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[hisaberpie]

I started drawing this manga recently. Its like a spinoff of Boruto and takes place after the chunin exam attack, so while Boruto and his team are off doing the kara mission, this story follows Menma, a young chunin whos just trying to find his way in life. Thats all I can tell you at this point.

 

Now, I'm drawing this manga as a side hobby and I don't have assistants helping me so I reference heavily from the original manga. Another reason I'm drawing is to practice manga in general since I am working on original projects as well.

 

With that said, enjoy the first few pages. I also post this on my tumblr. 

 

Menma

 

[sushi.]

Is it NS or NH?

[jak123]

It's sad when fan art is better that the official art sometimes.

Are you following the official ending/end couples? Or doing your own thing?

[rocci]

Is it NS or NH?

Ns of course.

Wow the art truly nail Kishi artstyle.
You should be the artist who draw Naruto son sequel.

[sushi.]

Ns of course.

Wow the art truly nail Kishi artstyle.
You should be the artist who draw Naruto son sequel.

It is in Boruto's world? Has there been a divorce?

[LuckyChi7]

Wow that art style is really something!

 

I like it. 

[hisaberpie]

It's sad when fan art is better that the official art sometimes.
Are you following the official ending/end couples? Or doing your own thing?

I'm following the original ending but I am also doing my own thing!

Ns of course.
Wow the art truly nail Kishi artstyle.
You should be the artist who draw Naruto son sequel.

I'd never draw boruto.

It is in Boruto's world? Has there been a divorce?

  

Menma could be a love child too.

Wow that art style is really something!
 
I like it.

Thanks a lot! I am also learning a lot by drawing this too!

Edited by hisaberpie, 15 May 2018 - 03:32 PM.

[jak123]

It would be interesting to see a story where both couples divorced because they clearly aren't good relationships at all.

[hisaberpie]

It would be interesting to see a story where both couples divorced because they clearly aren't good relationships at all.

 

While I think a divorce is much needed between the current couples, I don't think the concept of divorce suits the overall story cuz its a shonen manga and not some soap opera. So I want to make a story that follows the canon universe of naruto as closely as possible.

[sushi.]

 
While I think a divorce is much needed between the current couples, I don't think the concept of divorce suits the overall story cuz its a shonen manga and not some soap opera. So I want to make a story that follows the canon universe of naruto as closely as possible.

I agree which is why I prefer stories that are either post divorce, or just a normal NS ending.

[Derock]

What's your tumblr?

[hisaberpie]

What's your tumblr?

My tumblr is the same as my username
here.. https://hisaberpie.tumblr.com

I just uploaded another page there too!

[hisaberpie]

I thought I'd upload the two new pages I drew for my manga spinoff, menma!

 

pages 5 & 6

 

[jak123]

 

While I think a divorce is much needed between the current couples, I don't think the concept of divorce suits the overall story cuz its a shonen manga and not some soap opera. So I want to make a story that follows the canon universe of naruto as closely as possible.

Yeah, but it's also a fan story. Divorce could be done right and it not be fully focused on that.

 

I thought I'd upload the two new pages I drew for my manga spinoff, menma!

 

pages 5 & 6

 

So Menma is Naruto and Sakura's secret love child? 

[hisaberpie]

Yeah, but it's also a fan story. Divorce could be done right and it not be fully focused on that.

I think i have come across a fanfiction where the canon couples divorce. Its called what we want, you can find it in archive of our own.

[jak123]

I think i have come across a fanfiction where the canon couples divorce. Its called what we want, you can find it in archive of our own.

Rarely a fan of adultery in stories (it depends on how it's represented in the story), but considering how bad NH and SS are, I will allow it. XD

[Bail o' Lies]

So did Sakura raise him or just put him up for adoption?  

[KClaws_2]

The art is great. That's now three fan-artists Sheshua have a reason to be pissed at Kodachi (LadyGT and Tokai2000). 

 

Given what we know is possible in this series, the way you're making it look, it seems like Menma is a genetic experiment by Orochimaru combining Naruto and Sakura's DNA. I guess he's going to kind of be like Superboy in Young Justice?

[hisaberpie]

The art is great. That's now three fan-artists Sheshua have a reason to be pissed at Kodachi (LadyGT and Tokai2000). 
 
Given what we know is possible in this series, the way you're making it look, it seems like Menma is a genetic experiment by Orochimaru combining Naruto and Sakura's DNA. I guess he's going to kind of be like Superboy in Young Justice?

So close!

[jak123]

So close!

He's the secret love child of Naruto and Sakura.