasuke: or karin...she's an uzumaki
sakura: well, if his name was namikaze i can see why some would choose that.
naruto: HOLD ON! I REFUSE TO BE WITH ANY OTHER GIRL BUT SAKURA-CHAN! WHAT ABOUT ALL THE NARUSAKU EVENTS?, WHAT ABOUT ALL THE NARUSAKU DEVELOPEMENT IN THE BUILD UP THREAD AT NARUSAKU.COM?
sakura: naruto calm down...WHAT ABOUT NARUTO'S HAPPY ENDING?, THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS THAT NEED TO BE CLEARED UP! LIKE WHY SCANLATORS MADE IT LOOK LIKE I CONFESSED TO THAT -points to sasuke-WHEN I LOVE NARUTO!!!
naruto: -blushes-
director: did you two know you just confessed to each other without actually confessing to eachother.
sakura:-blush-
director: there is no info on the movie so, don't panic yet.oh and kakashi's hokage
sasuke: -laughs- dobe's dream got crushed
kakashi: but, i don't want to be hokage
director: sasuke's the main villan
sasuke: -stops laughing- wait what?
sakura: ok i can't do this...-gets up, grabs the director- HOW ABOUT YOU GET THE ACTUAL INFO BEFORE CRUSHING SOMEONES CHILDHOOD DREAM!? AND THERE IS NO REASON NARUTO, AND I  CAN'T BE TOGETHER!
kakashi: sounds like she really wants to be with naruto...i wasn't ever going to say anything but, i noticed she DID have a secret crush on naruto during their genin days...i think it became fallen in love when he got back from his three year journey with jiraiya
sakura: FINNALLY SOMEONE CLEARS THAT UP! thanks sensei
kakashi: and also loving someone doesn't always mean being in love with them...sasuke
sasuke: what? hey i'm the main villan... wonder how i'll destroy naruto...it'll end with the villan winning
sakura: SHANANROOO -punches sasuke through the wall CHA!
kakashi: hadn't heard those phrases in years
*the director quickly leaves*
naruto: well, maybe the movie'll end as me being hokage dattebayo!
sakura: don't get your hopes up to high. and we don't have any details' on the movie so, we don't know any spoilers yet. lets just enjoy the present while we can
sasuke: i'm having a spin off to.
kakashi: well, i'll see you all later -walk out-
*sakura and naruto hug*
sasuke: i read a roumor it'll end like the rouruni kenshin movie...spoiler the hero dies from the curse mark...naruto? what happens when the bijuu within you dies...
naruto:so, your using a one season wonder's non-canon movie to try, and figure out how it'll all end? seriously your annoying
*sakura, and naruto walk out*
naruto: i bet the movie'll be 5 hours long, and show the whole series kinda.
sakura: that would be interesting...wait that samurai x movie uchiha-teme was talking about wasn't made by the author
naruto: thats why we shouldn't believe everything we read...your calling him uchiha-teme now?
sakura: yeah.
*naruto, and sakura kiss*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 22 March 2016 - 03:13 AM.

[Iwantbuns]

Loved it! Waiting for that moment, that Sakura really does show Sasuke who's boss 

[ns.Believe.It]

Hehe.. Very nice omake. I love the way you portray Sasuke   

[starlitestarbrite]

since the ending of the naruto manga isn't that far away i'll wait and read 696-699/700 on the last day [November whenever lol]

[ns.Believe.It]

since the ending of the naruto manga isn't that far away i'll wait and read 696-699/700 on the last day [November whenever lol]

That's a good idea in theory but will you be able to resist the temptation of wanting to see what happens next?   Also, does this mean no omakes for the next 3 weeks???? 

[starlitestarbrite]

no, I'm doing one Friday oct 10 [naruto's b-day lol], Halloween, thanksgiving, and xmas. and if I come up with any ideas in between i'll come post them yeah I think I can resist temptation. all that's happening now is boring stuff so, i'll just wait lol. I wanna see sakura become emotional over naruto again, or for her to relies its naruto she loves, or something like that. not waste my time with short chapters of talk no jutsu, and fighting, and flashbacks

if that's gonna happen the chapters need to be longer. if kishi wants fans to stick around till the end he needs to stop stalling and give us a reason worth reading for!.many did want a sasuke vs. naruto fight but he's dragged out the story so long that now, some just wanna see how it end, others wanna see Narusaku happen, and a few are just done with kishi, and his manga

anyway. I hope that when the manga ends the tv show still comtinues., and if kishi don't make NS happen I wonder if SP'll fix it, and make NS happen themselves? LOL. all I know is NS needs to happen. why would he focous so much on naruto, and sakura's development, and build up for nothing?

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 09 October 2014 - 12:05 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*naruto's birthday bash*
[author note summary:since october 10th is literally naruto's birthday i'm doing a birthday omake lol]
*team 7, 8, 10, and team gai all go to naruto's apartment to celebrate his birthday*
sakura: hey, naruto?
naruto: hi sakura-chan! this party's just started but, having fun so far?
sakura: yeah...where do we put the gifts?
naruto: all the gifts are on the table...sure you'll fit up there?
sakura: -laughs and bonks him on the head-
ino: what'd you get naruto?
sakura: a present -puts the present down-
*knock knock knock*
naruto: -opens door- sasuke-teme?...what are you doing here?
all:GO HOME SASUKE!
sasuke: hn. -walks on in- i braught these -holds up a six pack of sake
sakura: hi sasuke-kun!
sasuke: -hands her the sake- put these in the fridge
sakura: -puts the sake in the fridge-
naruto: sasuke if your going to stay you can't be rude to anyone
sasuke: then i can't be myself?
sakura: hey sasuke-kun did you bring naruto a present?
sasuke: the drinks are his present
naruto: well, thank you sasuke that was nice
sasuke: well,...there was one catch
*hokage office*
tsunade: -opens cellar- hey...who stole my six pack of sake?
*back to naruto's party*
naruto: YOU GOT THOSE FROM TSUNADE'S OFFICE!?
sasuke: yeah. -walks away-
kiba: i know! lets let naruto open his presents!
naruto: apparently i already got sasuke's stolen gift.
*sai's gift*
naruto: waw...-shows everyone a picture painted of team 7- its me, sai, yamato, and sakura! i'll put this on my wall thanks sai
*ino's gift*
naruto: -sweatdrop- -holds up a naruto plush-
ino: i found that...apparently your very popular
naruto: thank you ino.
*choji's gift*
naruto: -gasp- THREE CUPONDS FOR FREE RAMEN AT ICHIRAKU'S! THANK YOU CHOJI!
choji: because sometimes we just want to eat, and not worry about paying the food dealers'
ino: -sweatdrop- they're not dealers they're buissness workers'
*shikamaru's gift*
naruto: oh cool! a shogi board
shikamaru: now we can play shogi at your house to!.
*kiba's gift*
naruto: a chess board! awsome
*shino's gift*
naruto: a checker board...are you all trying to say i'm boring?
shino/kiba/shikamaru: no
*rock lee's gift*
naruto: no...way!
lee: the complete set of my series! rock lee's spring time of youth! -strikes a pose-
naruto: whats the canon paring! i just gotta know!! is it LS, or NS
sasuke/hinata/sakura:-sweatdrop-
lee: hmmm -thinks-...NS of course
naruto: YYYEEESSS!
*tenten's gift*
naruto: waw! a kunai sharpener thanks
tenten: we hardly talk, or get to see eachother so, i wasn't sure what to get you.
*hinata's gift*
naruto: -pulls out a 2015 calendar- thanks hinata
hinata: i know it's only october but, it's never to early, or to late to prepare for a new year.
sakura: open mine
*sakura's gift*
naruto: -opens gift and sees a red scarf- waw. thanks sakura-chan
*sakura, and naruto hug*
naruto: i should return the sake back to tsunade. since sasuke took it from her office
kiba: wait...i have a funner idea...lets drink it!
naruto: -sweatdrop-
*midnight*
sasuke: -leaves-
naruto: this party was awsome!
sakura: yeah
kiba: hey sasuke left his wallet...hey guys! who wants to go on a late night shopping run?
*they all go to ichiraku, sang happy birthday to naruto, and had fun around konoha*
naruto: WAW hey! look at the moon
*they all admire the red moon*
sakura: it's like we're all in infinate tsukoyomi
choji: hey guys?...i know a bakery we can eat cake at!
*they all go eat cake in honor of naruto's birthday the next day they say happy birthday to naruto, he thanks them for comming, and they all go home*
*at sasuke's he notices a note on the counter, and a wallet*
sasuke: i feel hung over -reads the note-
"thanks for the wild, and crazy birthday-naruto
thanks for the new outfit-sakura
aukemaru thanks you for the box of bacon bites!-kiba
thanks for the all night food! at ichirakus, the bakery, and the other restaraunts-choji
thanks for all those bowls of curry!-lee
we were able to buy another pack of sake, and sneak it back in tsunade's cellar-tenten
thanks for the new boots i might use them on you someday-ino
thanks for the new art set-sai
you left your wallet on the counter at naruto's party!-shikamaru"
sasuke: -sweatdrop- -finds the wallet empty but, has a note inside.
"see? stealing only backfires on you in the end
from naruto"
*that night naruto, and sakura go eat at ichiraku*
sakura: your birthday party was fun
naruto: i know i had fun to.
*sakura, and naruto kiss*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 10 October 2014 - 08:14 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Brilliant as usual. I liked the humour in this omake 

 

sakura: yeah...where do we put the gifts?

naruto: all the gifts are on the table...sure you'll fit up there?

 

^^ This part was very cute   

Edited by ns.Believe.It, 10 October 2014 - 09:02 AM.