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#1 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:01 AM

So, with the ending of Naruto ( which was terrible ), I mustered up this little fanfic of Naruto on his wedding day. I'm not sure how Japanese weddings work, so I used the Western style wedding. Some of this may not be totally accurate and it may have a few errors. And certain parts of it should be italicized, but I'm on mobile so, bare with me. :sweat: Let me know what you think!

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He should be happy.

It was his wedding day, getting married to the lovely woman that was Hinata.

Kind, loving, and nothing but supporting.

But she just wasn't her.

For well over two decades he loved her.

And he still did.

Stop it, he scolded himself, mentally of course. Just cold feet. You love Hinata Hyugaa. Soon to be Hinata Uzumaki. And- Then the Nine-Tails had to step in.

Will he ever stop?

You still love her.

He ignored the Tailed Beast, shaking it off. But, he couldn't get her out of his mind. Her pink hair that was always so perfect, sparkling green eyes, and the fact that she was so, words couldn't describe how amazing she was.

Jeez Naruto, you're obsessing over a girl that isn't your wife on your wedding day.

He once again ignored him. This wedding wasn't right. Him and Hinata wasn't right. He was pretty sure Shikamaru knew, smarty pants and all, and probably Ino. She kinda had this thing where she could sense love or something, he really didn't know.

It finally hit him. After years it hit him.

He should have confessed. He should have spoken up. He had the chance. But he didn't, and now he was going to spend the rest of his life with a woman who just wasn't right. Hinata would make a great wife. For someone else.

He wanted Sakura.

He needed Sakura.

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The doors opened, revealing a blushing bride in an elegant dress. She stepped forward to the altar. They exchange the basic vows.

"Do you Naruto Uzumaki, take Hinata Hyugaa as your lawfully wedded wife?"

"I do."

Edited by Paul Blowfish, 07 November 2014 - 02:11 AM.

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:05 AM

BEAUTIFUL! I actually thought of this theory earlier in the chapter thread. This would be truly tragic for Naruto though.


 


#3 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:08 AM

BEAUTIFUL! I actually thought of this theory earlier in the chapter thread. This would be truly tragic for Naruto though.



Thank you! I appreciate it, I thought your fanfic was awesome, and considering this is my first one, and that you liked it means a lot. :D
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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:09 AM

This seems like it'd be possible.
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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:09 AM

Thank you! I appreciate it, I thought your fanfic was awesome, and considering this is my first one, and that you liked it means a lot. :D


You should start writing fanfics. You have a lot of potential. :) Lord knows we need them on Fanfiction.net


 


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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:10 AM

Are you gonna make more?

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#7 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:11 AM

This seems like it'd be possible.


Thank you!

You should start writing fanfics. You have a lot of potential. :) Lord knows we need them on Fanfiction.net


Thanks so much! I enjoy writing and hope to evolve my writing skills. And lol, some people there write the cheesiest of things sometimes.
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#8 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:11 AM

Are you gonna make more?


If I think up some prompts, then yeah totally!
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