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[Question22]

When you're talking about the daughter well a she will look like sakura , but will have the eyes of naruto also the whole character of naruto :c

 

The son? Well he will look like Naruto , but will have the eyes of Sakura (or the eyes of naruto :C) he will have the character like sakura

[Phantom_999]

 

Adding Shunamori.....your greatest mistake.

 

Trust me, I did not think it would spark this one man army shipping mania............ -__- despite my INSISTENCE that they are best friends forever. Not that I mind YuukiXShunamori shippers mind you just that Jordan is blowing it put of proportion. lol

Edited by Phantom_999, 26 August 2013 - 03:54 AM.

[FoolishYoungling]

 

Trust me, I did not think it would spark this one man army shipping mania............ -__- despite my INSISTENCE that they are best friends forever. Not that I mind YuukiXShunamori shippers mind you just that Jordan is blowing it put of proportion. lol

 

If a boy and girl and best friends. What happens when they hit puberty, Phantom? They just keep on smiling and playing around together considering themselves best friends? No. They start feeling lust for one another. I ship YuukiXShunamori because if Yuuki is with Akira, then Shunamori is going to feel like absolute crap.

 

 

Adding Shunamori.....your greatest mistake.

 

Are you saying Hinata and Sasuke don't deserve to have a baby together!?

Edited by FoolishYoungling , 26 August 2013 - 09:26 PM.

[Phantom_999]

Why do you assume ALL opposite sex childhood friends become couples and "lust" after each other?. Sure I don't actually enjoy childhood friends going through unrequited love either but that's why I made them entirely platonic best friends. Sure Shunamori might feel a bit different about Yuuki when they grow up but that doesn't mean he'll actually be in love with her. And how do you know Shunamori would feel like crap if Yuuki is with Akira?    Argh, this is not the point of the story!!!! Anyways I'll come up with part 8 by tomorrow.

Edited by Phantom_999, 27 August 2013 - 01:35 AM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Why do you assume ALL opposite sex childhood friends become couples and "lust" after each other?. Sure I don't actually enjoy childhood friends going through unrequited love either but that's why I made them entirely platonic best friends. Sure Shunamori might feel a bit different about Yuuki when they grow up but that doesn't mean he'll actually be in love with her. And how do you know Shunamori would feel like crap if Yuuki is with Akira?    Argh, this is not the point of the story!!!! Anyways I'll come up with part 8 by tomorrow.

 

... It would be a better love story if he did fall in love with her in time. Plus. This is the point of the story. Meido's Dawn purpose is to make sure the two of them marry.

[Question22]

Come on guys its a fan fiction it doesn't matter if she ends up with him

[Phantom_999]

 

... It would be a better love story if he did fall in love with her in time. Plus. This is the point of the story. Meido's Dawn purpose is to make sure the two of them marry.

 

A bit too hung up on SH kid, huh?

 

Well, anyway Here's part 8

 

Battle against Meido's Dawn part 8

 

Shikage: Hmm, the world over seems similar to where I come from. I like it here........... No discord or destruction. But the old Ninja system is still here. That I may have to change as well. It is my duty after all, since I hold the chakra of Order. To destroy the old Ninja sytem to avoid further conflict and war. And therefore, Haruno Yuuki, To complete my plan, I'll need your chakra of chaos. Now where have they gone? Ah, the must of gone the the Sunagakure. If I recall correctly The Hokage was on best terms with the Kazekage in my world. If the The Fifth Kazekage was already selected here then......... Hmm I should make sure then. *teleports*

 

*Back at the Sunagakure* 

 

Yuuki: *Huff Huff* Wow, this second stage is harder than I thought. 

Naruto: yeah it took me a few weeks to get it right, and a week for me to get it half way. Anyways when you've made some progress I'll teach you the secret to completing it okay?

Yuuki: Okay papa! 

Naruto: Anyways Let's head back It's almost night.

*returning to the Inn*

Sakura: Ah, Welcome back! How was today Yuuki-chan?

Yuuki: I did not pop the ball yet. 

Sakura: Well don't worry, dear you'll get it soon enough. Keep trying your best okay?

Yukki: Yes ma'am!! Oww!!

Sakura: Yuuki-chan!? Here let me see sweetie.....

Shunamori: Hmm. You chakra circulation is strained....... pretty intense training you're going through Yuu-chan. Commendable. *smiles slight;y*

Yuuki: Thanks Shu-kun!!

Sakura: Why don't you two get in the bath then I'll be right there.

Both: okay. *leave*

Sakura: You never told me, the training was this intense......

Naruto: Hehehe, Jiraiya-shishou was actually much tougher on me actually. He wouldn't tell me much and and said I was a shinobi, so I should figure it out for myself. I had to really work my ass off to accomplish everything.   Collapsed a few times too........

Sakura: *thinking*And you went through all that while I was just fretting over Sasuke-kun, huh....... *mutters* Sorry...... 

Naruto: Huh, did you say something Sakura-chan?

Sakura: Uh, Nothing....... A-Anyways don't push your selves too hard okay? Don't think I don't know what you're like. 

Naruto: Yes, Sakura-chan. 

 

*around midnight*

 

Naruto: *mumbling* where's the bathroom? Huh, Misato?

Misato: Ojou-sama......... Can I really protect you from them?

Naruto What's up?

Misato: Naruto-sama? It's.....nothing.

Naruto: Worried about Yuuki?

Misato: I'm worried I'm not strong enough to protect her.

Naruto: you've done a good job so far though.

Misato: Not at all my lord I am only fulfilling my duties to you.

Naruto: No don't say that. If that were true why would you worry about her so much? It's more than just obligation.

 

I\ll finish the rest later.......     

Edited by Phantom_999, 02 September 2013 - 07:27 AM.

[tricksie]

Moved this thread to the Library Coffee Shop, as the topic is more about fictional development and less about manga development. 

[Phantom_999]

Thanks tricksie!! I've been meaning to do that!!

 

Anyway Here's the full Part 8

 

 

Battle against Meido's Dawn part 8

 

Shikage: Hmm, the world over seems similar to where I come from. I like it here........... No discord or destruction. But the old Ninja system is still here. That I may have to change as well. It is my duty after all, since I hold the chakra of Order. To destroy the old Ninja sytem to avoid further conflict and war. And therefore, Haruno Yuuki, To complete my plan, I'll need your chakra of chaos. Now where have they gone? Ah, the must of gone the the Sunagakure. If I recall correctly The Hokage was on best terms with the Kazekage in my world. If the The Fifth Kazekage was already selected here then......... Hmm I should make sure then. *teleports*

 

*Back at the Sunagakure* 

 

Yuuki: *Huff Huff* Wow, this second stage is harder than I thought. 

Naruto: yeah it took me a few weeks to get it right, and a week for me to get it half way. Anyways when you've made some progress I'll teach you the secret to completing it okay?

Yuuki: Okay papa!  

Naruto: Anyways Let's head back It's almost night.

*returning to the Inn*

Sakura: Ah, Welcome back! How was today Yuuki-chan?

Yuuki: I did not pop the ball yet. 

Sakura: Well don't worry, dear you'll get it soon enough. Keep trying your best okay? 

Yukki: Yes ma'am!! Oww!!

Sakura: Yuuki-chan!? Here, let me see sweetie.....

Shunamori: Hmm. You chakra circulation is strained....... pretty intense training you're going through Yuu-chan. Commendable. *smiles slight;y*

Yuuki: Thanks Shu-kun!!

Sakura: Why don't you two get in the bath then I'll be right there.

Both: okay. *leave*

Sakura: You never told me, the training was this intense......

Naruto: Hehehe, Jiraiya-shishou was actually much tougher on me actually. He wouldn't tell me much and and said I was a shinobi, so I should figure it out for myself. I had to really work my ass off to accomplish everything.    Collapsed a few times too........

Sakura: *thinking*And you went through all that while I was just fretting over Sasuke-kun, huh....... *mutters* Sorry......  

Naruto: Huh, did you say something Sakura-chan?

Sakura: Uh, Nothing....... A-Anyways don't push her too hard okay? And Keep an eye on her. 

Naruto: Yes, Sakura-chan.  

 

*around midnight*

 

Naruto: *mumbling* where's the bathroom? Huh, Misato?

Misato: Ojou-sama......... Can I really protect you from them?

Naruto What's up?

Misato: Naruto-sama? It's.....nothing.

Naruto: Worried about Yuuki?

Misato: I'm worried I'm not strong enough to protect her.

Naruto: you've done a good job so far though.

Misato: Not at all my lord I am only fulfilling my duties to you.

Naruto: No don't say that. If that were true why would you worry about her so much? It's more than just obligation.

Misato: Yes, you're right. Thank you Naruto-sama. *smiles*

Sakura: Huh, What are you two doing up? *yawns*

Misato: Oh Sakura-sama. I'ts nothing..... Just thinking to myself about some things.

Naruto: Where are Yuuki and Shunamori?

Sakura: They're fast asleep. Yuuki kept pestering Shunamori-kun to sleep with her, and they were having a small argument with it. Must have tired them out cause he finally gave in. *giggles*

Naruto: Huh? they're sleeping together? 

Misato: No surprise. Before the war, Shunamori used to come over our place all the time, because Hinata-san was busy with the twins.

Sakura: EHH!? Hinata!!??  Sasuke-kun Married Hinata!!!???

Misato: Yes. It surprised everyone a great deal. You should have seen everyone's faces. Anyway Shunamori has a younger brother and two twin sisters. since his father is not around too often Hinata-san often lets him come over to your place and even sleep over sometimes. Ojou-sama would always ask him to do that.

Naruto: *Pfft* Heh heh..... stubborn girl, huh.

Sakura: Oh, and who does she get that from? 

Naruto:

Sakura: Misato, Could you tell up everything that happened to us in your world?

Misato: Sure, But why?

Sakura: Just to gain some information on Meido's dawn. And I want to hear more about how we raised Yuuki-chan too. 

Misato: Very Well.

 

To be continued. I'll be doing a flash back of Yuuki's world next time.   BTW to clear any suspicions, Yuuki just meant to ask Shunamori to sleep on the same bed as her, and they were both in Pajamas. It wasn't......... THAT. Just saying to not give any ideas, *cough* Jordan *cough*   

Edited by Phantom_999, 16 September 2013 - 02:13 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

BTW to clear any suspicions, Yuuki just meant to ask Shunamori to sleep on the same bed as her, and they were both in Pajamas. It wasn't......... THAT. Just saying to not give any ideas, *cough* Jordan *cough*   

 

Are they together now? Where are their babies at? Come on Phantom...

[Phantom_999]

No I've set them Up as Platonic life Partners. that means they're not in love but they are closer than they are to other people, even romantic/marriage partners. Does that satisfy you? Here's the term

 

http://tvtropes.org/...nicLifePartners

 

Okay? Yuuki and Shunamori are not a couple, but they are closest to each other and and deem the other the most important person in each other's lives, even more than their own potential husband or wife.

Edited by Phantom_999, 16 September 2013 - 02:26 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

No I've set them Up as Platonic life Partners. that means they're not in love but they are closer than they are to other people, even romantic/marriage partners. Does that satisfy you? Here's the term

 

http://tvtropes.org/...nicLifePartners

 

Okay? Yuuki and Shunamori are not a couple, but they are closest to each other and and deem the other the most important person in each other's lives, even more than their own potential husband or wife.

 

So basically. They're going to get lust when puberity kicks in and want something more. Okay. Someone, draw some Shunamori x Yuuki fanart. Help Phantom make it offical. He knows deep down inside he wants it to happen.

[Question22]

I laugh how you guys demand a couple in a fanfiction damn my signature makes it look even worse <.<

[Phantom_999]

Uhh, Well I think that I may have excited Jordan a little too much with actually granting his wish of a SasuHina child. Or 5. 

Edited by Phantom_999, 26 September 2013 - 02:21 AM.

[Question22]

We belive in logic not fanfiction LOL the irony

[Phantom_999]

Well I doubt this would be used for arguments....... Hopefully.

[Question22]

yep o.o

 

Btw i enjoy your fanfiction (i kinda laugh when i hear the word fan fiction idk why XD) when the next part is coming up?

[Hanabi]

naruto and sakura's son candidate :

oz vessalius

 

daughter candidate:

daidouji mayura

Edited by Hanabi, 27 September 2013 - 12:44 PM.

[Phantom_999]

yep o.o

 

Btw i enjoy your fanfiction (i kinda laugh when i hear the word fan fiction idk why XD) when the next part is coming up?

 

I haven't planned it out yet but I will.   School is taking up a lot of my time so We'll see. 

[Question22]

naruto and sakura's son candidate :

oz vessalius

 

daughter candidate:

daidouji mayura

 

 

It all depends most daughters get the eyes of their father , but she gets the personality from her

mother also the boy gets the mothers eyes , but the personality of hes father .