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#1 Sky Zephyrus

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 01:36 PM

So, during my stressed moment I write a story about Naruto with a different personality. Here's the summary:

"An incident in his past made Naruto totally different than the one we know. What was the incident? What is it to do with Sakura? NaruSaku"

Check it out here and please leave a comment.

http://www.fanfictio.../Cold_Blue_Eyes

Thank you and have a nice day!
One can't gain without losing
One can't love without hating
One can't heal without hurting
One can't learn without being stupid
One can't redeem without making mistakes
One can't get the hold of reality being disillusioned
One can't feel comfort without pain
That's the circle of life

#2 Gravenimage

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 01:42 PM

Well the story is completely AU but its a good start.
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#3 tricksie

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 02:31 PM

Interesting! I left you a review on ff.net. I love to see stories with a twist, whether in the plot, or the setting or the character. And giving him a defensive emotional shield on par with Sasuke is a good twist. Can't wait to see more!




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