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[ramenanmitsu]

You should change Hinata with naruto.

You talk as if Naruto is more important than Hinata.

Ramen, I don't see SH in there, try harder 

Damn! I forgot to add the flashbacks of SH first encounter.

Sasuke, the day after the massacre

"H-Hi! W-w-what are you d-doing here?"

Sasuke looked back and saw a girl with pale eyes and the same age as him trying to converse with him.

"Mind your own business. I'm not in the mood of talking." Sasuke turned his back from the girl in hopes that she would just disappear.

"B-but you look very lonely. I....I w-want to help you."

"I said it's none of your business!"

"S-sorry!" Just as the girl tried to run away, she tripped and fell down.

Sasuke couldn't control his giggles.

Seeing Sasuke giggle made the girl blush a deep red.

"S-s-stop l-laughing!"

"Sorry, it's just that I didn't laugh in a long time. You're funny. What's your name?"

"W-when you ask for s-someone's n-name, you should speak your's first!"

"Hm. True. My name is Sasuke."

"M-My name is Hinata."

After the encounter with the girl, Sasuke frequently went to the pond. Maybe it was to calm himself down at the pond, and maybe, just a little maybe, talking to that girl made him forget about all his suffering. It gave him peace.

Whenever the two encounter each other by the pond, they would talk endlessly about their life, about their family, and their dreams. Sasuke never thought he could truly be happy after the massacre.

However, after they both got the same class in the academy, their rendezvous ended. Sasuke would annoyingly witness Hinata looking towards Naruto every chance she got. That would bring a feeling of rage in Sasuke's stomach.

Why Naruto?

Why that dobe?

And since then Sasuke couldn't stop the strong hatred towards Naruto. Once during class sparring, he beat Naruto too much the teacher had to stop him. Sasuke's black eyes were filled with hatred towards the boy who stole the most important existence in his life. Hence on started the rivalry between the two peers.

[NarutoUzumaki01]

You guys really should stop trolling SH.....What if it actually happens...

I'm waiting for it 

 

You talk as if Naruto is more important than Hinata. 

Damn! I forgot to add the flashbacks of SH first encounter.

Sasuke, the day after the massacre

"H-Hi! W-w-what are you d-doing here?"

Sasuke looked back and saw a girl with pale eyes and the same age as him trying to converse with him.

"Mind your own business. I'm not in the mood of talking." Sasuke turned his back from the girl in hopes that she would just disappear.

"B-but you look very lonely. I....I w-want to help you."

"I said it's none of your business!"

"S-sorry!" Just as the girl tried to run away, she tripped and fell down.

Sasuke couldn't control his giggles.

Seeing Sasuke giggle made the girl blush a deep red.

"S-s-stop l-laughing!"

"Sorry, it's just that I didn't laugh in a long time. You're funny. What's your name?"

"W-when you ask for s-someone's n-name, you should speak your's first!"

"Hm. True. My name is Sasuke."

"M-My name is Hinata."

After the encounter with the girl, Sasuke frequently went to the pond. Maybe it was to calm himself down at the pond, and maybe, just a little maybe, talking to that girl made him forget about all his suffering. It gave him peace.

Whenever the two encounter each other by the pond, they would talk endlessly about their life, about their family, and their dreams. Sasuke never thought he could truly be happy after the massacre.

However, after they both got the same class in the academy, their rendezvous ended. Sasuke would annoyingly witness Hinata looking towards Naruto every chance she got. That would bring a feeling of rage in Sasuke's stomach.

Why Naruto?

Why that dobe?

And since then Sasuke couldn't stop the strong hatred towards Naruto. Once during class sparring, he beat Naruto too much the teacher had to stop him. Sasuke's black eyes were filled with hatred towards the boy who stole the most important existence in his life. Hence on started the rivalry between the two peers.

10/10!!!!

Edited by NarutoUzumaki01, 13 April 2015 - 12:31 AM.

[Gaara's hair]

You talk as if Naruto is more important than Hinata.

Damn! I forgot to add the flashbacks of SH first encounter.

Sasuke, the day after the massacre

"H-Hi! W-w-what are you d-doing here?"

Sasuke looked back and saw a girl with pale eyes and the same age as him trying to converse with him.

"Mind your own business. I'm not in the mood of talking." Sasuke turned his back from the girl in hopes that she would just disappear.

"B-but you look very lonely. I....I w-want to help you."

"I said it's none of your business!"

"S-sorry!" Just as the girl tried to run away, she tripped and fell down.

Sasuke couldn't control his giggles.

Seeing Sasuke giggle made the girl blush a deep red.

"S-s-stop l-laughing!"

"Sorry, it's just that I didn't laugh in a long time. You're funny. What's your name?"

"W-when you ask for s-someone's n-name, you should speak your's first!"

"Hm. True. My name is Sasuke."

"M-My name is Hinata."

After the encounter with the girl, Sasuke frequently went to the pond. Maybe it was to calm himself down at the pond, and maybe, just a little maybe, talking to that girl made him forget about all his suffering. It gave him peace.

Whenever the two encounter each other by the pond, they would talk endlessly about their life, about their family, and their dreams. Sasuke never thought he could truly be happy after the massacre.

However, after they both got the same class in the academy, their rendezvous ended. Sasuke would annoyingly witness Hinata looking towards Naruto every chance she got. That would bring a feeling of rage in Sasuke's stomach.

Why Naruto?

Why that dobe?

And since then Sasuke couldn't stop the strong hatred towards Naruto. Once during class sparring, he beat Naruto too much the teacher had to stop him. Sasuke's black eyes were filled with hatred towards the boy who stole the most important existence in his life. Hence on started the rivalry between the two peers.

How sad T_T

   

[Pix]

Kishi is taking no bets this time around, he knows he's a mediocre writer at best so best thing to do is to rewrite what made his manga successful in the first place (which wasn't his idea to begin with and a blatant rip off of HXH's exam), smart move I would say. Of course for those who are looking for quality writing you won't find any of it in this cheap fanservice but that has been the case for years in Naruto.

Highlighting this part because I won't stop preaching it until the day everybody reads HxH. Kishimoto's bullsh*tery was written in the stars.

[Swagkura]

Yes, Ramen. Bring forth the spirit of SasuHina, pairing of the mighty Gods themselves

[Awes9]

I think since the end of pain arc people doesn't have that much respect toward this manga. One of the reason why people lose respect to it is naruto obsessiveness to sasuke.

I more curious on who will be the third member in neo team 7.
Since sasuke spawn is a girl, it make her the girl of the group.
Will the third member become the fool or the cool?

It was already ridiculous beofre the Pain Arc when we were given very few and shallows reasons for Naruto's obsessiveness for Sasuke but it became ridiculous and humiliating for Naruto after the Pain Arc (bowing to the raikage, letting Karui beat him and of course the pathetic hyperventilation) I don't understand how can a writer think that's heroic but hey that's Kishi for you and Kishi is full of kitten, Naruto part 1 was such an endearing and inspiring character I don't understand how he became this crybaby just because Sasuke left by his own accord.

 

Third member if he ever exists will most likely be the most interesting character out of the 3.

 

[HuskyLover]

You talk as if Naruto is more important than Hinata.

Damn! I forgot to add the flashbacks of SH first encounter.

Sasuke, the day after the massacre

"H-Hi! W-w-what are you d-doing here?"

Sasuke looked back and saw a girl with pale eyes and the same age as him trying to converse with him.

"Mind your own business. I'm not in the mood of talking." Sasuke turned his back from the girl in hopes that she would just disappear.

"B-but you look very lonely. I....I w-want to help you."

"I said it's none of your business!"

"S-sorry!" Just as the girl tried to run away, she tripped and fell down.

Sasuke couldn't control his giggles.

Seeing Sasuke giggle made the girl blush a deep red.

"S-s-stop l-laughing!"

"Sorry, it's just that I didn't laugh in a long time. You're funny. What's your name?"

"W-when you ask for s-someone's n-name, you should speak your's first!"

"Hm. True. My name is Sasuke."

"M-My name is Hinata."

After the encounter with the girl, Sasuke frequently went to the pond. Maybe it was to calm himself down at the pond, and maybe, just a little maybe, talking to that girl made him forget about all his suffering. It gave him peace.

Whenever the two encounter each other by the pond, they would talk endlessly about their life, about their family, and their dreams. Sasuke never thought he could truly be happy after the massacre.

However, after they both got the same class in the academy, their rendezvous ended. Sasuke would annoyingly witness Hinata looking towards Naruto every chance she got. That would bring a feeling of rage in Sasuke's stomach.

Why Naruto?

Why that dobe?

And since then Sasuke couldn't stop the strong hatred towards Naruto. Once during class sparring, he beat Naruto too much the teacher had to stop him. Sasuke's black eyes were filled with hatred towards the boy who stole the most important existence in his life. Hence on started the rivalry between the two peers.

 

Lol    

But God Dammit Ramen 

Stop with the Ideas.

Edited by HuskyLover, 13 April 2015 - 12:36 AM.

[ramenanmitsu]

 
Lol    
But God Dammit Ramen 

U mad? U mad?
I'm going to continue writing disgusting shoujo until every member of this forum throws up

[Gaara's hair]

U mad? U mad?
I'm going to continue writing disgusting shoujo until every member of this forum throws up

Yes, yes ༼ ༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ༽

[HuskyLover]

U mad? U mad?
I'm going to continue writing disgusting shoujo until every member of this forum throws up

[NarutoUzumaki01]

U mad? U mad?
I'm going to continue writing disgusting shoujo until every member of this forum throws up

Eh, surely not with SH, those two just fated to be together.

Edited by NarutoUzumaki01, 13 April 2015 - 12:48 AM.

[RyohkiFan]

You talk as if Naruto is more important than Hinata.

Damn! I forgot to add the flashbacks of SH first encounter.

Sasuke, the day after the massacre

"H-Hi! W-w-what are you d-doing here?"

Sasuke looked back and saw a girl with pale eyes and the same age as him trying to converse with him.

"Mind your own business. I'm not in the mood of talking." Sasuke turned his back from the girl in hopes that she would just disappear.

"B-but you look very lonely. I....I w-want to help you."

"I said it's none of your business!"

"S-sorry!" Just as the girl tried to run away, she tripped and fell down.

Sasuke couldn't control his giggles.

Seeing Sasuke giggle made the girl blush a deep red.

"S-s-stop l-laughing!"

"Sorry, it's just that I didn't laugh in a long time. You're funny. What's your name?"

"W-when you ask for s-someone's n-name, you should speak your's first!"

"Hm. True. My name is Sasuke."

"M-My name is Hinata."

After the encounter with the girl, Sasuke frequently went to the pond. Maybe it was to calm himself down at the pond, and maybe, just a little maybe, talking to that girl made him forget about all his suffering. It gave him peace.

Whenever the two encounter each other by the pond, they would talk endlessly about their life, about their family, and their dreams. Sasuke never thought he could truly be happy after the massacre.

However, after they both got the same class in the academy, their rendezvous ended. Sasuke would annoyingly witness Hinata looking towards Naruto every chance she got. That would bring a feeling of rage in Sasuke's stomach.

Why Naruto?

Why that dobe?

And since then Sasuke couldn't stop the strong hatred towards Naruto. Once during class sparring, he beat Naruto too much the teacher had to stop him. Sasuke's black eyes were filled with hatred towards the boy who stole the most important existence in his life. Hence on started the rivalry between the two peers.

Lol I'm gonna hit you xD

[luffyq1]

[redrose3443]

So SP is already setting the bar high, with their usual high quality animation, eh?

 

Naruto has become a parody.

[AHK]

spoiler

[WhyDoIWatch]

It was already ridiculous beofre the Pain Arc when we were given very few and shallows reasons for Naruto's obsessiveness for Sasuke but it became ridiculous and humiliating for Naruto after the Pain Arc (bowing to the raikage, letting Karui beat him and of course the pathetic hyperventilation) I don't understand how can a writer think that's heroic but hey that's Kishi for you and Kishi is full of kitten, Naruto part 1 was such an endearing and inspiring character I don't understand how he became this crybaby just because Sasuke left by his own accord.

 

Third member if he ever exists will most likely be the most interesting character out of the 3.

 

Did you miss the part when Naruto says he won't abandon Sasuke like Jiraya did to Orochimaru? Which was in Part 1.

Naruto's a orphan that was hated by everyone, its natural he would value bonds much more than the average person.

I will however agree that fainting scene was pretty bad, but the other examples you stated weren't, he let Karui beat him so she could take out her anger on him instead of Sasuke and begging Raikage was just him helping. You have to take into consideration that Naruto sees Sasuke as a brother/BF and his Nindo is quite literally "never giving up".

[BlackBird19]

But Naruto was betrayed twice by people he trusted in a matter of months by both Mizuki and Sasuke. No real orphan, especially one with Naruto's supposed backstory would cling to Sasuke like that. He'd cling to the other bonds he had first. Sasuke would've had to work his ass off to earn his trust back. That's why I said Kishi didn't understand what he was writing.

[AHK]

But Naruto was betrayed twice by people he trusted in a matter of months by both Mizuki and Sasuke. No real orphan, especially one with Naruto's supposed backstory would cling to Sasuke like that. He'd cling to the other bonds he had first. Sasuke would've had to work his ass off to earn his trust back. That's why I said Kishi didn't understand what he was writing.

Honestly, if you wanted to, you could say that the majority of the people that came into contact with Naruto betrayed him (with significant screen time, of course). The only exceptions would be Jiraiya, Tsunade, Iruka, and Shikimaru.

[WhyDoIWatch]

But Naruto was betrayed twice by people he trusted in a matter of months by both Mizuki and Sasuke. No real orphan, especially one with Naruto's supposed backstory would cling to Sasuke like that. He'd cling to the other bonds he had first. Sasuke would've had to work his ass off to earn his trust back. That's why I said Kishi didn't understand what he was writing.

Naruto knew Sasuke longer than months and Mizuki barely made a "bond" with him, there's a huge difference.

 

Naruto's other bonds weren't as important as Sasuke's only Iruka could compare and Naruto isn't the type of character to say "kitten it" and go with other people or else he would have went to another village that didn't treat him like kitten. Besides put yourself in Naruto's shoes, if one of your brothers for some reason left would you just forget about him since you have other siblings?

 

Sasuke didn't seek Naruto to hurt him it was Naruto that did, Sasuke just wanted to achieve his dream and felt Orochimaru could help him with that, he didn't pledge to be with Naruto in Konoha so there is no betrayal with Sasuke.

[Awes9]

Did you miss the part when Naruto says he won't abandon Sasuke like Jiraya did to Orochimaru? Which was in Part 1.

Naruto's a orphan that was hated by everyone, its natural he would value bonds much more than the average person.

I will however agree that fainting scene was pretty bad, but the other examples you stated weren't, he let Karui beat him so she could take out her anger on him instead of Sasuke and begging Raikage was just him helping. You have to take into consideration that Naruto sees Sasuke as a brother/BF and his Nindo is quite literally "never giving up".

Lol but why does Naruto see Sasuke as a BF/brother ? because he smiled at him from afar ? that's the only flashback we got in part 1 and that's a pretty weak reason to justify Naruto's quest to "save Sasuke" especially when the interactions between the two in part 1 weren't that deep to begin with, that's Kishi's job to convince people that Naruto was right and looking at most people's reactions he failed pretty hard because Kishi just doesn't understand the simple rule : "show don't tell", How can I connect with Naruto when there's nothing in the manga that allows me to see how great and deep their bond is ? All I see is Naruto looking for a man that doesn't want anything to do with him while ignoring people who have been better friends for him than Sasuke ever was, I don't care if Naruto was an orphan (orphan are human beings too so I execpt normal human reactions from them too) that doesn't justify his obsession in any way shape or form and that's not at all believable, add to that that Sasuke tried to kill him and his teamates on multiples occassions and that he swore to destroy everything Naruto values that's more than enough of a reason to get over Sasuke. Besides why did he need to save him when Sasuke made his own choices and had his own goals, who is Naruto to decide what's right and wrong when he's just a dumb moron who makes sh*tty empty speeches and doesn't offer any real solutions. NaruSasu has been forced down our throats since the beginning of part 2 at the expense of logic and common sense, there's nothing endearing or noble about Naruto's quest and in fact it's really selfish.

Edited by Awes9, 13 April 2015 - 02:03 AM.