I have some lineart, that I'm not to sure about. I would LOVE if someone would give me their take on it. Its a NaruSaku picture, that I HOPE on titling "Lean On Me".
Warning! Large file! /maybe/
Feel free to post your lineart!
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Started by Amii, Aug 20 2007 03:15 AM
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 03:15 AM
If you're the type of artist that wants opinions on your lineart, here's the place to post! It's always nice to have opinions, good ones, bad ones, or constructive crit BEFORE you start on the final result! Dont be afraid!
I have some lineart, that I'm not to sure about. I would LOVE if someone would give me their take on it. Its a NaruSaku picture, that I HOPE on titling "Lean On Me".
Warning! Large file! /maybe/
Feel free to post your lineart!
I have some lineart, that I'm not to sure about. I would LOVE if someone would give me their take on it. Its a NaruSaku picture, that I HOPE on titling "Lean On Me".
Warning! Large file! /maybe/
Feel free to post your lineart!
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 09:00 PM
Thats a very good idea Momo 
I am new to lineart as well and just starting to draw it so i am just like you full with doubts of how to colour them 
you use photoshop to colour it? i do and stil not sure how to colour it very well. Anyway i will post some of my lineart later Bye XxXx Ky
I am new to lineart as well and just starting to draw it so i am just like you full with doubts of how to colour them you use photoshop to colour it? i do and stil not sure how to colour it very well. Anyway i will post some of my lineart later Bye XxXx Ky
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 10:34 PM
That looks really nice! =D But you should round your lines some more near the knuckles and on the eyes. I don't know if you know how to do it but to make a really nice curve I just do:
Make a line with the pen tool and then click on the middle of it, making a point. I then HOLD down CTRL while dragging it with my mouse.
It makes a very smooth curve instead of trying to pull it by hand. xD
Make a line with the pen tool and then click on the middle of it, making a point. I then HOLD down CTRL while dragging it with my mouse.
It makes a very smooth curve instead of trying to pull it by hand. xD
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 11:11 PM
QUOTE (SakuDotz @ Aug 20 2007, 10:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That looks really nice! =D But you should round your lines some more near the knuckles and on the eyes. I don't know if you know how to do it but to make a really nice curve I just do:
Make a line with the pen tool and then click on the middle of it, making a point. I then HOLD down CTRL while dragging it with my mouse.
It makes a very smooth curve instead of trying to pull it by hand. xD
Make a line with the pen tool and then click on the middle of it, making a point. I then HOLD down CTRL while dragging it with my mouse.
It makes a very smooth curve instead of trying to pull it by hand. xD
Thanks SakuDotz! I'll keep that in mind.
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Thats a very good idea Momo I am new to lineart as well and just starting to draw it so i am just like you full with doubts of how to colour them you use photoshop to colour it? i do and stil not sure how to colour it very well. Anyway i will post some of my lineart later Bye XxXx Ky
Yeah, I use photoshop, for both color and lineart. The only thing I can say is really practice. Its annoying when all the advice you get is to practice, but practice does make perfect.
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 11:23 PM
Wow, this looks really nice! :thumbs:
You've got talent. Just listen to all the pros out here *points to sakudotz
* and then you'll get even better
And Naruto kinda looks like Ichigo from bleach on the pic
You've got talent. Just listen to all the pros out here *points to sakudotz
* and then you'll get even better And Naruto kinda looks like Ichigo from bleach on the pic
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 11:56 PM
QUOTE (SakuNaruLover @ Aug 20 2007, 07:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow, this looks really nice! :thumbs:
You've got talent. Just listen to all the pros out here *points to sakudotz * and then you'll get even better
And Naruto kinda looks like Ichigo from bleach on the pic
You've got talent. Just listen to all the pros out here *points to sakudotz
* and then you'll get even better And Naruto kinda looks like Ichigo from bleach on the pic
IM A PROOOO. Hell yeah.
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 01:29 AM
QUOTE (SakuNaruLover @ Aug 20 2007, 11:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
And Naruto kinda looks like Ichigo from bleach on the pic
D:!!!!
I know!
And it stinks, because I can't change it now.
But...
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I can always use the excuse that they look a like anyway?
^^;
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Posted 21 August 2007 - 09:37 AM
QUOTE (Momo @ Aug 21 2007, 03:29 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
D:!!!!
I know!
And it stinks, because I can't change it now.
But...
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I can always use the excuse that they look a like anyway?
^^;
I know!
And it stinks, because I can't change it now.
But...
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I can always use the excuse that they look a like anyway?
^^;
lol, I didn't mean it in a bad way, you know
He looks great
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Posted 27 October 2008 - 05:52 AM
The art is very romantic. there is a sense of love for narusaku :rolleyes:
harhar. It's me Power-J. do u remember me ^^;
harhar. It's me Power-J. do u remember me ^^;
Art is a BANG!
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Posted 27 October 2008 - 05:56 AM
wow never new about it. Good job
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 08:08 AM
Nice picture, Amii - looks good already! I might put up one of my linearts once I'm done so I can get some opinions...
Okay, here's 'constructive criticism': Sakura's body (shoulders, midriff) looks just a bit too small since her head seems to larger than them and since Naruto is sitting taller than her it makes her look very skinny and tiny. But hey, that's just my opinion and I'm no pro. Just listen to SakuDotz!
Okay, here's 'constructive criticism': Sakura's body (shoulders, midriff) looks just a bit too small since her head seems to larger than them and since Naruto is sitting taller than her it makes her look very skinny and tiny. But hey, that's just my opinion and I'm no pro. Just listen to SakuDotz!
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 08:21 AM
QUOTE (peanutbutter126 @ Oct 31 2008, 07:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice picture, Amii - looks good already! I might put up one of my linearts once I'm done so I can get some opinions...
Okay, here's 'constructive criticism': Sakura's body (shoulders, midriff) looks just a bit too small since her head seems to larger than them and since Naruto is sitting taller than her it makes her look very skinny and tiny. But hey, that's just my opinion and I'm no pro. Just listen to SakuDotz!
Okay, here's 'constructive criticism': Sakura's body (shoulders, midriff) looks just a bit too small since her head seems to larger than them and since Naruto is sitting taller than her it makes her look very skinny and tiny. But hey, that's just my opinion and I'm no pro. Just listen to SakuDotz!
I agree, the proportion of Sakura's Head/body picture is kinda strange, seeing that the body seem really thin while the head is huge.
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