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#1 Shika

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Posted 25 January 2009 - 08:29 AM

Unfourtaintly, I didn't save it, but it was one of my first fanfics. I can remember how it goes though, so it's no big deal, I can just improve it.

The Plot: Shikamaru was the only one to be moved up from genin, but he remains with his team anyways. Even though the exams are all over, he just can't seem to get that girl off his mind, Temari. Back in Suna, Temari is outrages in herself because she can't get Shikamaru off her mind either. Gaara takes notice, he's not one firmilar with the word "love" but tells his sister to go on back and see Shikamaru. Temari arrives, but as soon as she gets there, bad news breaks out, the elders of the Lead report that Suna has been attacked by Orochimaru, but why in the world would Orochimaru attack Suna?! Team 10, Team 7, Guy, Lee, and Temari all go to Suna to stop that outrage of the Sound Ninja and Orochimaru. "ShikaXTema"

I could change it and make NaruXSaku a side couple, but I dunno...it'll seem dumb because Sasuke is still in the team and all. What do you guys think?

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Posted 25 January 2009 - 08:55 AM

well If ya want to write it and can write it decent, go for it. Also you could have narusaku as a side pairing but as I see it, it would be better as like some hints of her seeing him for the guy he is instead of just being like he is an idiot.

but yea many people here like shikatema as far as i know.
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Posted 25 January 2009 - 05:20 PM

Nothing Says you cant do both couples. Youd focus on Shika and temari of course jsut make sure to throw in the appropriate side blurbs about Naruto and Sakura knowing each other better, and Her seeing him as more than he is.

Jsut write the story you want to write.
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Posted 26 January 2009 - 05:50 AM

Alright.




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