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[Ani]

It's okay, Yoko. Just get better.

[krisk]

Hmm.. okay, Vyse has talked me into it now. I'll join. But I am a little busy atm, drawing pictures for schools I want to attend, so please set me up in about two or three weeks time or more, kay?

MWAHHAHAHHAAHA... great job vyse! :thumbs:
and WELCOME TO THE CLUB!

i r capeetan. but pfft, ask all the other people here too because they rock at life and this thread, but if ya have any suggestions bout the rules or anything "changable" be my guest! =]

The more people we have, the better it gets

Oh and Krisk, I don't know if you already do this. But maybe it's a good idea to send the person who has been 'poked' a personal message to let him/her know that it's his/her turn. Some people don't look in this topic every day after all.

hmm.... i guess i can do that.. but that's what i said before, "own up and everything."
*rubs cheen*

I KNOW!
how bout this? (and i need y'alls input):
how about, whenever you post your submission, you have to kinda.. PM-POKE the next person yourself?
(because honestly, i don't think i'll be here alot to do that-- and hey, we all have awesomesauce participations! WE CAN DO EET! >)

I'm still waiting for my turn...=_= Just be patient....patience is a virtue...

Oh yeah, and FYI, I'm doing a 'script' since I can't draw for the life of me when it comes to faces, let alone Naruto. Please understand. So, if I do a script for a comic (with sound effects included), would someone really be willing to draw the panels?

HARO TOMMY!
xD! paaaaaaaaatienceeeeee grasshopperrrrr...

and WHEE. yay first different submission! okie dokie smokies, i'm purdy sure someone will volunteer, but make it INTERESTING mister script-writer. the person who volunteers has to have a LOT of textual aid to know how YOU pictured it!

I was going to, really, but..

D:

I got horribly sick. Like, fever and coughing my lungs out and throat that wants to explode and a bunch of other kitten sick. XDDDD I didn't draw ANYTHING. except for a new OC when I was in the midst of getting better. xD

Next time, I swear ♥

awwwwwwwww~ DX
u meanie wife-brain-ninja-- makin' me feel bad. D:
well NO WORRIES THEN! XD if you're sick then it's A-OKAY!!!

and not to only yoko-chan, but if you be sick and KNOW that you're not gonna be able to post something, put up a PIMP-SMACK in the thread stating you won't be able to post at all, please!

~~
and don't worry bout the PM vyse! i'll PM foxy and let her know that it's her turn.
the fifth.. we still have time! :]

[krisk]

okie dokie, it looks like Foxy Cleo mite not meet her deadline, so (if not):

BLUBBER, YOU'LL BE POKED :teehee: ! (~>03/08/08)

D: but foxy, prove me wronggg!

[SakuNaruLover]

I just have a little time today, so I don't know if I can make it on time. I'll do my best though. (The only time I do have is tonight)

Drawing some stick figures shouldn't take that long, I hope...XDD

edit:
Feeling quite bad at the moment...think I'm getting the flu again ><; So not expecting much...

[Ani]

Yeah, get it done if you can Danny.

If you cant get it done, then Anewhope2 is next.

[Saku-chan]

XD If everyone gets skipped, then do I get to finish it when it gets back to meh? XDDDDDDDDD

Imma gonna go to town if it does. :3

[krisk]

XD If everyone gets skipped, then do I get to finish it when it gets back to meh? XDDDDDDDDD

Imma gonna go to town if it does. :3

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
yeah, whoever starts this sucker gets to finish it off... like i said you started the:
"Once Upon a Time..."

you getta finish with a:
"..and they had a bajillion babies. The End."

XD!
and HOPEFULLY we'll get some pages in before it reaches ya again, saku. D:
C'MON PEEPOLES, THE LEVEL OF THIS IS LOWER THAN 9000!
RR Comix Awesome-Sauce level at: 50% B-|

oh yeah and..
... D:!
*le sigh*

ANEWHOPE2, YOU ARE NOW POKED! (~> 03/11/08)

RR Comix Awesome-Sauce level at: 50.1% B|

[Pite]

I have a feeling that You won't finish seasaon with more than 6-7 artists participating in it and not before summer...

Edited by Pite, 09 March 2008 - 04:12 PM.

[krisk]

^ HAVE FAITH!

... *threatens by holding up a sheep!*
i will totally throw this at the next person that doesn't turn in their entry!

(XD)

[Vyse]

This is rather weak guys! I had a 38,7* fever (yay for digital thermometers) when I did mine, and I vikinged myself through it before I went to bed feeling very sorry for myself all by my lonesome in this icy place in northern norway. No moar excuses!! (Unless you burn your hands... not much to do about that now, is it?)

[Ani]

Hey krisk, have you started sending people pms for when they get poked? That would really help them remember.

[Thewolf11]

so disaponted

Why can't...


I draw this good

Well awy from my stupidity, Good work awesome

[Vyse]

I hate to do this, but

Denim, it's your turn to give us moar NaruSaku smex and continue where I left of

I hope the last two will uphold their part, or else Saku-chan is going to see a lot of work in her future to finish this off (unless we let season two go two rounds that is... for greater justice and more artists/pages)

*sends Denim warning pm*

[Denim88]

Oh, it's my turn? Hm...very well! I'll see what I can do!!! Yosh!!!

*lifts hands in air* Lend me your energy!!!!!!

[Denim88]

Hmm...I guess I lucked out, and recieved enough flames of youth energy from all of you, since I was kind of hoping to do the scene(s) following Vyse. I'm continuing from the flashback of wreckage and Naruto being crucified (which by the way was not uncommon with criminals in the past). I tried to tie up Saku-chan's beginning with Vyse's part...


(Naruto looks up upon hearing Sakura scream his name)

(While grinning) “Sa-Sakura-chan? You're okay...” (coughs blood)

(with tears) “Naruto! It's okay, I'm here!!

ooooo

(Naruto is on the ground while Sakura tries to heal him with her chakra)

*thought “No, I can't lose you! I can't lose you after all that we've been through!” (starts crying)

(Naruto speaks weakly, blood around his mouth) “...'akura-chan...I need to tell you...some...”

(tears running freely, but trying to remain composed) “Naruto, don't talk! I need you to relax!” *thought “Why is he healing?! Is it because of the fox?! Who did this?!”

ooooo

(Naruto smiles, tears in his eyes too) “Sakura...I always...loved you...”

(Sakura stops, looking at him with wide eyes) “What...?”

(Naruto coughs again, much more violently) “Those bastards...Akatsuki...they tried to get me...not this time though, heheh...I weakened them...but I guess the Kyuubi's...breaking through a bit...”

(Sakura clenches her fists, shaking as she tries not to cry) *thought “I knew it...I wasn't here to help...”

ooooo

(Naruto reaches up, and strokes Sakura's cheek) “Sakura...” (His eyes get a glazed over/blank look, and his hand drops)

“Oh no! No!” (Sakura starts to apply CPR) “Naruto! No!!! Don't you dare do this to me!!”

ooooo

(No sign of life is sensed by her) “...No...He can't be! I won't let him be! He can't...I won't...let him be...” (she shed a few more tears) “...dead!”

(She continues, applying medical chakra to her chest compressions) *thought “Don't quit on me! I never gave up on you!! Don't make me doubt you now!!”

(tears fall on Naruto's face as Sakura cries) “Naruto, don't leave me!”

ooooo

(A final compression with medical chakra is made, and she Naruto spits up blood, gagging to breath)

“Naruto!!” (She puts him on his side in a recovery position)

“Nnn...wha?” (Naruto opens an eye, and groans) “What...hap-?”

ooooo

(Sakura moves in front of his view, crying with a smile) “You're alive!” (She puts her arms around him gently) “Baka...you st-stupid....baka...” (cries as Naruto weakly smile while wrapping an arm around her)

ooooo

(Naruto lets a few tears build up in his eyes, realization hitting him on the fact that she saved him) "Sakura...did you...save me?"

(Sakura nods) "Yes..."

(Naruto pulls her close, and plants a kiss on her lips) "Arigatou...Sakura..."

(Sakura smiles sadly) "Don't leave me again...ever..." (The two pull in close and hold each other)

End sequence...

Hmmm....I don't really think that will fit into a single frame of a doujinshi...aw, who am I kidding, it won't! Well, I tried to divide it into sections with 'ooooo' on where I think a break in comic strips would end...but that's up to those who wish to draw them...otherwise I guess that's up to you guys. Hope that I can see at least one of them in here...sorry I can't draw D:

Truth is, spring break is coming up, and I won't have the same amount of access for internet since I'll be at my grandfather's house most of the time, and I don't think he has wireless access, or internet for that matter . Anyway, I was surprised by how quickly this came to me. Like I said, I think it was luck in the fact that I was planning what to do if I got to go after Vyse, so yeah. Hope this will help all of you out with drawing...or not. I tried to give enough detail while leaving a lot to imagination as well!

Now...show me your flames of youth, and draw!!!! um....I guess that means Mars is poked...?

Right...ahem...

MARS, you are up next as of 3/12/08 in U.S Central time!!!! Unless someone else is in charge of that? Yeah...again...I'm surprised with how quickly this came to me... Hope it's good enough...

Edited by Denim88, 13 March 2008 - 03:57 AM.

[Pite]

Hm.... I thought that this was a doujin challange... Is Denim wiriting the script? Och well... what ever floats your boat

[Denim88]

lol, yeah, I was given permission to by the others...just hope someone is willing to draw the scenes...

[Pocky-chan]

Eh? Is this a flashback to something else or is it a flashback to Sakura's dream?

[Sakura~Kitsune]

^ Flashy-back to Sakura's dream~ XD But really, I hope this starts to get somewhere again D: (I mean, what page are we actually on? XD)

[Denim88]

...Dang it, did I cause confusion? Sorry, lol. Anyway, my script was ending with the flashback of Sakura~Kitsune's comic. I wrote the supposed ending of the event she had in her flashback/dream...um...okay...

I basically wrote out the flashback event, added details, and finished with the whole Sakura giving Naruto CPR, saves his life miracoulously, etc. If someone wants to do a drawing, that'd be great...otherwise I fear that I killed the second season...

I apologize if I did

Edited by Denim88, 17 March 2008 - 07:11 AM.