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[Bolt]

Sorry if this is in the wrong section. I just want to spam my original story here real quick.

WARNING: This story does contain violence and reference to mature situations. Nothing too graphic I hope, but read with caution.

Azrale Seraph: The After I would greatly apperciate any reviews and advice on how to get better. Thanks.


Edit: Link fixed.

Edited by Bolt, 06 November 2008 - 07:59 AM.

[peanutbutter126]

Hey Bolt, your link seems to be inaccessible; the error page keeps coming up. Do you think you could try posting it again? The title sounds good and I wanna read!

EDIT: Actually, I found the story after I searched on Google. It looks good already. Maybe you should allow anonymous reviews because I don't have an account on FictionPress and can't review without making one.

If anyone wants to read Bolt's awesome story, here's the working link: Azrale Seraph: The After

Edited by peanutbutter126, 01 November 2008 - 07:30 AM.

[Ani]

I really like this story so far. Pretty funny, too.

Keep it up, Bolt! :thumbs:

[Bolt]

Thank you for the support and a new chapter is up! Warning it's a little mature so read with caution.