Legendary Ninja
Posted 17 September 2013 - 01:36 PM
I've been spamming this board lately with my Friday updates. Well here's a Monday one to throw everyone off....
Chapter 6 of my other story A Single Step is up.
Thank you so much!! I was waiting for this chapter like a lost puppy 
Your stories are like a medicine to my work-occupied life!
Edited by ramenanmitsu, 17 September 2013 - 01:36 PM.
Commander
Posted 29 September 2013 - 08:53 PM
Okay, so it's really late but here's my fic to celebrate H&E's ninth birthday:
http://www.fanfictio...-Eggs-and-Toast
I'm kinda nervous, and I'm not entirely sure how pleased I am with it but I'm learning to tell my inner editor to "Shut up" now and then or I'd never get anything done. So tell me what you think, leave a review, and I'm sorry if it's cheesy.
Commander
Posted 05 October 2013 - 04:48 PM
So here's my second NaruSaku fic, a multi-chapter this time and this is the first chapter:
http://www.fanfictio...740439/1/Succor
Academy Student
Posted 05 October 2013 - 09:29 PM
Great chapter,I really liked the chapter
Thanks
Commander
Posted 06 October 2013 - 12:36 AM
Great chapter,I really liked the chapter
Thanks
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully it won't take me too long to get the next one ready.
Missing-nin
Posted 14 October 2013 - 03:14 AM
Chapter 19 NaruSaku/MinaKushi story Two of a Kind is updated. 
http://www.fanfictio...9/Two-of-a-Kind
"I absolutely can't let you die! I can't! I won't let you die ... your stupid dream ... now it's ... it's right in front of us!!" ----Sakura Haruno
Resident Gardener
Posted 17 October 2013 - 10:25 PM
oh great entries everybody! I have a three day break, and I will take time to read some and relax :)
"You've got the need. You've got the dream" 絆ってなんだ？
GNS for life
aespa
Posted 18 October 2013 - 02:43 AM
I should post some of my fics *-*
Legendary Ninja
Posted 25 October 2013 - 05:02 PM
New chapter of Shattered Bonds, Ch 9 — Sakura's New Team, is up.
And next chapter of A Voice in the Wind is coming shortly. Man...I'm going to make some fans really unhappy.... Not all, but some. 
Commander
Posted 25 October 2013 - 05:44 PM
New chapter of Shattered Bonds, Ch 9 — Sakura's New Team, is up.
And next chapter of A Voice in the Wind is coming shortly. Man...I'm going to make some fans really unhappy.... Not all, but some.
Now I'm scared. 
Legendary Ninja
Posted 26 October 2013 - 03:03 AM
Now I'm scared.
Legendary Ninja
World's greatest critic <boragnarok>
Posted 01 November 2013 - 09:26 PM
Great chapter but
In support of the Sakura we once knew:
Solo Leveler
Posted 02 November 2013 - 10:29 AM
I never had time to give you my full review. I was at work and i was like 5 chapters behind when I red this one. The last chapter I red was when Katsuro/Naruto and Sakura was kissing and now I witnessed a sudden twist in the romance. I was really baffled until I've caught up with the remaining chapters.
I was absolutely devastated how they had a fallout with one another on Sakura's last solo mission. I absolutely understand how Sakura felt like Katsuro had betrayed her because he was trying to abduct the girl. But the only thing I hold against her is how too dismissive she was with Katsuru, and how easily she let Sasuke force his tongue down her throat a nearly took her innocents, knowing that Katsuro ( I wager it was him) with his comrades were watching.
This is not because of the shipping wars, but i wish you have never develop a love triangle in this story this late. After all, SS developments were too little. Have Sakura being paired up with another guy in a story that you've labelled NS endgame for nearly three years is something that is not going to sit well with most NS fans. I myself is very apprehensive where you will go with this story. Your summary stated that they would have some type of fall out and both live their lives until that faiful day Katsuro revels his true identity as Naruto Uzumaki and carries a bloody Sakura in his arms back to Konoha, knowing that he would be imprisoned.
Judging by this plot, I believe this is where Katsuro as Naruto rekindles his friendship or relationship with Sakura some time after.Judging by the time period, SS is going to have a lot of screen time. I do espect that she may bear his child and perhaps marry Sasuke before she finally learns the truth.
This is the part where I'm going to personal hate Sakura being with a guy when this happens is because Sakura cannot become Naruto's girlfriend because she may still be Sasuke's mate or wife by that time. Mostly, 99% of the time, I would tell the authors to abandoned the NS and just keep it the current pairing, which s mostly SS for the sake of that pairing because it doesn't seemed fair to both Sasuke or Naruto for one Sasuke losing his love to another man and for Naruto to mop about Sasuke's sloppy seconds.
However, since i have been devoted to this story for nearly three years,I will keep reading if only you grant me a boon. This story, you have Sakura moved on and have a very sensual relationship with Sasuke,which is a normally a logical human trait. I want the same to happen with Katsuro. I'm not saying that you be force to pair him up with a girl, but have him experience love making. This is where most NS angst fics ends up being trash because there is no balance.
What i mean by no balance is that authors have a tendency to make Naruto to be a scapegoat, depressed love sick puppy that has lost its way in the world with no sense of direction a guidance. At this rate, he's incapable of moving and is hoping at the very least Sakura would dump the guy who she has been seeing and come on to him with open arms as if nothing ever happened.
From my experience as a reader in both original and fan literature, it is not essential that both hero and heroine to be pure to become a couple. In this case, 88 % of NS fans estimate do not believe this, which s why some of these stories out there have shipping wars. I admit, I'm a suspect some time ago. not very proud of it.
On the other hand, I'll agree with Torxe, but just to let you know.I'm not trying to have any control over your story whatsoever.
I personal hope I never offended you, Tricksie. It is not my intent. Just keep up the good work.
Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 02 November 2013 - 10:48 AM.
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
Commander
Posted 02 November 2013 - 03:52 PM
Well, I just spoiled myself. 
Didn't get to read the chapter yet, but to be honest, part of me was expecting some SasuSaku to come and while I can't say I have any love for the pairing, I really like the way you've written Sasuke so far, so I am going to give it a chance. I want to say though that I strongly disagree with Konoha'sCrimsonFox, I don't think Naruto/Katsuro should be paired with someone else, even briefly, just because Sakura will be paired with Sasuke for a while, because I feel it would complicate the romance way more than it needs to be. But of course that is ultimately up to your judgment, Tricksie, since you know what you have planned and where the story is going far better than me, that's just my personal thought on that.
Edited by BakeNeko-Chan, 02 November 2013 - 03:53 PM.
Solo Leveler
Posted 02 November 2013 - 07:49 PM
^^
I have read over 500 novels and almost 2000 fanfictions in my life (this just an estimate), and what tricksie wrote is something I have experienced countless times. It's a very excruciating romantic plot device where the audience experiences the darkest and most gloominess moments of the protagonists life. If you can stomach Naruto or Katsuro being able to remain inept of love making and innocent until fate decides to throw him a bone, I'm a jealous of you, Bake-Neko-chan lol 
Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 02 November 2013 - 08:05 PM.
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
World's greatest critic <boragnarok>
Posted 02 November 2013 - 10:23 PM
just to clarify, I'm not trying to control the flow of the story neither.
I just want to read a NaruSaku fic not a SasuSaku one.
That said I'll definitely continue reading this story, but probably won't enjoy the SasuSaku parts of it, next chapter was Katsuro's POV, right?
That's going to be interesting, it's the chapters after that, that I'm worried about.
Edited by Torxe, 02 November 2013 - 10:27 PM.
In support of the Sakura we once knew:
Solo Leveler
Posted 03 November 2013 - 12:46 AM
That time has long passed. Tricksies stories are one of the few good written NS fics that has yet be affected by the SS bug until this point. Yes we are going to read Katsuro's POV next. I try to hold judgment as best as I can. A SS in a NS stories does not always have to be a bad thing. i don't like it either, but it should be judge first before the flames. I'm really not surprise how well know tricksie is in the NS world and the respect she has gotten from her readers. If it were me to post the chapter, I guarantee you I'll will have some SS hater reviews by the bulk lmao!
Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 03 November 2013 - 12:49 AM.
"My name is Sung Ji-woo. Some called me the Assassin of Death. A Necromancer Deity... My journey has been nothing but walking over a mountain of corpses. My legion of the dead reigns supreme. None shall block my way or... face the wrath of my blades!" --Solo Leveling.
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