Well, imo I would agree Kishi HAS made Shikamaru quite prominent. He's often the leader of sorts of the Rookies, and to be honest, clearly portrayed as the most adult of the Rookies- his acknowledgement that they had to accept that Sasuke was beyond redemption, how he took his father and Asuma's deaths. I'm okay with it, because I like that Shikamaru has been developed to that extent he is this sort of de facto leader. This is of course my pov, and I understand why you might be disappointed if you envisioned more literal teamwork and character interactions.
No, I envisioned Shikamaru to be the logic behind the emotional mess that is Naruto. The guy who reminds Naruto about reality and how harsh it can be while maintaining the idea that nothing is ever written in stone. Kishi has said that Shikamaru was going to play a bigger role and that he was going to be Naruto's right hand man. So far, he has done no such thing. Yeah he has kept the army together and faced is own problems, but right-hand man was supposed to be for Shikamaru's development, but for Naruto's
I myself have a right-hand man. I sometimes call him my wing man because he has helped me on more occasions than ever. He kept me grounded on earth and helped me see reality when I couldn't. That's a right-hand man by my definition and Shikmaru has done no such thing.
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I respectly disagree with the idea that Naruto's lesson has been recycled over and over. When Naruto was younger, a lot of it was about him not giving up despite the odds against him. IMO this most recent example, it is Naruto having to accept that he shouldn't be feeling that the burden is entirely on him to protect his friends- that it's a two-way thing, his friends are also willing to protect him, and that if they die doing so, he shouldn't feel he has 'failed' them. Naruto, imo, is still pretty idealistic. He has never seen the kind of war Kakashi and Jiraiya have, where you have to accept that some of your friends might die. I think there is a huge difference between hearing your friend has died and actually seeing them die right in front of you, especially if they sacrificed themselves to protect you- so I don't think Naruto's momentary shock was entirely unreasonable.
It would have been fine except he has been told several times. How many people have told him that he wasn't alone in this fight? How many have told him to not ignore his friends and to realize that he wasn't the only one fighting? How many times was this message written in the pages and said in many different variations with the same message over and over? The last time this message was brought up it was with Itachi which happened, if by manga time standards, was not, but a day or two ago
What next? Sasuke is going to die and Sakura is going to cheer him up saying the same thing over again? Even Neji before he died said it to him and he was still willing to give up to Obito if Hinata didn't stop him. This, this was just sloppy. There could have been more clever ways with more important characters to give the greater impact and at better moments in time. Even if Kishi had to do this. Even if he had to keep making Naruto ignorant to the truth because he refuses to listen, there were better ways to do it.
The shock was not was unreasonable, but the fact that he gave up hope like that. Neji's dying words were basically to never lose hope and that everyone makes their own choices. Naruto couldn't even listen to that. He couldn't even listen to his friend's dying words and take them to heart. THAT is insulting. Naruto just didn't even listen.
Naruto getting upset is a normal response. Naruto losing hope even when his dying friend told him not to is crap and I don't buy it. It's forced.
Is that how stupid Naruto is? You have to wait till someone dies before it finally clicks? And then he had to be reminded AGAIN about everything everyone has done for him. Come on. Really? How many more times must Naruto be reminded that he is not alone? Now it just feels forced.
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It's Naruto's high expectations that he would 'never go back on his words'- in this case, protecting his friends. When Neji died, I think Naruto felt he really failed on his nindo there (not just the idea of never giving up, but of always managing to do what he promised.)
I would think he got this message when he fought Pein to be honest. Seeing how almost everyone died. Naruto didn't know Nagato could bring everyone back. He didn't know that at all and Kakashi even died. Did he give up hope there? No. That's is what makes this hard to believe, because Kakashi wasn't killed in front of him it is not so bad? See, if it were me I would not feel hopelessness from my friend dying. I would be angry and upset, but I wouldn't give up like that. If my dying friend told me to never give up and keep fighting, I wouldn't just give up like that.
Every time I think Naruto makes progress, he is constantly being pushed back two steps to a point where like everything everyone has told him was ignored. He doesn't listen. And this time it wasn't to prove a point or make Naruto practice what he preaches. This time, it was all about giving Hinata development. I can see no other reason than to force more development on Hinata which is sad to think that that is what it takes to give this character to push forward.
To me, this is what it feels like. It feels like Naruto just doesn't learn until it is too late and this chapter was just so Hinata could get development at a high cost.
Naruto's character has been like that during part 2, he breaks down and someone else has to bring him back, compared to his part 1 self he really looks weak he's been given pep talks by the whole Naruto's cast. Lastly it was Itachi the walking contradiction who gave him his lesson and when I read it I couldn't stop laughing but I admit Kishimoto surpassed himself with this chapter Hinata the weakest character who has no character development and whose only toughts concerns Naruto Kun is suddenly ths fount of wisdom and gives him a new lesson, well not really new but you catch my drift, it is forced and contrived I can ony laugh but I was execpting something like that because Naruto's character are so inconsistent , they are not the driving force of the plot, they are puppet of the plot whatever seems convenient at the time will force these characters to act accordingly even if it seems OOC , compared to part 1 the characters make no sense.
That's not good writing in my opinion. If you have to keep using the same techniques over and over again to get some dramatic response out of someone, then you lose the "shock and awe" feeling.
Naruto should have been wiser around the Pein Arc when more important and closer people to him actually did die.
I think Yahtzee said it best when he talked about MW2: Remember the shock and awe we got when the nuke exploded? Not only does this happen in MW2, it happens three times. You lose the "shock" from the shock and awe when it feels like all you're doing is repeating it.
Edited by James S Cassidy, 28 December 2012 - 03:05 PM.