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#1 Konoha'sCrimsonFox

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Posted 03 April 2015 - 06:45 PM

Our spin off has finally arrive. The same rules implies as the same with the Naruto chapters, and keep the discussion here at all times. I know we so post to have a double chapter today, but Kwon has apologized for uploading one chapter because she has computer issues and that's why she couldn't linked the pages together. I will be posting all the pages in the spoiler tag. The second chapter will be release on April 20. Well ladies and gentlemen... enjoy   :party:

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April 3rd Chapter 1/ Part 1

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 25 May 2015 - 06:33 PM.

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Posted 03 April 2015 - 07:27 PM

Poor kids are being ignore. So the other part is the 20th.


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Posted 03 April 2015 - 07:51 PM

Well, the next chapter are pages 12-23.

I feel sorry for the kids too. I wish Naruto showed more sympathy towards them and this kid that failed the test because he failed the graduation exams three times in the original manga. I'm guessing he's used to the job already and has already failed numerous children like Kakashi done in the past. As usual, I like the old grumpy, lazy Shikamaru. Overall, it's a pity that Kishi could not keep up the jest between Naruto and Sakura's interactions like we've seen in this first part and never cave in to fan service.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 03 April 2015 - 07:54 PM.

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Posted 03 April 2015 - 08:00 PM

I loved it. I feel kwon put more effort on this than Kishi did in his last few chapters.

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Posted 03 April 2015 - 08:02 PM

Me too I am looking forward for that . No wonder Kakashi didn't do  that job for him, he would fail everyone lol.


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Posted 03 April 2015 - 08:58 PM

Sheeses I forgot how bad Kakashi was with testing the kids.it feels so good that logic applies to this story.

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Posted 04 April 2015 - 02:29 AM

Its refreshing to read a new NS work in such a time of turbulence and hate in the fandom.

I can only hope Kwon continues and improves this amazing project even more


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 03:12 AM

Its not just any art work, its nearly a serialized chapter story. It's not something you don't normally see anyone produce from fandom. It's usually art per page. It feels like I'm reading a sequel instead of fanfiction illustration.  


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 03:28 AM

Its not just any art work, its nearly a serialized chapter story. It's not something you don't normally see anyone produce from fandom. It's usually art per page. It feels like I'm reading a sequel instead of fanfiction illustration.  

 

So it will be being handed out weekly?

Wow that's amazing


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 03:48 AM

This first long doujin complete  in this year for long time. I think.


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 08:11 AM

So it will be being handed out weekly?
Wow that's amazing

  Monthly like AOT. so far only three chapters confirmed.

This first long doujin complete  in this year for long time. I think.


Kwon said she put all her NS ideas into this story. And she confirmed that there will be a sequel after this story. It looks like this story is in TL era and the sequel will most likely be Part 3. I'm hoping that she stretches April 3rd and the sequel past August. It will be so much of a relief for this fandom after the kitten we have we've experienced for months after chapter 700.

 

The NHtards said that they were going to some how sabotage this doujin when it comes out. Going to check DA if those NHtards are up to no good.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 04 April 2015 - 08:12 AM.

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Posted 04 April 2015 - 09:40 AM

 The NHtards said that they were going to some how sabotage this doujin when it comes out. Going to check DA if those NHtards are up to no good.

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Posted 04 April 2015 - 03:19 PM

  Monthly like AOT. so far only three chapters confirmed.


Kwon said she put all her NS ideas into this story. And she confirmed that there will be a sequel after this story. It looks like this story is in TL era and the sequel will most likely be Part 3. I'm hoping that she stretches April 3rd and the sequel past August. It will be so much of a relief for this fandom after the kitten we have we've experienced for months after chapter 700.

 

The NHtards said that they were going to some how sabotage this doujin when it comes out. Going to check DA if those NHtards are up to no good.

Those nhtards what else what they want, they have everything stop bother us. Let's support Known91 and keep waiting what NS fanon is.


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 06:20 PM

The haven't comment yet, but I assume that they are editing the pages to make a ridicule out of them. That has always been their forte for many years. Just wait and see  :down:


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 07:53 PM

You mean 'edit' like making it look like a three year old wanna-be Picasso had the genius idea to draw a picture of his parents with his own feces?

 

Well...be my guest. I'm sure noone is going to see the difference :mellow: .


Edited by Decius23, 04 April 2015 - 09:27 PM.

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Posted 04 April 2015 - 09:40 PM

Yup, something like this.
 

 
Naruto fandom is so toxic I tell you. Don't be surprise when Pornoforeverworld makes an anti-April 3rd dounjin video on YT  :lmao:  :lmao:  :lmao:

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 04 April 2015 - 11:49 PM.

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Posted 04 April 2015 - 09:45 PM

Yup, something like this.

 

 

Naruto fandom is so toxic I tell you. Do be surprise when Pornoforeverworld makes an anti-April 3rd dounjin video on YT  :lmao:  :lmao:  :lmao:

Really? what he said? Did mention something about the date when Naruto fell in love with Sakura?


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 11:06 PM

The grammar is all messed up, it's hard to read =_=


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Posted 04 April 2015 - 11:54 PM

Really? what he said? Did mention something about the date when Naruto fell in love with Sakura?

 

Ohh that was just a typo. It was, "don't be surprise".

 

The grammar is all messed up, it's hard to read =_=


I'm going to proof read the dialogues tomorrow. Hopefully I will have them up by Monday.

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Posted 06 April 2015 - 10:44 AM

Although I don't have the best grammar. I proofread pages 1-3. There still is a lot of time to complete the chapter before the next chapter comes out, so I won't rush it. Hopefully this helps people who are having hard time reading this doujin.
 

 

April 3rd Dialogues Revised 



Page 1
 
Kakashi: Why you are here? Shouldn't you be with Naruto and Shikamuru?

Sakura: Yes, I'm already going, but I don't understand why you are not attending the exams yourself. It's a requirement and your duty as Hokage... or did you change your schedule?!

Kakashi: There is no need of my presence, that much I confide in you.

Shikamaru: Naruto... Sakura is so kittening late! We should start without her. You have to scold Sakura because of her bad attitude.

Naruto: I think you already know what's on my mind. We will start when she's here. If she is late, then something probably happened. So I am not going--

Page 2

Sakura: Guys! Finally I'm here. Sorry for being late.

Shikamaru: Sakura Haruno! You're always kittening tardy ever time!

Sakura: I was with Kakashi-sensei... if you don't believe m--

Naruto: Be quiet Sakura-chan! Don't worry, you can be late every time you want, so you can tell Shikamaru. If he doesn't quit yapping, he won't go home.

Sakura: Naruto!!!

Shikamaru: C'mon! Let's start the first one...

Naruto: Well! Please perform all the basic techniques. You can choose which jutsu you want to start with.

Page 3

Shikamaru: Ok. Well done. Now you may dismiss. The final results are on the following day.

Naruto: I feel like you're little frustrated today. You should calm down. It's not the children's fault. Act a little nicer to them.

Shikamaru: You are more irritating than Kakashi. I just hope that you don't get any worse in the future.

Naruto: Impossible! I'm already better than Kakashi-sensei!

 


Also Pages 7 and 9 have been resubmitted because it was too small. 

 


Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 06 April 2015 - 11:01 AM.

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