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[DazeDreamer]

I'm sure that there are people, like me, who like writing Naruto and just regular junk.

So here's a thread you can post your poems, drabbles, etc.

Here's mine:
Let me just roam free
To just give up
To just relax
To just be free

Let my wings spread out
And let my feet
push me of the ledge
And soar the skies

In my own mind
let me free
to do whatever
I happen to desire

Let me close my eyes
to travel that other world
My sanctuary
My home away from home

Let me forget this world
Detatch from it's worries
And it's pain
That tangles us so

Let me just stop
for the brief moment in time
And just stop thinking
and all the clutter with it

For that fleeting instance
Let me just forget
Forget and release
Let it all go

Cleanse my mind
body
and soul
Let it be pure once again

As I jump in the waters
I open my eyes
to it's blue depths
And breathe

Then as the warm
trailing lights of sun
shine across my face
My eyes open

The haven collapses
My world is hidden
The memory fades away
And life goes on

This was one of those spur of the moment things.

Music: Simple and Clean (Techno) by Utada Hikaru

[Wolf_Demon_Kunoichi13]

hmmm, guess I'll post here:


My Lord

I believed your lies,
Never questioning,
Never knowing the consequences,
Always Listening,

And when I finally,
See the light,
I turn away and face,
What I've alway thought right,

Then when you falter,
I know finally,
That the truth is actually,
At the Alter,

You told me not to,
Believe in Him,
But now I say,
I believe in Him,

And nothing you,
Say to me,
Will change my faith,
In my Lord

Dedicated to my Father

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

that... was.. AWESOMENESS!!! you guys pwnz. merry christmas guys. i'm just gonna refrain from any poem because i can't write poetry. >.< haha.

[DazeDreamer]

that... was.. AWESOMENESS!!! you guys pwnz. merry christmas guys. i'm just gonna refrain from any poem because i can't write poetry. >.< haha.

-grins- Awww it wasn't THAT good...Still Thanks! ^^

Here's another....Dedicated to all my friends and 'family' here on H&E and in real life...You know who you are!:

When life gets me down
And I start to think
That nothing is right
in the world

All I have to do
is glance up
at your faces
And I feel grand

You are all
the support
I'll ever need
To get through

I can talk out
All the sorrow
pain and fustration
in my life

And you don't seem to mind
as you talk
and help me through
My anguished days

You are my saviors
My life support
My life buddies
And most of all

.....My loving friends.

-grins- For all my friends and family out there...YOU ROCK ! ^^ Merry Christmas everyone! Merry Christmas.

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

that was so cool! me can't make poetry for beans. :shamefulcry0js: haha. we want more!

[narusakulover2468]

Hmmmmmmmmmm..................
I like them and here's one I wrote in Haiku form

Snow
Drifting,flowing,free
Daziling white powder
People are Happy

I don't like mine but at least I can do something besides my book.

[Wolf_Demon_Kunoichi13]

Okay before I post another poem I need to get this out: IT'S RAINING WHEN IT SHOULD BE SNOWING WHERE I AM!!!!!!!!!!! *clears throat* okay heres the poem:

I See Now

My thoughts are muddled
My ideas shifting
Through a swamp of
Confusion

I've become
Self-conflicting
I can't seem to
Make up my mind

The pounding
Of my heart
Seems to be
Never ending

I wonder is this
A coma induced
Dream or
Nightmare?

But when
I'm with you
I can finally think
Clearly

I See now....
I am in love

[DazeDreamer]

Distanced....but still me

It's not a surprise
how distant I have become
Not that I had planned it
It just happened

I dont know what triggered it
Perhaps it was something
I did?
Something
I said?
Something
that happened?
Something
you all triggered.

I don't know

I try to repair the distance
that seperates us
All in vain
For the bridge has burned

I haven't
become cold
that I know.
So why is it
that I feel as such?

To feel
like I've become
Silent
Become
Docile
Become
Distanced

Why is it,
for I don't know the answer.

So here I am
Cold seeping alowly
into my once bright eyes
And showing a facade
in it's place

I won't say
I have changed
For that
is far from true

I'm still me
Still
Smart
Still
Cheerful
Still
Talkative

But there are changes
Even I can see

It has come to this to be
Colder
To be
Untrustful
To be
Hating
To be
Distance

It's unlike me
That I know
But it can't be helped
Also I know

So I won't ask for
help
For I do not need it
So I won't ask for
Guidence
For I know my path
So I won't ask for
A bridge to be built once more
For it is still there
So I won't ask for
your questions of caring
For I am just fine.

So remember this
and remember it well...

I am still me,
just a little more..

Distanced

[M1abrams]

Well I'm not much into poems, never was good at em, but I do write regular stories. Mainly Sci-fi stuff, maybe someday I will post a little bit of one of my regular peices...maybe

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

Okay before I post another poem I need to get this out: IT'S RAINING WHEN IT SHOULD BE SNOWING WHERE I AM!!!!!!!!!!! *clears throat* okay heres the poem:

I See Now

My thoughts are muddled
My ideas shifting
Through a swamp of
Confusion

I've become
Self-conflicting
I can't seem to
Make up my mind

The pounding
Of my heart
Seems to be
Never ending

I wonder is this
A coma induced
Dream or
Nightmare?

But when
I'm with you
I can finally think
Clearly

I See now....
I am in love

great job! you know, i read one very similar to this kinda thing. i can't help but say i like this stuff. i can'at really explain it, but it's nice? ish? bah... my lack of clear vocation amazes me...

[Naruto Uzumaki]

Okay before I post another poem I need to get this out: IT'S RAINING WHEN IT SHOULD BE SNOWING WHERE I AM!!!!!!!!!!! *clears throat* okay heres the poem:

I See Now

My thoughts are muddled
My ideas shifting
Through a swamp of
Confusion

I've become
Self-conflicting
I can't seem to
Make up my mind

The pounding
Of my heart
Seems to be
Never ending

I wonder is this
A coma induced
Dream or
Nightmare?

But when
I'm with you
I can finally think
Clearly

I See now....
I am in love

great job! you know, i read one very similar to this kinda thing. i can't help but say i like this stuff. i can'at really explain it, but it's nice? ish? bah... my lack of clear vocation amazes me...

You may not understand it monkey but to me, that poem is the best thing in the world.I know what Ria-koi is talking about, having been like that myself for a while, but now after reading this, everything is clear.Yes Ria-koi, i love you too.

[DazeDreamer]

Kamen Ai

With disillusioned eyes
And an unwavering gaze
I stare into your eyes
And see through your mask

So easily I could penatrate
And see you for who you are
What I see isn't nice
but it's true

What I see is
A liar
A coward
A begger
A scared girl
An average teen

So when you gaze
Ever so coldly at me
And say that I
mean nothing at all

Just remember
I'm the only one
Who seem to see
right through your mask
And you can see
through mine

Kamen- Mask
Ai- Love

EDIT: Here's another one:
Not At All

To say I'm your friend
would be a complete lie
For you don't know me
Don't know me at all

And for you to call me your friend
would be yet another lie
For I don't care for you
Don't care for you at all

So when I cast upon my gaze
Someday I know will come true
Don't be so surprised
At the harsh words I cast about

For my eyes have given it away
for so long
You just haven't noticed
Haven't noticed at all

You say you know me
But you only know
just a small part of me
Just a small part

Baka, baka, baka
Stop saying that word
'Friend'
Your far from it

So stop it now
Because of that fact
That small crucial
little fact

To say I'm your friend
would be a complete lie
For you don't know me
Don't know me at all

And for you to call me your friend
would be yet another lie
For I don't care for you
Don't care for you at all

Not

At

All....

EDIT:

Now here's a song I made up.

Insperation by: Gravitation
Band: Nittle Grasper
Song: Sleepless Beauty

Fleeting Dream

Listening right here
Right now
Listening to my
heartbeats pound faster

As dillusioned eyes cast away
All doubt, all fear, all everything
For I cast out our pain
And everything with it

(Pre chorus)
It's just now
Faded to black
It's just now
Faded to white

(Chorus)
And all that's left
of everything
is a fleeting dream
(fleeting dream)
That casts upon our illusioned minds

Standing on the sidewalks
Throwing caution to the wind
for the next person who catches it
isn't our problem

So here I am
Blocking everything
Everything that bounds
Bounds us to the world we once knew

(Pre chorus)
It's just now
Faded to black
It's just now
Faded to white

(Chorus)
And all that's left
of everything
is a fleeting dream
(fleeting dream)
That casts upon our illusioned minds

Screaming
Now screaming out
Whirwinds that cast around is now
Nothing

Then as warmth envelops me
I raise my head to meet
Those blue eyes
So disillusioned

(Pre chorus)
It's just now
Faded to black
It's just now
Faded to white

(Chorus)
And all that's left
of everything
is a fleeting dream
(fleeting dream)
That casts upon our illusioned minds

So now as the world we made
Sinks further to the ground
I cast my breath
And brace myself

For a world that
I once knew
That was built upon
Our fleeting dream

So catch your breath
and hold me close
And the everything will stop

And hear that aching breaking
of a heart that seemed to be mine
And even as I grin,
I know I can't deny it anymore

So listening right here
Right now
Listening to my
heartbeat pound faster

As my dillusioned eyes cast away
All doubt, all fear, all everything
For I cast out our pain
And everything with it

So I can
Let the fleeting dream
that we once had long ago
sink further to the ground

And grasp my breath
and turn around
for the fleeting dream
is gone

EDIT: Mind you I'd like more people to post here so I don't have to keep editing...Jeez...

Now this isn't a poem, just a certain dialogue I made up. Oh and this has nothing to do with Naruto whatsoever.

Red eyes looked up from black bangs.

Swirling...red eyes. Full red iris and red pupil...

Red eyes that seemed so mesmerising...So hypnotic...So deadly.

Step after step she walked towards the fallen body of her friend. As she stood in front of it, she knelt down, "Yes...Suki, she called you...This is my last.. 'form'. The one you've always wanted to see...Yes, I am released from her body and able to take control freely... When I growled and asked why...She said...so firmly...without hesitation...that she'd give me control if I protected you..."

The girl's pale hand reached out and stroked her friend's bloodied cheek, "She loved you so much you know? I know you can hear me...your pulse is still faintly beating isn't it? I never admired anybody, but her... She was willing to give up her soul to me without a doubt, to save her sister... Such an honor, I couldn't help but admire..."

At this point a small smile was graced upon the raven-haired's face, "And for that...I promise that I'll protect you...as she wished...And I'll let her have her control for now...If ever I wanted control...I'd like to have it fair and without any of this worthless emotions clouding me...But for now...I'll save you...I promise."

And in that moment...she almost sounded like her...Almost sounded like her host...Almost sounded like Aitsu.

Then she stood up and grabbed her sword. She turned to her enemy with deadly, red eyes. A killer's eye, "Now...You die." she murmered before striking.


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What do you think? Now for all those people thinking I ripped off Naruto-Kyubbi..Okay I sort of did, but it wasn't a demon. It's her split personality. If you want more details, ask me and I'll tell you the full story.

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

nice job. have you ever thought of publishing a book or something? that'd be a cool experience, even if the editors don't accept your book. i think you'd make it. nice job though.

[DazeDreamer]

nice job. have you ever thought of publishing a book or something? that'd be a cool experience, even if the editors don't accept your book. i think you'd make it. nice job though.

Na-Nani!? Me? A book!? Iie iie...I can never finish anything I've started...in writing of course.... It would be cool, but....I'm not that good...Not yet at least...I'm still just fit for writing fanfictions....More my style.... Still I've always wanted to be an authoress....Maybe one day I might, but for now I' m gonna stick with fanfics... Oh and here's something else:

This is after listening to Gackt's Metamorphoze:

Waves crash down
Spinning so fierce
You send me spiraling
deeper into the dark

A gasp of breath
As water moves
all around me
like a river.

My eyes look up
but can't see
Everything I see
is dark water

I scream out
Begging for help
The watery bonds
are tying me down

A sense of need
engulfs my body
A need to get out
A need to survive

I wish it all
a mere dream
For it feels so real
So frightening y real

I reach out
further and further
I swim
Further, deeper

Then a light
I move torwards
I feel sweet relief
Air

Then....
My eyes blink open
Water dissolves
It was just a dream

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

well you could also do like a book of poetry, you know. cuz you seem to be good at poetry. just an idea.

[Wolf_Demon_Kunoichi13]

This Isn't Me

These clothes I wear
They arn't mine
They don't belong
On me

This jewlery that
Adorns me
Shouldn't be
On me

This make-up that
Decorates me
Does not belong
On me

This person you see
She isn't me
Those are her words
Not mine

I don't know where
I went and why
I left her in charge
Of who I am

This isn't me
This girl She ain't me
She's telling lies
But what is the truth?

Random inspiration

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

i like it. it's good. "to thine own self be true" -- william shakespeare. nice job.

[DazeDreamer]

This isn't a poem, just stuff.

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It's strange...how silent a moment can become...How for that one brief instance everything is bliss...

That bliss is ignorance, as ignorance is bliss.

It is woven by naivety and created by lack of knowledge. Such a quality most kids have.

To think they know so much, when in reality, they don't.

Such ignorance is bliss, as bliss is ignorance.

People of society are effected and have caught that bliss from time to time. Even myself included.

Without the knowledge that you do not possess, it is false. Thus creating ignorance.

Blissful ignorance, as it is ignorant bliss.

It is, in a way, a superiority complex. To think so highly of yourself to know so much, when you don't.

Such a disease that everyone has, one way or another.

Ignorant bliss, as it is blissful ignorance

/\/\\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\

Perfection is a word, as is flaws.

Both continuing a cycle of contradictions.

Flaws are perfection, and perfection is flaws.

A paradox, a never ending contradiction.

It will never make sense, yet it does at the same time.

Perfection is flaws, and flaws are perfection.

Perfection is without flaws and flaws aren't perfection.

Such is what people have embedded in their heads.

Perfectionate flaws, is flawed perfection.

Humans are flawed. Perfection isn't possible.

Yet why is it we beings strive for such an impossible dream?

Flawed perfection, is perfectionate flaws.

\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\\/\/\/\/\/

So now, before I end this small lesson, I bid you a few parting, and perhaps redundant, words.

Bliss is sweet ignorance as ignorance is sweet bliss.

Flaws are what makes you perfect as perfection is made out of flaws.

(Now tell me, out of curiosity,...How old do/would you think I am?)

[Wolf_Demon_Kunoichi13]

Okay this is a poem and yeah...I'm trying something that ain't a poem
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Always

Always With Me,
Always Beside Me,
Always In My Family,
Always In My Life,

Always Caring,
Always Loving,
Always Laughing,
Always There,

Always In My Mind,
Always With My Soul,
Always In My Memories,
Always In My Heart,

Forever Gone,
Never Coming Back,
Though You’re Still,
Always Here,
In My Heart,

You’re Still Here,
In My Heart,
My Mind,
My Soul,
My Memories,
My Family,

Always In My Life…

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As I walk through these halls I feel their glares their heated stares boring into my back.

I ignor it as best as I can making them all think that it dosn't bother me.

Making them think that I'm uncaring, make them think I'm Cold.

They don't look into me, nope definatly not, I won't let them.

They'll see too deep, they'll know my soul.

I can't let them know they get to me, I musn't, I must stay strong.

I can't show any weakness, for surly if I do i will betray myself.

So I walk down these halls, my books hugged close to my chest, guarding my heart.

My eyes darting around avoiding their, making sure they can't look into the windows of my soul.

But as I look around my eyes land on some of my friends.

I smile and run up to them ignoring all the glares, all the burning stares.

I know if the others don't except me, don't like who i am.

I'll always know that my friends are fine with who I am, and I am just that to them.

I am me to them, as they are themselves to me.

And no matter what the others say I do not care.

As long as I have my friends.
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there you go, like it? Hate it? Tell me please

[Deidara Lover]

wo0t!!! Go Tasha-chan and Ria!!!!!!!! Too bad I can't do poems. -hangs head in shame-